Looting Corpses Along the Grand Line

Why spend so much time writing supporting characters? In the end, the supporting character couldn't survive. I really don't know what the author meant. Water is not like this.

It is recommended that the pickup mode be changed to automatically pick up within a certain range. You should touch them one by one until when. You cannot touch the ones killed by others, otherwise it is a bad rule. As for the ones you kill yourself... How many years do you plan to kill in terms of the current combat power? There is still a time limit for the drop rewards, which is quite embarrassing. What's the point of restricting the protagonist's strength development from all aspects? If the fan fiction has too many restrictions, it will not be fun.

To be fair, you've written 70 chapters, and the protagonist can't beat even a 5 million bounty player. With this level of cheating, the protagonist of Luffy Going to the Sea can survive for 20 million, and the protagonist doesn't have a decisive power, which is a big move.

The progression of the plot to killing the Celestial Dragons is too retarded. There is absolutely no need to kill them, just to show off. To save Robin is to save Robin and leave, or to use the Celestial Dragon's mental retardation to disgust Doflamingo. Watching the trap fall down, and after saving the person, without thinking of trying to trap the trapper, the Tianlong people casually killed him? Forget it, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

It's getting more and more boring. It feels like the main character's goal is to be similar to a dragon. A person with such a golden finger turns out to be a passionate young man who loves adventure and peace. If it is wasted, it is better to give it to Blackbeard or Dover.

To be honest, it's too watery. Some useless attributes can be omitted directly, and the attribute introduction can also be removed. For example, strength, constitution, agility, etc., I think everyone knows what they are used for, so there is no need for you to explain them. If it is still so watery later, this book can only read the free chapters. Also, the pace of your book is too slow.

It's a mess, and I have to write down some data in every chapter. It's really ugly. Nausea

Author, what have you been writing about in the past two days? Isn't the main character a door fruit? You can kill the Celestial Dragon in seconds, just open the door and walk away. It's too blunt to suddenly pretend to be B. I told you before that the protagonist's strength should not be mentioned too quickly. Before defeating Lao Sha, he was killing more than 2 million pirates. Now he suddenly becomes a general, and Brother Ming has become trash. If you are growing your strength, take your time, if you are invincible, take less action. Have you read Arceus's Pirate Journey next door? It's the best pirate novel. The protagonist of that book is Invincible Ryuuzi. Please read more of other people's books. You wrote the growth stream well in the early stage, but now you suddenly start to engage in the invincible stream. So what do you do with your system? Are you planning to use Menmen Fruit to go to other worlds to engage in Zhutianliu? It's best not to open Zhutianliu, Pirates, you didn't even write clearly.

The usage of the Gate Fruit is too monotonous. If you don't know how to use it, just learn Uchiha Obito, how easy it is.

It's all water. This golden finger can obviously write very well, so it has to be suppressed.