The Killer's Retirement Ke Xue Documentary

The biggest problem at the moment is that the protagonist is not strong enough. Does the author understand that Yu Rang is famous for his chivalry and righteousness? The worst sword, the worst martial arts, and the stupidest plan - Yu Rang was the best person of that era! I believe that I chose this codename to reflect the protagonist's sentimental and righteous characteristics But it's still because he's not strong enough! The beginning does not make people feel strong enough. Is John Witness strong? He is very strong. From the beginning to the end, he fights with blood and fists. Being strong requires a life, but in the world of Conan, it is not too strong. The ceiling in Conan world is so high: demolishing buildings with bare hands, predicting and dodging bullets, 1V50 is common. Is this better than the protagonist? Is it really average? At best, he is stronger than John. What makes him stronger? He is younger than John Final question The problem is that he is not strong enough and has a dog-licking style. It is not a problem. It is called Heguang Tongchen. He goes deep into the masses. The protagonist who is strong to the limit is still a master even if he is licking people. Because he is strong enough, he can overturn the table and take over the game by himself at any time. The game ends. Readers will only want to see when he twists the corner of his mouth. The Dragon King returns. Although it is terrible, it works What kind of licking can portray such intensity? That's called Fan'er! It's style!

After reading the first 6 chapters, everyone has been leaving comments about the protagonist licking. I feel that the main reason is the focus of the description. The male protagonist's collapse and defense came too easily, and the female protagonist's pain and struggle were not written out. The length of the descriptions of the two perspectives should be swapped. The confrontation and encounter between the two should be avoided in the early stage, leaving some regret and suspense. Especially now that the writing power is not enough, and then the large-scale description is focused on the pain or confusion of the heroine, it will have a pleasant feeling like chasing her husband in the crematorium later. The collapse of the male protagonist can be hidden through small details. For example, when we were together and asked to quit smoking, the hero always smiled and said he would do it next time. As a result, we broke up and quit smoking, just because I didn't want to think about the scene where she was noisy about quitting smoking. Or, add a setting. The heroine loves to drink lemonade and always has lemons at home, but the hero doesn't like the sour taste and never drinks it. Now he can peel lemons and eat them as oranges without expression, just because he is greedy for the taste of lemons and feels like her. I have to say that the female authors of female videos are really good at describing these details. Before the reader becomes disgusted with the wife/husband chaser, torture him first to reduce the reader's disgust. The protagonist should look calm and relaxed, but inside he is hysterical and crazy. It just makes people feel like it's a two-way rush between two guys who don't speak clearly. The scene of the confrontation and quarrel at home was really too bloody, and I felt that many people abandoned the book, especially starting here. I like a quiet and silent farewell, with regrets, regrets, memories, and blank space, rather than a quarrel with each other and an embarrassing exit. In the end, I remember it was a quarrel with claws and claws, a tearing with no bottom line, leaving readers with only the feeling of wanting to kick the author's feet. In the end, I want to say goodbye like this. When Judy came in, she saw the house that was all wrapped up and ready for the long journey. When she walked to the courtyard, she saw warm steak under a candlelight dinner, and their songs were playing in her ears. She was so stunned that she didn't notice the roar of the car engine outside. She waited quietly all night. The food goes from hot to cold, the candles burn out, and the sun rises. I finally understood that the person I was waiting for would not appear again, so I staggered and chose to leave in despair. I walked to the shoe cabinet at the door and looked at a notebook that the owner had forgotten to take away. When I opened it, it was a notebook with pig's feet. On what day of the month are the vegetables, fruits, flowers, and anniversaries my wife asked me to buy? Trivial and full of life, I smiled when I looked at her, remembering those days. Slowly turning to the last page of notes, the content is very simple. It contains the names, purpose, and reasons of all the FBI people who participated in this operation. Under her and Akai Shuichi's names, she drew a small haircut and wrote "Lover" (this time can make her collapse) And a man who could observe the entire roof of the house left, leaving nothing behind except cigarette butts on the ground and loneliness.

Is it an illusion? It feels like the protagonist has been deceived like a licking dog and still does this?

