Be the Good Son-In-Law of Qin Shihuang

The plot of this book is okay, the main plot is clear, but the writing is not good, and the protagonist is a bit brainless. If you want to survive in the historical area, you must pay attention to the details. For example, the protagonist will kill the royal people at every turn like urban literature. This is a sign of rebellion in the eyes of ancient rulers. You are insulting the ruler and damaging the royal prestige among the people. Moreover, Qin Shihuang is a king and a hegemon. Although he has You have the courage to hand over power to others, but as a king, he must know balance, just like no one family dominates the court. Many of the things you improved are nonsense and nonsense in my opinion. Although you know it, you just brush it off, but it is impossible to achieve according to the technology at the time. Details are very important in writing historical texts. You can't treat readers as fools. Although the words are a bit heavy, details are very important in the historical area, otherwise you can only have fun.

I don't read The Immortal Confucian Who Travels Through History. If I wrote about it, I would directly destroy Goukong's ancestors. Because throughout the five thousand years, when Confucianism flourished, the country must be weak, weak externally, and violent internally. All the crises of extinction of Chinese civilization caused by foreign invasions all appeared one after another after the emergence of Confucianism. Travel through time to destroy Confucianism and support hundreds of schools of thought. The Chinese civilization could dominate the earth a thousand years ago.

It's embarrassing, the beginning is so dramatic, Qin Chao, where did he get the flour to make steamed buns, where did he get the chairs, where did he get the copper plates, where did he get the self-proclaimed slave. . . . . Don't say I'm a keyboard warrior, I've been poisoned to death

I've read less than ten chapters, but what's the point? Let's not talk about chickens and rabbits in the same cage. If you ask Brother Zheng to open a school, you won't survive the next day. No one will talk to you when you open a private school. Does the author know the interests of the family? This is the key point. The word "always, always," was used in ancient times. It's embarrassing to read.

There are various reasons for dissuading people to quit. No author with a little common sense would dare to write that in the Qin Dynasty, he asked the waiter to serve pork elbows with roasted chicken, beef in sauce, and soju. The pork elbows were not castrated in ancient times and tasted very spicy. Moreover, there was no cooking method for pork elbows in the Qin Dynasty. Roast chicken required spices. I don't know the price of the spices at that time, but they would definitely not be used to make roast chicken. The most poisonous thing was the beef in soy sauce. How did you get the sauce? Where did the beef come from? I want to go to jail and tell the truth. In ancient times, cows had to be reported. Raising cows to death was a crime. Even if they died of illness or accident, they had to be investigated and recorded. It is impossible to order beef in a restaurant, or beef with soy sauce. I accepted it.

I'm afraid this introduction was written by an illiterate person! The first emperor of the Chen Sheng and Wu Guang uprising had died long ago.

Your introduction is so vicious. Who dares to rebel until the First Emperor dies? Don't you know how strong Qin's soldiers and armor were at that time? I don't even know what to say about you. Xiang Yu, Liu Bang, Chen Sheng, and Wu Guang all dared to rebel after Hu Hai succeeded to the throne after the death of the First Emperor. I didn't know that I was going to Baidu to check more information and was writing a novel. Although it is a novel, can I hope the author can be more rigorous?

Chapter 3 persuades him to quit. Does the store sell soy beef? Let's not talk about where the soy sauce came from at that time. Is it illegal to kill a cow? The protagonist also plans to sell barbecue. You must know that salt was bitter and poisonous at that time. Vinegar cloth seasoning to understand. Why don't we just stop writing history, that's all?

Is the author a graduate of Shanghai Japanese School?

Most of the descriptions in this book are not in line with the times. The author's historical knowledge is not very good, so I do not recommend reading it.

If nothing else, the emperor is looking for death if he breaks the law and commits the same crimes as the common people. Let's change him to a young master.

When I saw something like silver in the first picture, I knew I couldn't read this book. As a 10-year-old bookworm, I would like to ask why there are always bastard authors, and some people say that it is just a novel, so why read it with your brain?

A time traveler like you couldn't survive a day in that era.

Introduction Idiot, who knew Liu Bang was that green onion at first?

If you use the concepts of later dynasties to apply to the Qin Dynasty, you can build a telescope and be criticized for your ingenuity. If this is true, the Mo family will smash your hometown the next day.

The most poisonous thing is that there are many people who wear Qin. Just don't kill Liu Bang, Chen Sheng, and Wu Guang. Xiang Yu's whole family was wiped out. Kill the nobles of the seven countries. Even if you call it killing, there are other things like Bang Guangsheng. Throughout ancient times, those who have successfully rebelled are the landlords and aristocratic families. Stronger than the Beggar Emperor. Didn't he just start off by marrying a landowner's wife? During the rebellion, people continued to kill. Landowners, wealthy gentry and aristocratic families are all targets. On the contrary, real grassroots rebellion has never succeeded in killing the landlords and gentry families.

You have to pay attention to the way people spoke and addressed themselves in the pre-Qin period. As well as things that did not exist at that time (such as food, paper, etc.), The arrival of these things will cause a big sensation.

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Didn't Xiang Liang and Xiang Yu dare to rebel only after the death of Qin Shihuang? Did I remember it wrong?

The author told me that this is the Qin Dynasty in another parallel world, right? Sauced beef? Typhoid? This is definitely another parallel universe.

After reading a few chapters, I was already poisoned. This book is the urban version of Qin Dynasty! Beef, iron smelting, brewing, these can already be Lingchi! If it doesn't work, have a car crash! Even me, a person with a half-baked history, was embarrassed when I saw it! Even if you don't know anything about it, you have to simplify it and get it in!

I hope the author will consider historical facts when writing and not just write whatever he wants.

By the way, the Qin Dynasty should have used half a tael😄!

This process is too fast. The short-lived gun is a joy.

Da Qin's common sense, please note that if you write this, the book is finished Has the author read similar novels? ! !

The transition is too abrupt and the separation between life and death is awkward. There is no sense of involvement.