I Save the World in the Doomsday Word Game

Make a simple appraisal of this book Judging from the current situation, it is a pretty good book. Personally, I am very much looking forward to the rest of this book. In terms of theme selection, we chose a more popular theme and writing method recently, that is, text adventure games. Compared with books of the same type, this novel is quite good. While catering to the readers' tastes, there is also the author's own independence. As for the creation of the dungeon, it can be seen that the plot of the dungeon has been carefully considered and thought over and over again. Although it is a bit slow, it is very fascinating. In general, the copy is fairly original. In terms of the details of the novel, it can be seen that the author has a certain writing power. He should not be a new writer, and his writing style should have been polished. There is a slight lack of character creation, but it is not a bad point. There are almost all flat characters in the novel, and there is no round character that I was looking forward to. I have a small suggestion. For long novels, it must be mainly flat characters, with round characters as embellishments (mainly embellishment of the protagonist and some villains, for example, the black boss in Cyclone) All in all, I like this book. If the author can maintain his level, I think we can see this book in the top 50 at the monthly box office in the near future. In addition, it is recommended that the author create a group. Enhancing readers' adhesion is very necessary for both new and experienced writers.

The first half is quite good, I even stayed up late to watch it, and I feel it deserves more than four stars. The second half was very annoying, and I basically managed to finish it while browsing Taobao and listening to a book. I'd give it two stars.

I accidentally saw it in Shuhuang. It is generally good. If the author is not very hard-working, he would write less about getting along with others or about emotions. Just tease it a bit. Keep a concept and focus on the plot and copy. Not to mention that it will become a big hit. It is absolutely fine to have a small hit. The themes are all good. Exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses.

I haven't seen such an addictive novel in a long time When I first saw it, I thought it was quite novel to use the setting of Mortal Shell (the cover also got HH). When I played the game at that time, I thought it was very fun. I had the patience to look down, but I didn't expect that the more I looked at it, the more I liked it. Although the protagonist is not stressed all the way through the game, the setting details in various maps are full of details. If the protagonist can suffer a little bit or there are some unexpected developments, I believe the look and feel will definitely be improved a lot. PS: The writing is really not enough. It took two days from discovery to reading the latest chapter. If there is no new chapter, I feel like there are ants crawling on me...

666 Old Songs is well written, but a little short.

Full order, don't be pigeons, be careful, Shenyang Street is waiting for you

It's well written. If you like Souls, Rings, and Bloodborne, you'll enjoy reading it. I've read a few novels of the same type, and I feel that the rhythm and plot of this one is better. The interplay between the dungeon and reality is reasonably arranged. The dungeons are all long dungeons, but the update time seems to be unstable. I don't know when the next chapter will be updated, so it will be a bit difficult to follow.

The subject matter is novel, but less interesting

What a great book that was delayed by the name! Fairy seedlings!

The voice package broadcasts the baby news + It will be the same from now on, hahahaha, I feel like I am willing to do it for me—+#

A piece of random nonsense ... The fallen believers no longer respect the blazing sun, and the bright moonlight cannot be protected by themselves The scholars who seek knowledge look up at the stars, and the servants of gods who betray the Lord try to gain power Purify the world of heaven Transformed into karmic fire, Long Yin, who represents divine grace, is infected with misfortune Pollution, distortion, corruption... I don't know when, the source of the doomsday has spread wantonly But Under the abyss, the demigod Titan insists on his belief in gold At the bottom of the canyon , the original hermits remember the oath to the God Lord because they firmly believe Behind the dirty bloody sun, the golden afterglow has not yet fallen In the shadow of disorder, the only true knowledge is still struggling ... However This time The filth of evil thoughts has grown extremely evil consequences, and both old and new gods will face their fall Creatures keep wailing, and the world laments this Talents, bodies, holy objects... No matter the outcome, the apostle of salvation will fight hard

It is a very good novel. There are basically no poisonous points throughout. It is the most interesting text novel I have read, especially many levels are very imaginative. Unlike some novels, it is just about killing monsters and completing tasks, which is not interesting at all. But I still think there are two points that need to be improved. The first is the title of the book. To be honest, when I saw this title for the first time, I almost dismissed it. I hate novels such as salvation and the Virgin the most. I suggest the author change the title, otherwise it will affect the sales of the book. The second is the plot of fighting the new world. Although the protagonist is pretending, It seems that the National Intelligence Group and the combat team are very incompetent, especially the second time. Lu Chaiyi can't even defeat the middle-level personnel of the New World, and the team leader is even more incompetent. If it weren't for the protagonist cheating, most people would have died long ago. I hope the author will pay attention to the future plots and not pretend to be for the protagonist, which will affect the characterization and image of the supporting characters.

It was originally written quite well! Really, the plot is good, the creativity is good, and the writing is passable. I have to create an organization and an all-female department... You wrote it very well. There is no need to add some extraneous settings.

I ordered it all in one go today and I have to say that the author wrote it very well. So far, there is nothing poisonous in the book. What is written in reality is also very consistent with Pig's Foot's character. He did not act pretentious and start a harem just because he gained great power. The only thing I'm a little worried about is whether the author has built up the power system for the later stage. If it is well constructed, it may be possible to become famous by maintaining the current level.

