The Remnants of the Uchiha Are Forced to Save the Ninja World

I sincerely hope that this book will be published soon and a new book will be published. What the heck is this? It was so confusing to read. Compared to the previous book, this level feels like a different author.

What a waste of innovation, it's simply a collection of poisonous points. The protagonist has low IQ, inconsistent behavior, and is not happy at all. The plot is so poorly written that it has no merit whatsoever. Is it really a person? It won't be that the account is sold. The gap is too big. I can read the previous book to some extent, but This book is really infuriating, the writing is so bad!

The real water dragon is gone, this is not him anymore

After looking at it, I found that there was indeed a reason for the scolding in the comment area... The plot progressed slowly, the planning was not clear, and the twists and turns were poisonous. The protagonist has no modern thinking at all. He only relies on cheating and God's perspective. He is not sharp enough in speaking and doing. Forget it if he talks too much. In order to fit in with the style of the painting, he is forced to be in the second grade... It's not very exciting. I am really speechless. The cheating is not fun at all... To make such a depressing start, without a big climax at the right time, the rhythm will collapse. All desires are suppressed first, and the focus is on raising, not suppressing. Many people say that it has been sold out. I think the previous book was not much better. It was just that the writing at that time was somewhat innovative and diluted those shortcomings.

It feels not as good as the Tenseigan. The main battle power is broken (Sasuke never won after opening the kaleidoscope, the third generation had his throat cut by kunai, etc.), And secondly the protagonist is poorly written (I want to be a behind-the-scenes boss, but I also want to be an invincible protagonist). If the Tenseigan can score 9 points, this book feels like it is passing.

There are several shortcomings: First: The combat power is broken. Compared with the original work, Sasuke with the kaleidoscope performed unsatisfactorily. Second: The content is scarce and water injection is serious. There are several chapters of something that can be done in one sentence, and you can read it at a glance. Third: The logic does not make sense. At the beginning, when I wrote about the battle between Shiro and Tomioka Giyu, I thought that Shinji might also know the breathing technique, but then I didn't know anything about it. Fourth: The character is seriously mentally depressed. Almost all the crises were solved by Shinji alone. Kakashi and other jounin seemed to be hypnotized, so they forced Shinji to pretend to be bad. After Shinji finished pretending to be bad, he would praise a few more words. This formula has been used for many chapters. Fifth: The settings are confusing. In the past, there were rewards for defeating monsters as a lantern bearer, but they were gone later. Sixth: Some characters divide the plot experience. If characters with more roles in the original works such as Konoha's Twelve Strong and Hawk Squad can have a sense of immersion, then what's the point of characters like Chino, Ryuuga and Mumei? They have neither a sense of immersion nor particularly stand-out characters, which gives people a strong sense of fragmentation and abandons the advantages of fan fiction itself. The above are the shortcomings of some of the content. There are also problems with a considerable part of the content, resulting in a poor look and feel. I hope the author can pay attention to it. The last book was indeed amazing, but this one is a bit lame. The author should not let down his previous efforts. I hope you can see your changes in the next book.

Some people say that Mr. Shuilongjiang has exhausted his talents. Let me tell you my opinion. First of all, because the previous book was so complete, if you want to write something new, you must introduce a new system, which is Demon Slayer. Then I understood that the author wanted to write about the feeling of Naruto's theme bond, so I kept writing about the interaction with Konoha Xiaoqiang, Xiangbai. But to forcefully highlight this point and write about a group of children influencing the situation of the five great ninja villages feels a bit cliché, giving people the feeling of being forced to show off. Then I fell into the old habit of cheating on the protagonist but didn't dare to go too far. I just barely managed to get through the difficulties every time and forcefully fulfilled the plot. Overall, I actually look forward to their interaction, but the flaws in the plot are too obvious, and I hope the author can improve it.

Hydrology, there is very little content in one chapter, and it is just a perfunctory update. If you don't want to write it, you don't have to write it if you don't know how to write it. If you continue to write it like this, it will become completely unreadable. If there are no obvious changes in the follow-up, it will be a subpar novel.

