Immortality Martial Arts: I Have a Xuanshui Snake Clone

It is a Gou Daoliu book that suits my taste very well A few thoughts 1. The title of this book is really good. If I didn't really want to read it, I wouldn't have clicked it in. I almost missed a book that suits my appetite. 2. There are too many dreams. Of course, the author may be digging holes, but it is still a bit too much. 3. The amount of resources obtained is too large. It may be that the author wants to engage in a more macro-scale fight for hegemony, but the description of resources is not enough. 4. There are not enough conflicts, mainly due to the lack of clone battles, which are too tools. Are all the geniuses kind and gentle? 5. It is not macroscopic enough. Is there any dispute between the main sect and other sects? Even if there is a certain amount of power, the characters in the sect that appear are not grand enough. Although the author's world view is grand, it is almost meaningless when it comes to writing. The last point is that the lifespan is raised too high, and the gap between it and the set age threshold of the emperor is too large. With the magical power that the entire lifespan will perish together, the lifespan setting is meaningful and has the motivation to obtain it. Otherwise, it seems a bit forced now In general, the immortal grass above food and grass has not yet arrived.

I'm really convinced by this crappy novel. I'm struggling from beginning to end. Even though I'm invincible, I'm still struggling. It doesn't make me feel any better.

The author should dig deeper into the protagonist's character, it's too hypocritical and contrived. From the beginning to the end, everyone was kind to him when he was weak, and he repaid them with similar small favors when he grew up. If nothing else, Le Congtian is just a tool man. He has been a friend for decades. If he gives birth to a child and takes the protagonist as his adoptive husband, is he following the trend? He also allowed his younger brother to mock him, haha! After the protagonist gains momentum, everyone who approaches him is a snobbery! Well, Huang Shanshan, you accepted investment from your father when you were weak, and you blame Le Congtian for bringing her to see you. Then Zhang Fan has become your little brother and is convinced, so he has to jump out and challenge you when you become the son of destiny? Does it feel good to write like this or is it just pretentious? The book is a good book, and the plot and progression of the story are very good, but the main character is neither positive nor negative, hypocritical, delicate, and contrived. Everything is fine, but people's hearts are too bad, and they are very angry! The story kept me watching for more than half of it, and the protagonist's behavior behind it made me really unable to follow it.

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Do you have any misunderstandings about Gou Dao? Gou Dao is someone who does not stand out and does not seek the limelight. He will eradicate the root of any problem. If you don't use a good weapon to kill someone with a borrowed knife, aren't you afraid that he will be killed in reverse? This is forcing oneself to suppress one's intelligence and being irresponsible for one's own life. They don't even feel good about you, and they want to kill you if they feel even the slightest bit bad about you. You are a Taliban traveler, Mai. You don't feel anything when you read it. You kill people at every turn, and you don't even feel that you have the outlook on life and values ​​that a normal person would have if he traveled through a few days and decades.

The biggest highlight of the article is that the protagonist's avatar wears a vest, which sets requirements for the personality of each avatar. The plot emotions brought by different identities, personalities and experiences are particularly attractive. But in the latest chapter, has Bo Qing's character collapsed? He also laughed and made other martial saints laugh with his shocking words. . . . When I saw this, I almost picked up the knife and cursed him for being possessed by a monster. Seriously, isn't the ruthless setting a cool guy with a cold face and a fierce fighting spirit? Want to cry.

Now this plot has been stuck at a stage. The dormant growth of the demon body cannot be changed, nor can Bo Qingzhan's high concerns be changed. The most critical main body is the time for sharpness (under the suppression of the Rebellion Holy Formation). Tang Tianlong was assassinated by the demon clan. Didn't the Daxuan Dynasty want to frame Hong Yuan's main body? The main body also learned the quasi-emperor method given by Fengyuan Great Sage. Isn't this all set up for the conflict? Let's start wearing special clothes and killing. Under the Rebellion Holy Formation, Hong Yuan I ruled the roost, with one man and ten thousand troops (bees) overwhelming the Daxuan Dynasty. Put it on! Fire it up! The boring transition period will only make more people choose to keep books, and it would be too embarrassing to keep them to death.

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I don't know why the author deliberately overpowers the protagonist even though it's just a novice and the external hexagrams are written so well.

