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Just read the beginning, after defeating and driving away the demi-humans, the empire divided these six nobles into monitoring and guarding against the remaining demi-humans. Then the genius of the protagonist's senior family thought that the border nobles as a whole suffered too much from the conflict with the aliens, so it was better to pay tribute. Then we really made peace with the demi-humans. When the other five colleagues saw it, someone was raping me and I will kill you. Then the protagonist's senior simply couldn't stop, pretending to negotiate first, and then directly joined forces with the demi-humans to kill his colleagues. And then the protagonist's family was not killed as a traitor, but was promoted??? Note that the empire had not been established for a long time at this time and was still on the rise of being invincible.

I see another author who can't write for love. In fact, I haven't read a novel for a long time. Super long novels are updated 1-2 times a day based on the starting point. The reward requires additional updates. The writer must be dedicated to this, that is, he must leave his job and write novels exclusively. The reader must also have time. If the work is busy and life is stressful, he really does not have the energy or money to read super long articles. Throughout the starting point, it can be seen with the naked eye that there are fewer and fewer new authors. One is the poor economic environment, and the other is the daily update rules, which are detrimental to the writing of new authors. One is money, because I am out of work and have no other source of income. You can only give up what you want to write and choose "popular" subjects (hot, often such subjects can attract money, alternative demand determines supply and demand, demand-led market), but if you can wait for the direction of your writing to become profitable, it is difficult. There are many people who will die if they write popular but homogeneous. And having to update it every day is too much of a challenge to the body and brain. I heard that many authors of popular books have to go to the hospital several times after writing a book. In short, there are few new authors and few people persist. In fact, the bonus period for super-long novels has passed. I always feel that weekly novels will come back again in the future. It depends on how it is operated.

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Fantasy is too niche and no one reads it, so it's better to write history

From history to fantasy, the span is quite wide.

I hope to add more small climaxes to the plot, improve the pacing problem, and optimize the reading experience. Western fantasy itself suffers in this aspect For example, why is Warhammer fan fiction so good? Isn't it just that small bosses provide small climaxes in conjunction with the charm of the appropriate characters? Is this a road trip in the early stages of the book? There is a battle, but there is no small climax. The charm of the character is just a hint. The character image is sketched out, but it did not attract me. It gives people a feeling that I am willing to keep reading just for the next appearance of this character. You write Shuchen. The Prime Minister is such a character. Zheng Pu's incidents are a climax Why is it in this book!!!!!!!! To be honest, the writing is very good and the writing style is very comfortable to read. It is just like going to a restaurant to eat and the service is very good. But the most important thing is that the rhythm of serving food is messy. No matter how delicious the pre-dinner snacks are, it is not as good as serving the main course. Just like you, Shuchen will not always write about what Zheng Pu was like before he was born. He is struggling, studying and working hard.

"Chen Shu" is very interesting. During the first Northern Expedition, when I was writing my suicide note, I burst into tears. It's just that there are too many classical Chinese texts at the beginning, which makes it difficult to read, but then it gets better and better.

The division of professions is too crude. In a fantasy world, professions should flourish. It is recommended to refer to the game settings, especially World of Warcraft (nostalgic).

It's a bit cliche, the writing and ideas are good, but unfortunately the protagonist doesn't like it and doesn't feel it.