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Just read the beginning, after defeating and driving away the demi-humans, the empire divided these six nobles into monitoring and guarding against the remaining demi-humans. Then the genius of the protagonist's senior family thought that the border nobles as a whole suffered too much from the conflict with the aliens, so it was better to pay tribute. Then we really made peace with the demi-humans. When the other five colleagues saw it, someone was raping me and I will kill you. Then the protagonist's senior simply couldn't stop, pretending to negotiate first, and then directly joined forces with the demi-humans to kill his colleagues. And then the protagonist's family was not killed as a traitor, but was promoted? ? ? Note that the empire had not been established for a long time at this time and was still on the rise of being invincible.

I see another author who can't write for love. In fact, I haven't read a novel for a long time. Super long novels are updated 1-2 times a day based on the starting point. The reward requires additional updates. The writer must be dedicated to this, that is, he must leave his job and write novels exclusively. The reader must also have time. If the work is busy and life is stressful, he really does not have the energy or money to read super long articles. Throughout the starting point, it can be seen with the naked eye that there are fewer and fewer new authors. One is the poor economic environment, and the other is the daily update rules, which are detrimental to the writing of new authors. One is money, because I am out of work and have no other source of income. You can only give up what you want to write and choose "popular" subjects (hot, often such subjects can attract money, alternative demand determines supply and demand, demand-led market), but if you can wait for the direction of your writing to become profitable, it is difficult. There are many people who will die if they write popular but homogeneous. And having to update it every day is too much of a challenge to the body and brain. I heard that many authors of popular books have to go to the hospital several times after writing a book. In short, there are few new authors and few people persist. In fact, the bonus period for super-long novels has passed. I always feel that weekly novels will come back again in the future. It depends on how it is operated.

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Fantasy is too niche and no one reads it, so it's better to write history

"Chen Shu" is very interesting. During the first Northern Expedition, when I was writing my suicide note, I burst into tears. It's just that there are too many classical Chinese texts at the beginning, which makes it difficult to read, but then it gets better and better.

I hope to add more small climaxes to the plot, improve the pacing problem, and optimize the reading experience. Western fantasy itself suffers in this aspect For example, why is Warhammer fan fiction so good? Isn't it just that small bosses provide small climaxes in conjunction with the charm of the appropriate characters? Is this a road trip in the early stages of the book? There is a battle, but there is no small climax. The charm of the character is just a hint. The character image is sketched out, but it did not attract me. It gives people a feeling that I am willing to keep reading just for the next appearance of this character. You write Shuchen. The Prime Minister is such a character. Zheng Pu's incidents are a climax Why is it in this book! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! To be honest, the writing is very good and the writing style is very comfortable to read. It is just like going to a restaurant to eat and the service is very good. But the most important thing is that the rhythm of serving food is messy. No matter how delicious the pre-dinner snacks are, it is not as good as serving the main course. Just like you, Shuchen will not always write about what Zheng Pu was like before he was born. He is struggling, studying and working hard.

From history to fantasy, the span is quite wide.

The division of professions is too crude. In a fantasy world, professions should flourish. It is recommended to refer to the game settings, especially World of Warcraft (nostalgic).

The settings in the first few chapters are written with a sense of history. It is worthy of being a historical novel, and the writing style is also very good. It turns out that I am a fan of the author, come on!

I'd better write a historical article. The subject matter is too unpopular and I'm not interested in reading it.

It's a bit cliche, the writing and ideas are good, but unfortunately the protagonist doesn't like it and doesn't feel it.

I have finished following Shuchen intermittently. I really like this kind of thick and romantic history, and I also like orthodox fantasy. Sometimes I feel confused when I see a warrior, a king, a holy emperor, or a magician of several levels. Since it is not a game or a cultivator, it is superfluous to classify the level of professional skills hard. Long live the orthodoxy!

The plot was good more than ten years ago, but it seems a bit old today, and good writing can't save a lackluster story.

I really like this epic feeling, this is the taste of Western fantasy

It's a bit like a western fantasy epic.

It's a bit of a gap from the previous one, but I personally like fantasy novels, so I'll collect them first and support them, and wait for them to grow.

It ended suddenly, are we going back to history?

Can this warrior, peak warrior, strong man, and demigod be renamed? . . . It doesn't sound very good. . . . I watched a Western fantasy before, in which the cornerstone, the model, the hero, the demigod sounded a lot better.

It's an interesting book. I heard that the author used to write historical articles. I'll leave a post here to see if it will be popular. As for some readers who reported that the division of occupations is too crude and the names of realms are not pleasant, this may be reflected. This book does not rely on the setting and world view, but may rely on the writing and plot. It needs to be improved. A lot of writing and plot books will be enough.

The writing is very good. I haven't seen this kind of Western fantasy novel for quite some time.

Why doesn't the author update?

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I haven't read this book, but I can read the author's last book. I hope to achieve greater success with the last book. I'm very optimistic about it. It is especially recommended to write the counselor route. With the author's skills, this route is absolutely popular. The last author I was optimistic about was very nervous in the early stages of writing his first book. I knew at a glance that this one was not going to work, but the next one would be popular as well, as long as he persisted. After more than ten years of experience, I can still say this big story. I have also seen the potential of Xiaohuo from you. What is missing is to expand your horizons, diversify and accumulate. The next book should be a mastermind that focuses on internal affairs, a little driving, and two or three female protagonists. I think you can do it.

The author is charging up his ultimate move, right?

In three chapters, I can't tell who the protagonist is…

Perhaps only tragedy can become a classic, just like Jiangnan's "Jiuzhou Piaomiao Lu", it really seems