Create the Supreme Prehistoric

I don't know, why do you think that opening a dojo is considered poisonous? Do you have any brains? Why does a person need such a big dojo? If I give you a galaxy, what's the use of just you? Not to mention, won't the dojo be expanded when needed? At that time, opening a dojo seemed to be just a place to stay. If this sounds toxic, it's simply because you haven't read enough novels. As for strength, this power system is already supreme, right? If you want to see a weak power system, just watch Douluo. For example, Xuexue San Mou, this one is more suitable for you. If that doesn't work, why don't you just read historical novels? There are only mortal wars.

Xiaoxiancao, you can read it! It can be seen that the author should be an old author with great ideas. In the early stage, the world view seems to be very grand, but there is still room for improvement in the integration of various aspects. He should be here to test the waters. If you look carefully, all the concepts mentioned above are explained in the later chapters. Overall, it is not bad!

There are too many holes buried. When will they be filled one by one?

Somewhat interesting, but not much. First of all, the painting style in the back is closer to the fantasy world of time travel, and the new version of Zhutian Gou Xian fights in the ancient times, while the painting style in the front is closer to the old version of the ancient times. It is better to write about the new prehistoric era directly, without any great will, just three thousand demon gods born in the previous chaotic zone, directly fighting Pangu to open the sky. There were demon gods first, and then there was the prehistoric era. There was no prehistoric era, and there was no Pangu. Chaos did not keep track of time. For the sake of progress, the prehistoric era came into existence. The second thing is that this type of protagonist is destined to have little content, but is it a group portrait novel? Not this type. It is better that the Chaos that was born at the beginning is not strong, and it is better to write more content about Chaos in the early stage and invade other worlds and turn into Chaos. Then there is no great avenue. The world is where the great avenue comes from. Otherwise, the Chaos Demon God was created by the great avenue. Who created the great avenue? Directly starting with the demon gods, Pangu was created in order to become stronger. The three thousand demon gods are the avenue, and the strongest few are Pangu. Da Dao is the House of Representatives and Pangu is the Senate. I think the story about the ancient world in which Da Luo, the demon gods from the fantasy time travel, met to decide the world type of the ancient world was very well written. The world we opened up, so it is called the ancient world. We opened up the ancient world, so we are Pangu. Finally, the level is too old, Hunyuan Wuji, has long been out of fashion. It is better to directly use the new version of the highest Da Luo in the prehistoric era. In order to go further, it fits Pangu. But Pangu is not a realm, it is still Da Luo, but Da Luo is infinite, but the combat power is still different. Or it can be said that Pangu is a kind of Da Luo Ji state, or a higher artificial realm, but after all it is still Da Luo. Of course, the above is just a suggestion. After all, the old version of Honghuang is no longer popular. Moreover, Hongmeng Chaos and Dao Will really look awkward, and they really don't play with the timeline multiverse. Of course, you can say that the protagonist, the Time Demon, can also play with the timeline, but this is too false and empty. It is just a setting without a plot description, such as playing with the timeline in the later stages of the Lord God's Road. Of course, I am talking about compiling the timeline of a big world, not a future protagonist, which is essentially just a plot promoter.

I immediately gave up on opening up the dojo world. I was bragging about how awesome it was, but the Dou Di who created the world without Dou Po opened up a lot of space. I guess Dou Sage is not as good as Dou Sheng. It's so awesome. You are still boasting about the supreme prehistoric world. It is only a world with a radius of 180,000 feet, and you need the help of something to open it. This book poison is purple, and you are the nuclear bomb saint.

The prehistoric saint, the quasi-sage Daluo, really had to die. In the early days of the magnificent world, the rules gradually became more and more perfect. Logically speaking, they became more and more powerful. As a result, they became more and more unreasonable. The spiritual energy transformed from chaos was absorbed by these immortal things. The unconscious transformation was not as good as the conscious cultivation and devouring. After falling again and again, the power of their saints became more and more powerful, and the prehistoric beat them to pieces.

Author, all of your characters are a bit funny. You obviously want to establish such a big world view, but you all feel like you are just kidding.

It made me laugh so hard. The world opened by the Supreme Hour is 180,000 feet long. It made my stomach hurt. The world opened by the Chaos Demon God who is so nb must be at least a super large universe. What the hell is this 180,000 feet in size? I seriously doubt that the author is a primary school student or has not graduated from elementary school. I am laughing so hard.