When I saw Chapter 606, I really couldn't catch up. You said that the protagonist must grab the tail beast or copy Xiang Ling's method in order to have the Samsara Eye. Did you forget to set the reward point for the lamp? Now that I have someone else's reincarnation eye (although it was also cultivated by the author), this makes people very speechless. You said that the rewards of the lamp are too rich and the protagonist is too strong to control it. I said that you can definitely write a behind-the-scenes novel to train his subordinates and support the forces. Now the protagonist is weaker than his subordinates. He has forgotten the setting point and does not explain it. You When I say I want to innovate, I say I express my understanding and support. After all, there are many fan fictions, but innovation is innovation. Innovation is not about forgetting the setting. If you write daily life and others say it is bad, I say don't write these. How can you overdo the plot and shape the characters? Is the book poisonous? It is not about writing daily life, but forgetting the original intention and not seeing anything innovative.

This author is trying to write something very new. Art can be innovative, but it cannot kill readers. The entry point of the golden three chapters at the beginning is still good, but the problem lies in the character of the protagonist. Without any foreshadowing or connection, the protagonist has to risk blindness and use Susanoo to save people. Based on current values, saving people is a matter of course. But from the perspective of Naruto's values, or just from the perspective of one's own gains, this is very abrupt and incomprehensible. This leads to a sense of detachment, that is, a disconnect. The readers cannot understand and have no sense of substitution. However, the logical arrangement of the author's behavior as the protagonist is all shaped under the world view of the ninja world. This is a conflict. As a result, what the author wanted to express was not conveyed, and it was just a one-man show. Perhaps the author's writing ideas are very smooth, but due to objective factors, there is no way for readers to follow this idea, and the lack of sense of substitution leads to the author's self-impressed readers but not buying it. Let's talk about the supporting characters, it's an old problem. The supporting female characters are just crazy cheats, and the supporting male characters don't even need to bring their own dry food to buy shares. This will not appear very humorous, but will only make people feel mentally retarded. You are writing about Naruto, the genocide Uchiha, and the invasion of other worlds, not the daily comedy series. What the readers want is the extreme pleasure of dancing on the tip of a knife and walking on the tightrope. Putting it here to perform private thinking will only disgust people. Of course, writing is the author's freedom. If it is just for dreams and entertainment, I would be happy to see the diversity of Qidian's literary works. If it is full-time for life, then I suggest you refer to your reincarnation and be a little retro.

In the past two years, I have increasingly felt that online writing is an industry that needs to use its strengths and avoid weaknesses. If your strengths can make readers happy, then use them to your advantage. If you have to challenge yourself, "seeking the truth even if you are determined to die" is often the standard ending. If the author has a next book, he might as well return to his comfort zone.

This book is a very orthodox Naruto novel. I don't know why the monthly votes and recommendations are so weak. I hope everyone will vote more monthly and recommend this book to make this book appear in front of more people. Come on Kong Long, you are the best, hold on, you will definitely be able to surpass the starting point of those system-flowing Naruto stories.

I don't know why there are so many negative comments in the comment area, but I think the writing is very good, very thoughtful, and very Naruto-like, with a lot of fire content. Come on, author!

The previous Naruto novel was well written, so expectations for this one are very high. Even if it is as wonderfully written as the previous one, it will disappoint, so please work hard, author.

Come on, as a reader, I have no objection to the setting of your article. Just read it as you say. However, this book obviously lacks an atmosphere called tension compared to the previous one. The article emphasizes that the protagonist does not have much time, but the protagonist rarely does adventurous things and is always at ease. If it is too bland, it will become an ordinary enjoyable novel. In short, I hope that the tension of the plot can be polished more, so that the protagonist can make more risky and helpless choices in desperate situations, which will be more eye-catching.

Judging from the previous book, Suiryuu is very good at depicting the characters in Naruto. The characters in the previous book are basically the same as those in the original book. I think the Konoha heroes are well written, but unfortunately they are reduced to cheerleaders due to the huge span of their combat power. This time, bringing Xiang Ling and Baidu into Konoha should be the intention to write in this direction. This is also in line with the theme of Naruto's bond. I look forward to the interaction between the protagonist and Sasuke Neji.