All I can say is, stop writing about your realistic plot.

A new book is about to set sail. I sincerely ask all apostles not to keep books. The author hereby kneels down to thank you, dong dong dong!

I saw someone talking about why there are fewer and fewer real-life daily plots, and they don't accept female protagonists and don't fall in love. I want to say that I came here just for the copy, and so do most people

In fact, I feel that starting from Wet Nurse, the promotion is too fast. It's not that the plot is not exciting, but the excitement of the body is gone. In the early stage, the setting of the body is attractive, but in the later stage, the excitement of the body is abandoned, and the huge world view and grand narrative are used. It doesn't feel like a game anymore, and it doesn't even have anything to do with the game. . .

From the practical part, it can be seen that the author does not know much about government departments. Government departments cannot be so lax, and the confidentiality measures are too low. The monthly salary for newcomers is 100,000, and the monthly salary keeps rising. Idiots all know that the male protagonist is very talented. Although the file should be kept confidential, the salary cannot be kept confidential. There are also bodyguards arranged later. If I were the enemy, I would definitely target him first. The male protagonist was also very stupid. Baitian directly told the official about his talent. Shouldn't he get the relevant information first? For example, the standards for measuring talent and the expansion of information channels are not something you can just search online and then give up. In this extraordinary world, you can't just hang it on an official tree. In case there are bad guys in it, that is, the male protagonist with a halo is not targeted, so it is still a bit more novice. However, I mainly came here for the copy. The copy is very well written but I think it is realistic. If the part could be more rigorous and have fewer loopholes, the results of this book would definitely be better. Most of the protagonists in the novel will not simply join the officialdom because everyone knows that the officialdom is not necessarily united or safe, so you have to be more cautious when joining, and there are usually various restrictions. If there are no such restrictions in this novel, it would be very unreasonable.

It looks good, but I wish the protagonist's abilities would improve more slowly. I've seen too many novels like this where the protagonist's abilities improve too quickly, causing the enemy's strength to skyrocket.

When will the author publish another book on this subject? After all, the starting point is the same type. So far, you are already considered the leader in this theme. Of course, if the author has no work in mind, there is no need to force it, otherwise the lower limit will be lowered, which will easily lose readers. You can settle it for a few months and collect enough materials before creating. Recommend some materials to the author, such as the Four Evil Gods of Chaos in the Warhammer worldview, the SCP Foundation containment objects, and some settings such as Si Sui Siming in the game. It does not have to be limited to pseudo-Cthulhu. These similar types of weird and mysterious elements are worthy of reference.

The creativity is great, and the early writing is also pretty good, but playing single-player without any conflicts, lack of conflict, and lack of fun makes people easily tired! No matter how powerful you are in the game, if you don't show it in reality, it will always be just a cloud. I hope the author will work hard.

I just read Chapter 50 and specially ordered a chapter to review. I think the game content is amazing and the real-life content is too big. I don't want to read it at all, so I skipped it. I might give the game content a 9 points, but in reality it would be a maximum of 6 points, barely passing.

It's all the fault of a bunch of people who complain about the bad reality and talk so much. The realistic plot is average but not enough to make people abandon the game, but the author is slow to update. Now the plot is actually no longer self-consistent. The protagonist has only been exposed to the doomsday game for a year or two. According to the main god Zhuan, it is impossible to deteriorate in this time, and he has also released something like the source of doomsday. Normally speaking, the Book of Salvation should be an extremely powerful god. The protagonist constantly fights monsters and upgrades, solves crises and pretends to be 13 in the real world, and then cooperates with the Book of Salvation to resist the invasion of foreign gods and the chance of transcendence. However, due to a group of SB readers, the real-life plot was directly blocked, and the author is not full-time, so the current plot is actually unable to be logically self-consistent.

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Is it possible that after the protagonist saves Omniscient, he tells Omniscient that he is going to the Extremely Evil World, and then Omniscient makes a prop from the God of Discord to the protagonist, and the protagonist then goes to the Extremely Evil World to find an opportunity to target the Extremely Evil World. . . [You used the "Disordered Omniscient Divinity" (special prop)] [The endless thirst for knowledge surges into the hearts of all beings, and the ordinary day suddenly turns into an eternal night, with endless terrifying stars hanging above. The extremely evil fruit discovered the almighty true knowledge, the bright stars. The extremely evil consequences were discovered by Discord. [Chaos and disorder have polluted the blackest evil. The desire called seeking knowledge has replaced the endless evil thoughts; the fear called looking up has diluted the terrible evil. [The world has become obscured by knowledge. All the extremely evil creatures below Mythology have died with headshots, and everything above Mythology has fallen into disorder. Maybe you really won for a moment? You have entered the special end event "The Showdown between Knowledge and Evil"

The writing and the plot are good, and I don't know what the author was thinking because there were all women around him.

When will the new book be released? How long have you been taking a break?

This book is really a very novel subject matter. I have never seen anything similar. The content is still very attractive to me.

From chapter 236 to the end 😅, is it still worth reading?