The World of Heavens Starts from Hong Kong Comprehensive

This is my first time writing. Please be careful. If there are too many typos, I won't mention them. There are a lot of key chapters that cannot be connected. The previous chapter and the next chapter are completely different. Are you trying to persuade someone to quit?

If you follow Brother Crow, won't you have to starve for nine meals in three days?

I just don't speak, doesn't mean I don't watch

Will there be Mona up and down and left and right?

I haven't felt anything after reading about 10 chapters.

The first thing you do when you travel is to know how many meals you have eaten in three days, and Shenma plans to step aside in the future.

I don't know what it's about, I don't know who the protagonist is,

Yes, yes, there are so many awesome people, natural powers, and the writing is more realistic.

Are you hanging out with crows? The elder brother who was hungry for nine meals in three days

It doesn't have any flavor of Hong Kong variety! The first chapter has a taste of Beijing movies. Please be serious. Please revise it.

Be careful, brothers, so that the brothers who invest don't lose money.

Are all the typos in the introduction?

Brother, I don't even know what I'm looking at now. I went in confused and came out confused.

Watching a little bit, I feel like the protagonist doesn't know what he is doing and has nightmares every day.

What should you do if Young and Dangerous wants you to kill someone?

. . . I don't understand the introduction. I suggest you modify it. The typos in the introduction are outrageous.

Why do I find that I can't understand who the protagonist is.

I don't understand what you're writing. It's strange.

Plan A was the wrong choice, Plan Eagle is almost the same

The writing is messy, the main character's name changes from one moment to the next, the viewing angle is also very messy, the writing is also unsatisfactory and the content is unsatisfactory.

What a fun way to write, the protagonist changes so quickly

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

If you write about undercover, your superiors still say you can't kill people, so why not just write about police!

Inexplicably changing the protagonist? ? ? So speechless.

Not even a monthly pass. . . .