The reincarnation eye is a rare eye. Otsutsuki Amamura, the younger brother of Six Paths Sage, also has white eyes Kaguya also does not have the reincarnation eye. 1. The reincarnated eye evolved from the Byakugan, but there is no precedent. I think it was Yue Otsutsuki who unintentionally fused a large number of Byakugan in the process of pursuing power, which was an unexpected gain. Otsutsuki Hamura came up with the puppet technique (after the end of Naruto, the official came up with a free world view), and Moon Otsutsuki discovered that this huge eye can make the puppet have basic intelligence, so it is called the reincarnation eye. 2. Judging from the current Tenseigan theatrical version, the conditions for awakening are absolutely pure Byakugan + giant Tenseigan guidance. Pure Byakugan + Otsutsuki's physique will definitely not work. Otherwise, how could Hamura and Kaguya not have the Tenseigan? Byakugan is the evolutionary basis of all eyes. Different conditions lead to different eyes. In the universe Otsutsuki, basically everyone has one pair of samsara eyes. In other words, byakugan to samsara eye are known to Ōtsutsuki. 3. The pure eye is another evolutionary type of the Byakugan, and it is also a rare eye. Hinata + Naruto, their son has a pure eye, so it is basically inferred that it is the Byakugan + Uzumaki constitution, and there is a probability of evolving the pure eye Otsutsuki's physique has strong resilience, which is the manifestation of the Yang Shield. In the Naruto worldview, there is a strong focus on investigating the changes in the properties of carat in the early stage. Different changes in properties bring different expressive powers. Few people optimize this aspect of content. The physiques of the Uzumaki clan and the Kaguya clan are different manifestations of Yang escape.

"The Remaining Uchiha Forced to Save the Ninja World" Author: Dragon of Fantasy

One day I met Poseidon, and I prayed to Poseidon, "God, please let the water dragon stay out of the water." Poseidon smiled and said: "When you dive into the deepest source of the seabed, you will understand that there is nothing I can do about it." I dived through the submersible, and for three days and nights I finally saw the source of the seafloor, and saw a book "The Remaining Uchiha Forced to Save the Ninja World" on it. Poseidon appeared again and said to me: "I am a book spirit, and I have too much water. I can change my job to become Poseidon, so there is nothing I can do👐"

