I Will Establish Heaven on Earth

Everyone is urging the author to leave the village, but I feel it is unnecessary. You can't do a thunder blow. When you leave the village, you will stand out. When your strength is achieved, when you leave the village, you will be the center of attention. Come on, it's well written. The main plot of the protagonist's development is well written 🤭🤭🤭🤭

There is a war outside, and the protagonist thinks about money every day. Is money still useful in troubled times? When making equipment, don't ask the craftsman how many materials are needed? Instead, he asked how much silver is needed. There is a war in nearby towns. Where can you buy materials? This is not an online game. You can buy anything with gold coins.

I just didn't figure it out. This protagonist is the only son of the late Emperor of Great Xia, and his mother is only in her teens. How long has this Great Xia been destroyed? How long did it take for the Zhou Dynasty to reach its end? Can the author give an explanation?

I was very confused after reading this book, and I had a lot of opinions about several settings. 1. Can silver be turned into anything? The article does not mention the transportation inconvenience caused by the war at all, nor the price increase or shortage of raw materials. It blindly emphasizes the importance of silver. It feels that as long as there is silver, there will be no shortage of raw materials. It also makes no mention of the changes in raw material prices caused by the war, which is very untrue. 2. Living in the mountains, there is never any talk about the role of the raw materials brought by the mountains in the village's equipment and elixir refining. Whether it can be produced by oneself instead of buying from the outside world, the price of the elixirs is not stated. 3. As for the girl named Su, is her family stupid? Are you not well informed? Both the common people and the big families know that this village is not simple, but they don't know that. Even the girl looks disgusted and arrogant. I really don't know what kind of brains their family has, but there will always be smart people, otherwise they will become a big family! ! ! !

I was confused, how big is that mountain? There are more than 10,000 refugees in a month and they are still unwilling to go down the mountain. What a waste. We are not here to see how to run a bandit cottage. Or is it that the so-called Heaven is actually only one cottage, the authentic cottage Heaven? And go to heaven every night?

The protagonist's power upgrade is embarrassing. Others have 2 points of genius. He looks like a loser in his 20s.

The protagonist is the emperor. I think any street gang leader is more powerful than him.

That's ridiculous. A knife costs a hundred taels of silver. Author, you can do the math yourself. It can only be made on a small scale for use in the imperial court, and it is impossible to popularize it.

To be honest, the data is a mess. In this book, three points of talent are the pride of heaven. The protagonist, who has 20 points of talent, is not as fast as the old man in the village who has two or three points of talent. The book says that the protagonist practices a very awesome unknown technique. However, after writing to chapter 50, it is not clear how awesome this technique is. It just has more special effects than others, but the cultivation speed is extremely slow. The cultivation speed is twenty times faster than that of a genius, but his level cannot even catch up with the tail of a genius. I really don't know if it's a problem with the protagonist's skills or if the author is deliberately slowing down the protagonist's cultivation speed. Also, the prices inside are so confusing that I looked confused. If a normal person had the talent of the protagonist, they would probably ascend to heaven on the spot. If you want to write about the protagonist's skills to lay a better foundation, then you must at least write about the power.

The writing style is extremely poor, even inferior to the compositions written by junior high school students.

The writing is very poor. Firstly, it is not detailed enough. 91% Of them have been passed. Secondly, the currency collapsed. It was just random. Thousands and hundreds of taels were lost casually. The key is that I don't know how many things I bought. Thirdly, for weapons and armor, I should write down what materials are used, such as hundred pieces of iron, etc., And then convert them into silver.

Being with the protagonist has an aura of wisdom, like a running account. The main source of returning to Daxia is selling elixirs. This is a gang. They want to restore the country but don't want to recruit refugees.

It feels like an online game, not like reality.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it was a brainless and cool article. You don't need to consume raw materials to make weapons, you can just use money to make them. . . There's a war going on outside, so they don't find anyone to mine and just use the silver to turn it into weapons and armor. . .

How can I praise the author's admiration without conscience?

Running account novel. Poisoned to the point of paralysis

I'm going! Either you write about farming and fighting for hegemony. What is the title of the book? You have to write lengthy articles about cultivation practices that you are not good at! What crackling, banging, banging, without that level and knowledge accumulation, you have to show off your meager vocabulary and knowledge! Author, don't you think it's embarrassing for you to take a look at it?

The author is a complete novice 😊, this is all the main line, without any other content. After reading more than ten chapters, there is no specific situation or plot about the village and its surroundings. Also, the author seems to have a God's perspective in writing the book. Some settings are not explained clearly, which makes me confused. I have to summarize and analyze it myself after reading it. You have to write clearly and don't make us guess. 😅

It doesn't matter if an emperor doesn't have three thousand beauties, but when he chooses a wife, he still has to look at the queen's face? Is it cheap or not to write like this?

It was written about the dynasty's struggle for hegemony, but it was written as a person practicing cultivation. Pig's Feet did not have the thinking of modern people, so he only focused on cultivation and did not pay much attention to development. It is obvious that the development of power will speed up his own cultivation, but Pig's Feet did not think about it at all and just focused on cultivation.

I can't stand it at all. I came here to take a look at these highlights. I thought it was a good book, but the result is really unsatisfactory

It's a brainless and cool novel, it doesn't follow logic, and the supporting characters are also brainless. They let the protagonist rebel, but they don't let the protagonist recruit refugees. Instead, they say they recruit experts. I**

It can be seen that the author's writing style is getting better and better, keep it up!

Forget it, this book is rubbish! It's completely written in plain English or on a computer! No logic! What a mess! Especially women are really poisonous! If you don't know how to write, just copy rubbish? Convinced! This book has been deleted! Quit the trap

After reading dozens of chapters, I can't stand it any longer. The currency system just crashed. You only have a team of a few thousand. How much have you spent? There are wars everywhere. The raw materials seem to be the same out of thin air. I can't stand it anymore. I gave up.

A brainless and enjoyable article, you can read it without thinking

The main line is clear and the plot is advanced layer by layer. It is very enjoyable to watch. Please keep updating.

Why are those two white-eyed wolves from Daxia gone? Aren't you being an inner disciple of the Holy Land and stumbling upon Da Xia?

I don't know what to write, and it's moving too fast. After reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

I have read 30 chapters so far and would like to give my personal suggestions to the author. I see that many comment areas here are talking about the issue of manufacturing materials. I suggest that the author open a separate patch and put all the cost of purchasing materials into the money.