Fighting for Supremacy Among All Races: I Build the Divine Dynasty with Stars

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The writing is good, and overall it seems to be well written, but I don't know if the plot will drag out.

As a novice, the writing is okay, but there are a lot of typos. I suggest the author to read it himself. The names of the masters in Chapter 47 and Chapter 6 are also different, which is not rigorous enough.

It's okay, but with a population of nearly 200 million, it's a bit unreasonable for you to have an army of 200,000, right?

I want to watch a war taking over territory, a rocket going to space, not those things that are there and not, and I don't want a heroine. What I want to watch is the protagonist, not the protagonist's son.

The twenty-eight constellations correspond to the twenty-eight generals on the cloud platform, and the protagonist corresponds to Liu Xiuduo. The author's setting can be simpler. The beginning is chaotic, and the middle and later stages are even more chaotic, so it is better to be simple at the beginning, without pushing forward, farming and development, and the protagonist leads the twenty-eight generals to calm down the troubled times.

🙂🙂Good looking.

I don't know why, but everyone who writes about hegemony has a common problem: they always resort to conquering in person.

Although the author is writing fantasy, at least let's look at how those historical masters wrote about the court. After reading a few chapters, the opening court gave me a feeling of playing house. Although the author's writing is good, I felt a bit awkward while reading it.

When writing about the country, it is recommended to focus on development. Personal force can be strong, but don't write too exaggeratedly. Too exaggerated will make the army useless. You can write something that can suppress the masters. Personal force cannot be superior to the army. It depends on the situation. Also, the supporting characters should not be written too brainlessly, otherwise it will become a cool article and useless. Enemy recommendation and strategy are also very important. Otherwise, if the national strength and strong men increase too quickly, they will become a living target for others. After all, if you have spies, others will also have spies, and others are stronger than you. A family that can exist for a long time will definitely not be simple in the country. After all, the fantasy world lasts for a long time, and those smart and powerful people will not choose to mess around when choosing successors.

You can leave a message if you have any ideas about the plot, characters, spiritual treasures, or spiritual mines you want. I will check it out and arrange it as much as possible. I also hope that all readers will actively contribute.

I like this kind of subject matter, but there are too few of them. Let's add bookshelves first.

To be honest, very few people will read these twenty chapters of yours. Too few.

I've read Chapter 15 so far and I'm really dumbfounded. It was clearly written as an article about fighting for hegemony. More than 20 cavalrymen died in front just to highlight the cavalrymen's fear of death? Should you encounter the opposite clan leader or do you want to go 1v1 and then kill him over the next level? I just don't understand. It seems that there is no point in leading troops. In future fights, it is better to just rank up with people from high-level realms and go up alone. I'm really speechless. A book about hegemony is useless if the soldiers are too high. You might as well not write. Just write about high-level warriors

Too slow, please update more, Chapter 100 is Zai 😊😊