[Everyone knows about animation, let's talk about comics here] The fact that the Rinnegan is the evolution of the Sharingan is Kabuto's guess. Strictly speaking, the Rinnegan and the Sharingan are branched and parallel relationships. Kabuto's knowledge is limited and cannot be used as the final answer. But it can be seen that both are derived from the Nine Magatama Reincarnation Sharingan It is the original adaptation of the animation that evolved from the Three Magatama, and there is no such plot in the comics. . . . The Samsara Eye is: the fusion of Indra Chakra and Asura Chakra, leading to the chakra power of the Six Paths Sage to open the eyes. In layman's terms, you just use the chakra of the Six Paths Sage to activate it. Theoretically, there is no restriction on the Sharingan. Of course, considering the difficulty of Madara opening the Samsara Eye, and the fact that Sasuke and even the Six Paths Sage personally helped, the Samsara Eye may need a high-level carrier like the Reincarnation Eye. The reincarnation eye requires high-purity white eyes, and the reincarnation eye may also need similar high-grade eyes as a carrier to successfully open it. Essentially, the chakra related to the samsara eye originating from the sacred tree was passed down to Otsutsuki Hagoromo when Kaguya blessed him with a child. . . . The difference between the two is the professional direction After Obito transplanted the Rinnegan, it also showed that he was still more optimistic about the Sharingan in terms of dynamic vision. Having seen the Sage of Six Paths and having seen a lot over the years, the Eight-Tails had obviously seen the Sharingan and the Rinnegan in the Jinchuriki's eyes, and thought it was the Sharingan that saw through the action, not the Rinnegan. Even Madara switches his Rinnegan back to Sharingan to cast genjutsu. (He had already entered the Rinnegan state before) This at least shows that in the same state of filth, the Sharingan is still more useful than the Rinnegan in illusions. In the subsequent plot, Madara even made a kaleidoscope in one eye and a Rinnegan in the other. If the Rinnegan ability is a comprehensive improvement of the Sharingan, why would he switch back to a Sharingan when he had already switched to both Rinnegans before? I remember that when he was fighting with Hashirama, one of his eyes was also in the kaleidoscope state The same is true for Kaguya. Infinite Tsukuyomi is the power of illusion. It was clearly pointed out thatshe used the power of Sharingan to perform this technique. Even she used the power of the Sharingan in the Rinne Sharingan to perform this ultimate genjutsu, further illustrating the problem To sum up, why did Madara choose to conquer the tailed beasts by beating them to the ground and pulling them, instead of the genjutsu control that should be easier in theory? Because he had to maintain the Rinnegan in order to control the heretic demon, he could not cut the Sharingan. The Rinnegan was inferior to the Sharingan in terms of illusion ability, so he did not use illusion. . . . The Rinnegan is the Samsara Eye, and the Sharingan is the Sharingan. Both are derived from the Samsara Sharingan, but they have branching and parallel relationships The Rinnegan's ability in some places is not as good as the Sharingan, which is enough to show that the Samsara Eye is not the evolution of the Sharingan, but another pupil power. The Samsara Eye has a stronger lower limit of pupil power, more comprehensive power (providing full attribute chakra), more auxiliary abilities (power of six paths, black rod, etc.), And a wider field of vision (can see the wheel tomb). The Rinnegan can give you a very high foundation. The classic 5A panel The lower limit of the Sharingan's pupil power is obviously inferior, but the kaleidoscope is worse than the Rinnegan in terms of dynamic vision, that is, the breadth of the field of view is not as good but the accuracy is better, and it surpasses the Rinnegan in the ability to release illusions, which is a specialization. Moreover, there is the Kamui Sharingan Eye Technique which is not weaker than the Rinne Eye Technique. The Rinnegan Eye is more comprehensive, while the Sharingan Eye is more specialized. The lower limit of the Rinnegan is much higher than that of the Sharingan, but there is actually no difference between the two in the upper limit. . The Rinne Sharingan is the fusion state of the Sharingan and the Rinnegan. It has the power of both. Magatama represents the level of the Sharingan. The Eternal Kaleidoscope probably corresponds to the six-magatama Sharingan level. In the same way, Kaguya's Sharingan level is as high as nine-magatama. So Sasuke can control tailed beasts with the Rinne Sharingan one-eye genjutsu, and his Six Magatama Rinne Sharingan can release Amaterasu, because the power of his Rinnegan and Sharingan are fused. . ◎The biggest feature of the Sharingan should be its long-distance projection of pupil power. The Rinnegan does not show much ability to use gaze to project pupil power and release illusions by looking at each other, but this is only a basic ability for the Sharingan. The gaze focuses on remote Amaterasu, Kamui, etc., Which also shows that the Sharingan can not only project illusions, but also certain special techniques. Six Paths Madara still rubs the gravitational source when making meteorites, but Sasuke only needs a glance to directly explode the sky star. Purely projecting the pupil power of the Rinnegan basically requires the help of the black rod After integrating the power of the Sharingan, some of the abilities of the Rinnegan no longer require contact to be released, but can be used remotely with gaze. Kaguya's Infinite Tsukuyomi should be based on the moonlight (Sharingan eye power), projecting the Infinite Tsukuyomi (the illusion of the samsara eye, the eyes of the person who performs the technique are in the shape of the samsara eye). Sasuke does not need a black rod, he can directly project the genjutsu power of the Rinnegan and the Sharingan with his eyes at the same time (the tailed beast's eyes are Magatama Rinnegan) . ◎PS: As mentioned in the picture above, when the Samsara Eye opens, part of the Asura Chakra participates in the fusion, which shows that not all of the Asura Chakra is related to the Samsara Eye. Similarly, the Sharingan is good at some abilities that the Samsara Eye is not good at, which shows that not all Indra Chakra is related to the Samsara Eye. So,Indra's Yin Escape can also be divided into two parts. What is needed to open the Samsara Eye is the part of the Yin Escape power other than the Sharingan Eye. That is: Asura Chakra Yang Release: Immortal Human Body Yang Release + Samsara Eye Yang Release Indra Chakra Yin Release: Sharingan Eye Yin Release + Samsara Eye Yin Release . . The setting of Sasuke's eyes has also gone through a period of changes. One time it was the Rinnegan, and the next it was the Rinne Sharingan. But currently, his Six Magatama Rinnegan is the [Rinne Sharingan]. . . So the Rinnegan Eye awakens and loses the Eye Technique... Simply because the Rinnegan Eye does not have the ability to share the Sharingan Eye, just switch back. Whether according to the evolution theory of the animation or the branch theory of the comics, it is quite strange to open the Rinnegan Eye without the Kaleidoscope Eye Technique. This plot is quite strange) PS: This post is just to read the plot, so I have nothing to do to talk about the situation in the comics. After all, everyone knows the setting of the animation. I hope you don't go too far and end up with the difficult idea that the animation won't work because of the different settings.

