Thank You Madam for Choosing Me

After reading a hundred chapters, do you know what you are writing, not to mention how casual your writing is? The character creation is a mess. Do you think the male protagonist, the female eldest lady, and the two girls are well created? Take a good look at how you wrote these four characters. I don't know what your outline is, but the plot arrangement is really inexplicable. It can be described as bullshit☺️

I can accept that the protagonist is not very strong and looks bad, but I can't accept that he is stupid.

All the retarded people in the retarded forum think the protagonist is retarded!

To be honest, the portrayal of the protagonist is too exaggerated. As a time traveler, the protagonist has read a few novels, TV series and movies, and even history books. Not to mention that the city is extremely deep, but you must have at least a sense of crisis and precautions, how can you be like Silly Baitian. Knowing that the two brothers of the Su family had thoughts about the women around them, and knowing that they could feel the ill will towards the second brother, they had to be prepared in advance. We are modern people who understand the principle of attacking first to gain advantage and attacking later to suffer disaster. We should not stupidly wait for others to figure it out before regretting it. It's true that the villains know more about the plot than the protagonists.

It's so funny. That's not right. There's a reason why people pretend to be pigs. Besides being a bit too much, it's just for the sake of the plot. The emotional line is also layered. The slow protagonist in the plot will not make people feel uncomfortable. Didn't you read what you wrote? Anyway, I can't understand it. Let's not talk about the wretchedness of the main character and forget about making progress. What the hell are you writing? I really want to watch the brainless girl and I will read it here.

Can the protagonist's IQ be raised to the passing level? He was obviously not welcomed in the Su family, but his brother invited him and his wife out for a dinner the next day after returning home. Any fool would know who he was targeting. And the reason why you accepted the invitation was because you thought they could bully them because they didn't know how to marry each other. You don't have amnesia. You think they treat you as a brother. Why do you think they have any reason to invite you to dinner? Also, the protagonist's inner thoughts after beating his brother violently were actually because he felt that the Feng family rescued him from the Su family and planned to perform a show of righteousness and annihilation of relatives. He is really an exquisite egoist.

The protagonist is too stupid. Didn't he watch TV series or read books before time travel? In ancient times, he married such a beautiful beauty and had two beautiful maids. Wouldn't Cao Cao, an ancient married woman, have such a wife? It was still a world of martial arts, and martial arts masters would grab it immediately if they liked it. I am afraid that a fool traveled through time with modern knowledge. Any young man in modern times who has traveled through time and knows that there is martial arts will definitely learn it. After learning it, no matter why the protagonist is sent to the Feng family, he can deal with it. If he has bad intentions, he can just run away. With martial arts, he has great responsibility in the world. If you write a time-travel novel, the protagonist wants to be calm and understand, and he will not dare to blatantly snatch his wife even if she is beautiful.

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about your next book. You've covered up almost all the bad points in this book, so work hard on the next one.

I think the protagonist of a book can have any personality, as long as he can't be stupid, let alone grow up. Can he be stupid at the beginning to see the end?

Why is this book so similar to the one My Wife Is Not Right? Is it an imitation?

It's poisonous. It's poisonous. The author seems to have ntr ideas. The predecessors tried the poison, and the future generations should not leave.

Your beginning is a bit strange. You already know the cause of your predecessor's death. Don't you have to have a sense of crisis? The Feng family is acting strangely and for unknown reasons. You should at least be more vigilant. Why don't your two so-called brothers have any awareness of you? Not to mention killing you early, at least start preparing. Have you been expecting others to leave your life to others?

The protagonist does not have a strong sense of time travel, and this kind of literary emotional line is still very important. The character of the protagonist is a bit too much, and the change of emotional attitude must have a sense of hierarchy. It always describes the protagonist thinking about having sex with women every day, which is brainless and makes people feel wretched.

The author has to say that a reader just now was right. The protagonist is indeed stupid. To put it nicely, the protagonist is as innocent as a fool. Knowing that his brother wanted to harm him, he went to find his brother. The protagonist's overestimating behavior made me speechless. If others had used poison, lime, Mongolian sweat medicine, or a dozen six-level masters to kill the protagonist, the main protagonist would have died long ago if he were not the protagonist. Can you make him normal?

I have been reading novels for 20 fucking years, in all genres, but it is rare to find someone as intelligent as the protagonist of this book. This is not silly and sweet as the author said, this is NC

It's really quite poisonous. My dog ​​is smarter than the protagonist. Even Zhizhan overestimates the protagonist.

Is Shengjing Mo really picking up guests? Does Shen Nong have an answer?

After reading twenty chapters, I feel that the protagonist is really useless. He needs force but not force, he needs cunning but not cunning, he needs a city but not a city. His actions are arranged from beginning to end. There is no resistance or suspicion at all. The villain is also a bit mentally retarded. Anyway, I don't see any planning or anything like that. My personal evaluation is not good.

The more I look at it, the more I think about male pig feet. This is simply incomparable to Luo Qingzhou.

Read it quickly

It's so poisonous, I really can't stand it

Before reading the book, read the introduction first. What is this introduction about? Does the protagonist have a cheat system? Immortal cultivators kill people without batting an eye. How does the protagonist survive?

Come on, just be a little bit more toxic and change it (

It is extremely poisonous. Stupid Shen Nong has already tasted it himself. Anyone who can read this book is very smart.

My suggestion is to cut it, it's all poison.

I'm looking forward to your new book and your progress. Do you still remember what you said to me?😢 I hope you will make progress in the next book. Come on.

The writing is so disgusting, and all the foreshadowing is a hidden cuckold plot. Even if you write it like this, readers will not be able to survive it. I can only say that there is a reason for the rejection.

Isn't it the master's mission?

I can't resist it, it's too poisonous, I really don't want to watch it.

First place🥇🥇🥇🥇