Cheating in a Mythic Text Game

Don't follow in the footsteps of secular gods. That garbage romance book only pretends to be stupid, disgusts the readers, and destroys the combat power. It's okay in the past. When the player battle comes, it directly suppresses the protagonist and makes fun of the villain. It's so funny. I've only heard of it being written for the protagonist, but that book is written for the villain. After reading it for a long time, I became a clown.

This Chinese folklore and mythological theme is indeed more attractive than Western fantasy. You can arrange the foreign plot to be Western fantasy, while the Eastern one is mainly based on Chinese mythology. After all, several ancient civilizations still have a lot of foundation in mythology, and they cannot be replaced by Western fantasy.

It's uglier than the real-life descriptions of secular masters, but that's okay

The writing is substandard, the main problem lies in the writing, but in terms of plot, I think it's passable. There are many missing words and sentences. Didn't you read it yourself after you finished writing? It's too careless, and it's stumbling to read, forcing readers to read at a glance and swallow everything in order to proceed smoothly. And many words and phrases are used incorrectly. I don't know whether to say that your writing skills are too shallow, or that you are careless. A typical example is "doing". "Doing" appears N times in the novel. You make mistakes again and again. I can only think that you don't know which one is right. And things like Chapter 18. "But if that's the case, why didn't the divine craftsman Tianguan research and build it himself?" Even the basic combinations of words and sentences are used incorrectly. Either write "Could it be..." Or "Why..." And remove the "?" There are many such errors, so I won't list them all. If you are just careless, then be careful when writing and read it yourself after writing, which can basically improve the quality of the novel by several levels. If you really try your best and are only at this level, then you can only rely on yourself to read more, accumulate more, and learn more. Reading here does not mean reading novels, but reading more classics and cultivating a sense of language.

Tsk! Another studio article! Stop losses immediately if the data is bad! Unfortunately, I still have 5 chapters scheduled.

Has the author never written about daily life? The writing is so bad that I can't read it for free.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

Every time I switch to reality, it feels very stiff and looks weird, but I can't tell what's weird about it.

Why doesn't the author update? What happened?

What the protagonist does is really painful.