Zongwu: Start Traveling Through the Ming Dynasty and Become the Emperor's Younger Brother

Let me tell you my personal opinion. The opinions are my own. Your book is well written and has deep thoughts, but there is a problem. Not readable enough and interesting enough. A novel is a novel. You have not thought about enhancing its interest or turning points. The story you narrated and the characters you created are all good, but there is no backbone. You are a novel without a core. Before I saw you on the shelves, you didn't know what you were going to do. You have practiced kung fu a lot and you have played a lot of roles. It looks quite deep, but in fact what you said is empty talk. Do you understand? Whether you are writing a novel or doing something, people need to have a purpose. Why do you write novels? What do you hope the people who see it will gain and feel? As a reader, I think your writing is good, but the focus of your writing is not strong in reading. You want to gain admiration, happiness, passion, excitement, or romantic thoughts, but basically you won't get anything from your book. The characters you describe, story reasoning, and plot imagination are all acceptable. But the story you wrote is not good. At least I don't have much personal interest in it. If you don't enhance your sense of reading, I feel that there will always be few people reading it. Interesting or passionate, your book writing style and theme are not the same as the content and theme of your story? If you think about it again, if you write a book again, your writing style will be enough, but your central idea will be a bit missing. For example, if I want to write a book, a martial arts novel. No matter he is in the invincible style or the loser style, he always has a goal to strive upward. He always wants to gain something and lose something, just like playing a game to upgrade or doing a task, you. This book is a premium account. I go shopping every day without doing tasks or copying copies. This is my opinion of your book and your writing story. When the game doesn't play the game, then the game is no longer a game.

First of all, I am 17th this time! I like "seven" and "seventeen" very much. . If you have a number with "seven", it means you don't have a wife. . Okay, back to the book. From the content of this book these days, it can be seen that the author is paving the way for the future. He wants to give the protagonist Zhu Houxi a complete background and rich experience in the arena. Because Zhu Wuwu and Zhu Houzhao have different purposes, Zhu Houxi has a different kind of life. Identity - Jinpeng Consort - The future protagonist is expected to be forced to participate in the whirlpool of the heir apparent. The survivors of the Jinpeng Dynasty are secretly loyal, and Zhu Wuwu and Zhu Houzhao are recruiting and cultivating each other, leaving Zhu Houxi in a dilemma. Little does he know that they are all betting on the future - a person who can end the troubled dynasty! Just like the time of Yongle - when the Five Dragons were in the same dynasty, everyone was cultivating their great grandson Zhu Zhanji, and this time the Ming royal family set their sights on Zhu Houxi, who frequently performed miracles! Analysis: Zhu Houzhao probably knew that he would not live long in the future, so he placed his treasure on Zhu Houxi, the idiot emperor's younger brother who grew up with him. Zhu Wuwu also let go of everything because Zhu Houxi helped him find Tianxiang broad beans one after another, because the person he loved deeply could be saved and the love could continue. Although everything in the world is good, if the ignorant lover is with him, no amount of prosperity is of any use! In conclusion, in the current Ming Dynasty royal family, both parties are tacitly training and training Zhu Houxi!

I really don't understand why writing about martial arts has to get the Dugu Nine Swords. Except for Dugu Qiubai, the founder of the Dugu Nine Swords, who reached the swordless realm. Later, Yang Guo, Feng Qingyang, and Linghu Chong who got the Dugu Nine Swords reached the swordless realm. Instead, Ximen Chuixue, Ye Gucheng, Xie Xiaofeng, Yan Shisan, and Xue Yiren came out of their own. The man who created his own swordsmanship in Kendo has reached the swordless state. The most fast martial arts in the world are unbreakable. As long as he is fast enough, Dugu Jiujian is also a younger brother. Just like Linghu Chong was blind when facing Dongfang Bai. , My brother is here to kill my brother, I will draw the Dugu Nine Swords and you will lose it, or you can learn the ultimate sword move of the Flying Fairy from Heaven. It is best to choose the Mingyu Gong or the Wedding Clothes Divine Gong for internal strength. The Mingyu Gong can not only stay young forever, but also make you handsome. If you practice the Mingyu Gong to the seventh or eighth level, it doesn't matter whether you are sucking Dafa or Beiming Divine Gong. Stand there. If you don't move, you won't be able to suck him in, and you may even be sucked back. If you practice the Mingyu Kung Fu to the ninth level, you can reach the realm of Wuji Shura. If you practice the Wedding Clothes Divine Kung Fu to the highest level, you can cultivate the Yang, thunder and fire attributes to the highest level, and you can combine the energy, spirit, and spirit into a round body and have an indestructible Vajra body. If you practice it with waste, you can also change the muscles and cleanse the marrow, and be reborn.

Embroidered spring knife

The protagonist actually has a good sense for a lewd thief, and can kill Tian Boguang ten times with just one sentence.

Snowflake Goddess Dragon

Has the protagonist never seen a woman? What kind of thing are you writing about? People have already killed you and you are hiding it for the assassin.

Please, is the first assassin a female protagonist? Is this kind of description meant to discourage people from quitting? Isn't this taking off your pants and farting? Also pave the way and leave a bunch of reasons? Why don't you set up a fan post and I'll subscribe to one chapter and scold you? I'll feel more at ease... I can't bear the frequency of three chapters and one poison

Bai Feifei

When I saw Zhou Zhiruo, I was simply shocked. Could it be the world view of a master who steals fragrance? Song Qingshu repaired his veins all the way, Zhang Wuji was possessed by Huo Shan, and broke up with Zhao Min?

It's not a good thing for lewd thieves to call themselves brothers, and Linghu Chong didn't like what he did, so he knew that there was no such thing as good or evil.

In fact, I have never understood these articles about the Ming Dynasty and the martial arts. These so-called martial arts masters kill court officials at will. Is it true that the court is just for food? Can a small sect compete with the great dynasty? There are also Jin Yiwei inside who dare to assassinate and ignore that. There are tens of thousands of Jin Yiwei. Isn't there even one awesome master among them? I see that the current Jin Yiwei novels must be like this (this Jin Yiwei is obviously super strong but overly aggressive). This novel is cruel, ruthless, and decisive in killing. Countless sects are afraid of Jin Yiwei. A thousand households in Jin Yiwei are as powerful as the master. The commander of Jin Yiwei is the best in the world hidden. It is very touching.

Personally, I don't like Linghu Chong. His behavior and actions are all negative.

To be honest, I hope that the protagonist will not make trouble for Yang Guo. After all, Yang Guo's life has been miserable enough. He was bullied by Huang Rong and the Quanzhen Cult when he was young. He finally had a wife who was raped, fell in love with flower poison, had his arm broken, and had to wait for the little dragon girl. His good years were gone, and he had to spend his whole life in an ancient tomb.

Zhu Yuanzhang in this book looks like this, and the protagonist, as a descendant of the old Zhu family, looks similar

He hates Linghu Chong and Feng Qingyang. Linghu Chong and the lustful thief are brothers. Feng Qingyang doesn't care about Huashan. If he helps, Yue Buqun will not turn black. He practices evil-proof swordsmanship and sits back and watches the decline of Huashan. He also retires in fame and glory. It was just the sword qi battle back then. The air sect won and the sword sect failed. He felt unhappy and didn't want to help. If the sword sect won, Feng Qingyang would definitely go all out to help.

This kind of mixed martial arts is the one I like the most. Among the martial arts heroines, I like Yao Yue Lianxing the most.