Seeking the Path to Immortality in My Twilight Years

The most difficult part of writing about elderly people cultivating immortality is depicting their mindset; even a small mistake can be a fatal flaw.

The first thirty chapters were completely uninteresting; the opening was so boring, and thirty chapters were dedicated to a single cultivation process. 😰

I've already signed the contract. I'd really appreciate it if you guys could follow along and read it. Thank you so much!

Opportunities are too deliberate; you'll find a pillow when you're sleepy and food as soon as you open your mouth when you're hungry.

Give it a thumbs up; at least the author has finished the book. Eunuchs are truly despicable...

The writing is okay, but the theme is terrible, there's no creativity, it's at least a formula from over forty years ago.

This book ended quietly without my knowledge. Luckily, I checked the author's profile.

It's well-written; it would be a shame to abandon it.

Give the author a thumbs up, for seeing it through to the end.

The writing style is problematic. The dialogue relies heavily on subjective statements, and the statements are too verbose and numerous, making some parts unclear. I hope this can be improved.