All the Troubles in the World Start from Here

There is nothing wrong with the chalk, and there is nothing wrong with the writing of the story, but there is something wrong with my mentality. Some astringent plots cannot be described in detail, but they can be described. Be bolder, and then don't say something about your qualities, you are sincere, your pure eyes are meaningless, it's too hypocritical. It's all men who always say this and it's boring. You know what people want to see, don't be pretentious.

You won't kill someone to silence them if you offend them. Do you know who the Ding family is? Idiot! ! !

I feel that the protagonist is so stupid (~_~;). The gold in the wasteland world can be exchanged for Hong Kong cash. It is not necessary to use pigs, cows and sheep to collect living animals in batches with cash. Rats can also be collected. The living animals are fed to gold-eating insects, and there is no need to worry about betrayal. The power belongs to oneself. With the insect swarm, materials in the wasteland can be collected faster. If there are enough bugs, there is no need to worry about the underworld and the police. It is not difficult for ten million bugs to eat up all the British soldiers and policemen in Hong Kong in one night. Who would know that you control the insect swarm.

It was better in the early stage, but I have to go to a big era!

Good guy, luckily I have the habit of reading the comment section first, otherwise I wouldn't even know that the author is a ***. Are you waiting for him to kill you without eradicating the roots? The author also said in the comment area that if he had the ability to time travel, he would be entertained by others. I was really convinced. Now that the protagonist has no ability, he starts to be ambitious and underhanded? This book is absolutely amazing.

Lin Jiu was not the only disciple of Maoshan, and the status of Taoist priests in the Republic of China was not high. As long as he was willing to spend money, why couldn't he become a disciple? If you insist on becoming a disciple of a rigid person, then what else is wrong with you? . . .

It looked good at first, but it was really too much in my childhood. You have to develop the main world, whether it is economic development, fame, power, or your own strength. All the planes in the world can only be resource banks. Don't be too tired just because of the Ding family. You are a bad guy.

I just watched the first picture and couldn't stand it anymore, it was so stupid. I'm speechless if I don't look at my reputation and seek someone's apprenticeship. Which prestigious family would accept someone like you?

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the comment section, I saw the author's reply to Ding's comment. It was so funny. The author is also a talented person. You can read it. Your brain circuit will really make you doubt your life. He has no abilities or IQ and has not developed yet. The protagonist looks down on this and that. He really treats himself like a green onion. I admire him.

Didn't we form a legion in the Republic of China? Otherwise, the protagonist's home would be stolen as soon as he left.

It feels like a mess. If I mainly write about the main world, I can change the subsequent time travel to soul travel to gain knowledge.

The protagonist... Although you are not required to be handsome, you deliberately made the protagonist look ugly. The key is that the protagonist looks normal at the beginning, and then you can't change it back to the ugly face of a bastard, right? Deliberately irritating people

All the attributes of the protagonist, especially intelligence, are like a super-body whose brain is developed to 100%, making him invincible.

Mr. Shi is not very good-looking, how can he capture the heroine?

Why did everyone end up in the world of Japanese comics? The style of painting has changed too much, and my writing skills are not good. Goodbye.

If you don't know whether it's dangerous or not, then you just wear it casually without being mature enough. Are you not a human being?

Why didn't I kill Uncle Jiu at the beginning 🙂

To be honest, I can't understand it. I just remember that there is a big black mole on the pig's foot and a big black hair!

I think the author's primary goal now is to figure out which direction he wants to take. If it's just for fun, that's fine. Just be happy. If you want to write well, you have to think carefully about how to improve yourself. As far as I'm concerned, the current problems are: The language is frivolous. Before the protagonist becomes invincible, he is a little too arrogant and takes the initiative to call his enemies to provoke. The explanatory words are a bit explanatory. If there are too many, sometimes it will disrupt the rhythm of the writing. The protagonist has no goals. As a person who can travel through the heavens, he first relies on the system, so he must describe the system and explore the system functions. There is too little written here. For example, the protagonist should study how to trigger the task. Let me talk about what I find interesting: The first is the spiritual insect, and then it turns into a swarm of insects. Can the insect swarm increase its strength and corrosion ability by swallowing metal? Can a swarm of insects eat a lot to increase their numbers? If there are enough of them, can they turn into mist and fill the surroundings to help them take damage and block bullets? These can all be dug deeper. Secondly, the tasks in the system are not mandatory and there is no punishment. The protagonist has a lot of freedom. I like this very much. The protagonist can choose not to do tasks for his own benefit. I think it is well written. Also, it is better to write down the task rewards first and let the protagonist weigh the pros and cons. This is more reasonable.

The first two or three worlds are good, but the back world planes have never been heard of, and I can't even watch them. There is no sense of immersion. . .

A little care is not a sign of respect. Come on, author, may you become a god. Two updates a day, don't interrupt!

What I want to say is, hurry up and update quickly, I'll finish reading it in a few hours