Try to Sleep in the Haunted House and Get the Babel at the Beginning

I know the author wants to write a free protagonist. Can the protagonist be single? Author, I don't even have the desire to read anymore. I already know who the heroine is from the beginning, and I already know the rest of the plot! It's really boring. There are still favors. To be honest, I don't see any use of the sleeping pills you exchanged for favors. Do you know how much 100 pounds of sleeping pills are? Forget it, don't you think you have a weakness by assigning a female protagonist to the originally free-spirited protagonist?

After reading three chapters, I feel so embarrassed and confused, so confident? You start doing missions without knowing what your combat power is. Are you afraid that you won't die quickly enough? The book that I was sure to read slipped away.

System documentation is fine, but you can't rely on the system for everything. I can't stand it when I see Shenji Bailian not using it myself but relying on system upgrades. Goodbye.

There is a system whose strength is so low. Don't write about the system you are writing about. You might as well write about adventures.

I just saw the 6th picture and couldn't stand it anymore. A pig lasts for more than ten seconds. Do you have no idea about pigs? Although it is a roasted suckling pig, it may be smaller. Author: Did you eat like this in real life? If so, it's my fault.

See twenty-one chapters, extremely poisonous.

Invincible flow? I hope there will be a clear main line and core. If there are too many elements, adding a little bit of everything will easily lead to a messy hodgepodge. It is better to have a clearer goal.

The main character is a pig. You can feed as much as a hundred people by yourself. It only takes a whole village to provide you with food.

It's about the Eight Wonders, Chapter 26, I can't stand it anymore, the world is small, the wording is vague, and the Eight Wonders are just a gimmick. Generally speaking, it's okay to read money-making books or read books to pass the time. Forget the rest...

The more I look at it, the more something is wrong. Why are the Eight Magic Skills so weak?

Chapter 33 I really can't stand it anymore, so I'm withdrawing it. Goodbye.

The great eunuch of Qidian has published a new book to trick people 😁. What you wrote is never finished.

After watching it for dozens of times, I always feel like something is wrong.

The writing is very smooth, not like a novice, and you are really quick to put it on the shelves.