Secret Game Invasion: the Old Gods Are Whispering

The books written by new authors are all similar. Unless the writing is particularly outstanding, the author should not pay too much attention to the data. From Qidian, stand-alone books for new authors have become the norm.

There is a female protagonist who is licking her backwards, which is a bit annoying

I would like to give you a suggestion, the author, please remove the label calm. For readers who read grammatical or horror-oriented books, "calm" is a label full of negatives. Because many people write about "calm" protagonists, either they are really calm and have no mood swings, just like Colonel Chu. Those who don't know think that the frontal lobe has been cut. Either he is completely insane, either mentally ill or anti-social and causing trouble. So when we talk about a calm protagonist and a high IQ... At least 30 people left without even wanting to watch it.

At first glance, the plot advances too fast, which makes it a bit incoherent. Not much is used to create the character's personality. It feels like it is too boring to promote the plot for the sake of promoting the plot.

The writing is okay, I recommend it to Zhang. The author comes out to make a fuss?

No emotional drama, no emotional drama

I just saw the update, and I feel that the protagonist's image is not very three-dimensional at the moment, and the character description is still not enough. It is not a protagonist who can make some impression on me just by mentioning his name. I suggest that the author refines it later and fleshes out the character's personality and behavior. Another thing that others have mentioned is that the plot advances too fast. To be honest, this kind of city-wide mission can be used to give the protagonist a career or as the beginning of a strange incident. Now the protagonist is low level and has insufficient cards. It is done rashly. If the protagonist plays a big role, it will easily make people think that the other characters are smarter. If it does not play a role, it will be easy to think that the protagonist is useless and difficult to grasp. Overall, the potential is still great. Write it well.

As soon as I read it, a supporting character's perspective appeared, which greatly affected the sense of immersion.

The extraction of this skill and equipment seems to be related to the pig's foot doctor profession.

I always think the author is a trumpet?

It's so weird... The writing style of "The New Book of Reasoning for Newcomers" is quite good, but it just looks like emmm. It's a bit strange and a little uncomfortable, but I can't find a clear problem. It makes people very unhappy (it's not the book that makes me unhappy, it's the fact that I can't find the problem that makes me unhappy)

A small opinion. It is best not to use double quotes when the protagonist is thinking. Otherwise, when reading, you will not know whether the sentence was spoken or just thought in the heart. In the previous chapters, I didn't pay much attention to the double quotes when Hide and Seek met Woody and the others.

I always felt that the first dungeon was too simple. It was level C. The heroine took her home in the front, and directly rewarded props in the back. Skills are completely targeted. It feels like anyone can run out....

Shennong is here to test the book by himself (all opinions represent personal opinions only)