From the looks of it, I rather like the protagonist and Sister Bei. The mutual redemption of two people walking in the dark is much easier than the protagonist and Judy. . .

I had a relationship with Sister Bei and slipped away... I just want to see a pure love scene where Judy pursues her husband at the crematorium.

All I can say is that the main character didn't suit my sentimental outlook, so I read the eleventh chapter and canceled it. Putting myself into the situation, my approach is to break it off with a clean break. I know that my wife came prepared and she once liked someone else. I have become a stupid clown. My greatest tolerance is to break it off with a clean break. As a result, the character of the dog-licker is affectionate and affectionate. Killer, even the extremes of deep love and hatred are better than this kind of dog-licker character.

I like this plot so much! I don't know why so many people in the comment area shout "lick", which is ridiculous. Only single arrows, unilaterally making ineffective efforts that the other party does not want/do not care about are called "licking". These two obviously have each other in their hearts! It's just a matter of saying that one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer.

There are quite a few protagonists in Ke Xue's fan fiction who are killers, and this is the first time I've seen the world of John Wick. The handling of emotions is not particularly good. There is a suspicion of slight licking, but it can be seen that the author's own thoughts are there. After all, who has never stumbled in love? Most of the differences in status are sadomasochism. The latest chapters have reduced the number of Judy's appearances. Personally, I think the difficulty of this book is how a retired killer can match up with a character like Conan. The protagonist cannot only appear in the main plot, so what should we do in the daily life where the protagonist can participate? Overall, it's pretty good and worth a wait and see.

Since the protagonist arrived in Yoneka Town, he no longer has the personality of a top killer, and he can't even perform well in his profession... Then the author used the deceptive saying "because of contact with Conan, he became esoteric" to explain it. If it is because of the so-called "becoming esoteric", then this is completely against the principles of the novel A character suddenly changes a lot, but without any reason, is it reasonable? Just because of the so-called [Ke Xue]? Or does the author just want to write a nonsensical and funny novel that does not require a reason?

The heroine herself chose to leave. If the hero hadn't been strong, what would have been the result? Also love, twist love. Not licking?

Sorry, I didn't hold on and watched it. I watched fifty or sixty pictures, but your emotional scenes were too abrupt. According to my feeling, if you want to show it like it is now, you need to give it at least a few more conflicts. Now there is nothing. The male protagonist behaves like a licking dog. They have been separated for several years. Do you think it is making wine? Does it get better with time? As they say, the author only moved yourself

Author, I'm sorry, I don't like this kind of emotional drama, it's too protracted. See you later.

The author may have forgotten something, Judy is a love brain

Would the FBI be afraid of a killer whose identity was revealed? What a joke

Come on, author, now if the protagonist is nice to the female character, she will be criticized, just get used to it.

A killer's instinct is to put down his guard and wait for him. When he meets someone, the two get along harmoniously, and they want to live a peaceful life in retirement. Judy falls in love with him, but she really deceives him. Regardless of whether the undercover Judy really falls in love with him, it completely crushes the beautiful bridge of a killer who returns to peace. I really look forward to having someone who has a dark side or past with the male protagonist, and supporting life, activities, and actions together. (Actually, I saw that Sister Bei was criticized in other comments, which is very reasonable), and I feel that if that person was Judy, the front would collapse! ! ! At that time, we couldn't just drop the character of Judy, who would be a very good supporting female character (purely my personal feeling).        ，，（）？ I just read the beginning, continue to read the review

The introduction is a bit attractive, I'll take a look at it first, I hope it's not like trying to get ahead of others and pretending to be cool.

I read in the comments that there is Sister Bei, but I haven't read the book yet. I don't really want to read the Judy part. I'll wait until the author writes about sister Bei and the protagonist's mutual redemption. I'll give it a try and call me when there are more Sister Bei plots.

The main character is a pure lovebird and must not be a stud 😭😭😭 Please, can I give you the tickets?

Let me tell you, this book has not been updated for such a long time. It is not that it has been cut off, but that the author is a professional seaman, and it takes a long time to go out on the ship. In addition, there is no Internet on the ship, and there is only an occasional Internet connection, so the update is very slow.

Did the author's surprise come before tomorrow?