I finally know what a nuclear bomb saint is. Seeing the opening of the dojo made me laugh. I won't say how powerful he is at the level of Daluo Jinxian according to traditional mythology. Just talking about the setting of the author of the Honghuangliu novel, it ranks second to last (the last one is the ten-meter saint in one step). A Taoist priest can't enlighten a creature. What enlightenment will do to the creature's heels and other things? Damn it, it really made me laugh to death. He directly gave me thunder. Have you ever read the fairy tale? Or do you have imagination? Do you know that in the fairy tale, Tianpeng was originally a mortal and ate a Taishanglao? Jun's golden elixir can directly become the "Daluo Golden Immortal" and then go and see how awesome and high-level the mythical "Canopy" is, and how rich the faith of the ancients is. Isn't it good to not look at the traditional mythology to check Du Niang and then start divergent thinking to write? To write novels, you need to have a deep cultural heritage, especially this kind of mythology, otherwise you deserve to be sprayed to death, and you will be thrown into the street! ! !

Just one chapter a day, won't your conscience hurt?

It can be seen that the author's framework is good and the pattern is large, but why has no one discovered this book? ?

The image of the protagonist's innate Taoist body is not an angel, but a feathered man, a flying immortal in ancient Chinese mythology. Unlike other immortals, he has wings. "Chu Ci·Yuanyou": "The feathered people are still here in Danqiu, leaving behind the immortal hometown." As the name suggests, it refers to people who have feathers or wear feather coats and can fly. It first appeared in "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" and was called Yumin. In Taoism, Taoists are called Taoist priests, and becoming immortals is called "emerging ascension".

According to Chapter 23, the power system is Celestial Immortal = Supreme Being? True Immortal=True Immortal Xuanxian=Red Earth Immortal? Jinxian = Immortal King Taiyi = Immortal King Giant ~ Diguang Immortal King? Da Luo = Immortal Emperor Quasi-Sage = Immortal Emperor second stage (immortal fetus)? Hunyuan Daluo = Sacrifice to the Tao Hunyuan Wuji = Above the Sacrifice to the Tao? Chaos Supreme=? ? ?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 21, there are too many poisonous points. For example, the protagonist is so strong that he still has to collect spiritual treasures, and he also has to worry about the consequences of killing people.

Bragging is too much, but there is no sense of substitution. Give up

If you have any family members who want to recommend characters or special spiritual treasures, you can leave a message here and I will refer to it and join!

It's too confusing. One thought comes out one after another. It's too much and not done well. In my opinion, there is a piece here and a piece there, and it's still short. This is uncomfortable.

First of all, as the Three Thousand Chaos Demon God, his strength is at least as strong as that of a saint. Not to mention controlling the flow rate of the world, a saint can even reverse time and cause and effect. It is a piece of cake. What kind of Chaos Spirit Treasure can he use? He can only control the flow rate of time. Secondly, there was no merit in the prehistoric times. I have read more than a dozen novels about the prehistoric period. Merits are rewarded by heaven to the creatures in the prehistoric times. Now there is no one in the prehistoric times who told me about the merits sent by heaven, and no one was born in the sky. Finally, the name of the Chaos Spiritual Treasure is really stupid, like the Space Demon God's Spiritual Treasure "Space Gate" is changed to "Chaos Infinite Space God Gate". Doesn't this B pattern come up? Normally, each author of Honghuangliu novels has a writing style. Normally I would not comment on it, but you really have too many flaws to complain about. You must at least understand the basic settings of Honghuangliu novels.

Supreme: Should the "I" of the author be renamed "I"?

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, hahaha!

The gap between the Small Thousand World, the Middle Thousand World and the Great Thousand World is too small (the difference between the highest output treasures among the three is only one level). The fifteenth level can only create the world of Hengsha. The setting of the context is contradictory. The protagonist saw the reborn person sent by himself later, but above the time of the fifteenth level, there are traversers in the world with fifteenth level existence? How did the time traveler get in? What's the sixteenth level behind the time traveler? Are time travelers so powerful?

The author of this book has established a book club, and those who are interested can join. Discuss plot development. QQ724706712

Sad, there are only 15 pictures, I can't get enough!