Please reply together. First of all, people are always alive, but I was too exhausted from writing the previous book, so I took a break, but I didn't die 😅 As for the plot, when I conceived this book, I didn't plan to write a traditional Naruto story. First of all, there are too many articles in this category, and there are so many excellent ones that it is difficult to come up with anything interesting. Secondly, it is difficult to arouse creative passion by repeating what has been written before So innovation is a must. It's just that no one knows which direction of innovation is right and which direction is wrong. They can only take the first step and try. For those students who don't like it, I can only say sorry, because it is really difficult to cover everything. As for the doubts of some students, the subsequent plot will unfold slowly, but what I want to say is that the main part of the story is still in the world of Naruto. You can rest assured about this. Finally, I hope everyone can discuss it rationally. I have never had many restrictions on the book review section. Readers of the previous book all know this, so everyone can speak freely when discussing the plot, but don't criticize me right away, saying what a sales account, a studio, etc. In addition, {"NickName":"Fantasy Town of God","UserId":222874496}

I guess I've spent all the money I earned from writing books, and I'll come back and make money writing books.

The toxicity of this chapter suddenly explodes. The ghost's cells suddenly have both "cell wall" and "bioelectricity" properties. Is the author really a nine-leaf fish? Why do you think a vegetative person is called a vegetative person? Plant cells cannot transmit nerve substances because of their cell walls, because the cell walls are inanimate. Various stress responses of plants are realized through changes in potential energy caused by changes in cell fluid concentration. The process is slow and the response range is limited. Then the question is, why do all cells have cell walls and have fast nerve conduction functions based on bioelectricity?

How can I say that even though the recent Naruto writing is not that good, it is possible to have such impressive data with just 9 chapters? The smooth writing and beautiful rhythm make it look more and more wrong... It turns out to be Brother Suiryu.

I came here from Tenseigan. It is said that although Tenseigan has many shortcomings, it is still a good book with good quality, rigorous setting and smooth plot. I also pride myself on having high poison resistance. But for this new Water Dragon book, I just want to say: This is a bad book! Poison book! Stinky book! Nausea! I just want to ask, is this number the same as mine? How did you eliminate all the good points of the previous book, inherit all the shortcomings of the slow plot, and make you happy? Seven hundred chapters later, after the Demon Slayer World was solved, forty characters returned to the plot, and the vest never fell off. There was no pretentious plot at all. If you don't want to write it, just make a statement early and stop writing it. What the hell? ! Don't force old fans to become blackheads!

I am 80% sure that Suiryu's account has been changed. Although the new author's writing style is not bad and the creativity of the book is first-rate, the common sense setting problem of TM is too big. Can the two magatama of the two pillars control the Kyuubi? And everyone actually believed it! ? What about rationality? I don't believe Suiryu can make such a low-level mistake. Although there are many minor problems in the reincarnation, the pursuit of rationality is not low at all. The strength and strengthening of all characters have their own rationality.

The protagonist is chosen to fight the "Plane Invasion". Is it chosen by the will of the earth or the will of the universe? Can he transform into Ultraman Gaia or Regedo?

I don't mean to look down on Demon Slayer, but based on Demon Slayer's fighting power, can Muzan be able to surpass Temari in the forest? Why didn't Demon Slayer invade Hokage and be beaten to death easily? As for the recovery that relies on consuming physical strength, it is not certain whether you can withstand a huge fire ball.

How should I put it, it doesn't feel right? What about the Uchiha in the beginning, the random intrusion, Haku inexplicably in Konoha, the system, other comic elements (demon slayer), etc. It's too complicated and messy, and Uchiha's writing is bad now.

I can't stand the water of Suiryu anymore. I still have a lot to write about in the Tenseigan book. I plan to write another one along the lines of that book. Taking the path of Suiryu will leave Suiryu with nowhere to go haha ​​😁