Seeking the Path to Immortality in My Twilight Years

The most difficult thing about writing this kind of old-age cultivator is to describe the mentality of the elderly. Any mistakes in writing are poisonous points.

After reading the first thirty chapters, I couldn't arouse people's interest. The beginning was so boring. It took thirty chapters to write a cultivation process 😰

The contract has been signed, please follow me and read it, thank you!

The opportunity is too deliberate. If you are sleepy, you will have a pillow. When you are hungry, you will eat when you open your mouth.

Thumbs up, at least the author has finished the book. What a eunuch, it's so abominable×…

The writing is okay, but the concept is terrible, and the imagination is lacking. At least it is based on the routine of more than 40 years ago.

This book ended silently without my knowledge. Fortunately, I clicked on the author's homepage to take a look.

It's fine to write, but it would be a pity to discard it.

Give the author a thumbs up, from beginning to end

There is a problem with the writing. The dialogue is always subjective, and the statements are too redundant and unclear. I hope it can be corrected.