Come on, author! I have been following this book "The Martial Arts of Immortality: I Have a Black Water Snake Clone". The character of the protagonist in this book is perfect, but there is no heroine. I hope she can add it in the future.

The early stage was fine, but the later stage was a mess. He's a clone, he's a Gu, he's a blacksmith, he's a swordsman, he's a waterman, he doesn't even know what he's majoring in.

It's enough to write only one clone and proficiency panel, there is no priority. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is hard to describe in one sentence, and he has no personal charm at all. As a reader, I want to step on him a few times. . .

For someone who has not read Gu's real-life novels, what does a practitioner of Gu have to do with Gu? Gu is generally associated with poisonous insects, and there is a strong sense of dissonance between you and Kung Fu, especially when the supporting characters don't use any Kung Fu and Gu alone. Kung Fu is just Kung Fu, and voodoo is just voodoo. The voodoo technique is an external object, while the martial art is an internal technique. The combination of the two is not a voodoo, but a spell.

Among the bunch of clones, Xuanshui Snake no longer stands out, and it makes me feel uncomfortable all over.

Hahaha

I bought a ticket to go swimming in the swimming pool, but the boss kept adding water to the pool. Now it is almost as big as a lake. What should I do? If I add more water, I will not be able to swim to the shore.

I really can't hold on! It's not some other fake thing! Senior brother will never be a sage again! ! Good life!

To be honest, it's so confusing that I don't have the memory to read it anymore. It's become weird since the appearance of Kung Fu Gu. I've seen some of Gu's real people and it's like this. Those who haven't seen it are probably just confused. There is a kind of twisted feeling between the lines. The more you read, the less immersive you feel, and the more stitched it feels.

This is because the demon body's alternative enlightenment is a refreshing start, and various foreshadowings are slowly revealed, including Han Jiu Ming, Emperor Long Yang's back-up plan, and Eternal Green Lotus. I didn't expect that the plot would be filled with crazy information at first, and I would be repaid every time I asked for leave, and then fast forward, and suddenly a few chapters of various characters would die of old age, and then I would be told that it was about to end.

"The seeds of a big dream are awesome. Long Aotian comes to provoke Hong Yuan, and they fight to a draw. Long Aotian runs away, explodes, and speaks cruel words. Afterwards, Hong Yuan is incompetent and furious. If it weren't for the overall situation, I would crush you to death." I suggest you write this kind of plot with incompetence and rage a few more times. There are still too many readers. If you don't optimize it, how can you make money?

After finishing the defense, they are all invincible. Pig's trotters are still behind the scenes. They don't go to show themselves at this time. I am convinced. In the end, only three people knew that they were still demons. There was no reincarnation master and no beloved relatives and friends were resurrected. It was a bit confusing.

What can I say about the later stage? I feel like it was a bit lacking. The author wanted to write about the war between the two clans but lacked writing skills. He also delayed writing about the passage of time from the perspective of the immortal, so it seemed watery. To be honest, it is not as good as the resurrection of the nine emperors of the human race. The great emperors of each era return to fight, and then introduce the fairy kings and emperors of the fairy world. It seems cliché, but the routine is not easy to use. Now it feels like playing a house. This is not how the author Gou Dao writes, or the novel cannot be written like Gou Dao, there must be waves. , Only the protagonist can stimulate the reader's emotions, and the demon body is pushed aside. I really don't have a feeling for some enemies who are not enlightened people. The feeling of Gu and the sky are not written. I suggest the author change the subsequent plot. Don't be afraid of the increase in combat power and it is difficult to control. Nowadays, combat power is discussed everywhere. Even the combat power of a single universe is not called fantasy.

A bunch of trainees scolded, did the author offend someone? A big tree attracts the wind? Are the people who scolded Master Gu back then coming?

Author, I remember that you took leave until mid-May and you owed twenty-six chapters. When will you be able to play again? („ಡωಡ„)

This book feels like it's still lacking in promotion. Although it is finished now, but for some old bookworms, it is completely fattening. It is recommended that the author find more accounts 😏, add more reader groups, and recommend more books in the group. Recommend more in Tieba and Zhihu, it's just a matter of moving your fingers. Anyway, as far as I know, some moderately successful authors are covered with vests at the beginning of the early stage, recommended ads are flying around 😏😏 it often happens that four or five groups send out recommendations in bulk

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