Transmigrating into Battle Through the Heavens with the Ancestral Talisman

The author has changed, but I want to tell you that Lin Dong basically has no dark spots, and the ending is even a bit cruel. You can trick Lin Dong like you tricked Xiao Yan, or accept him as your younger brother, but if you make Lin Dong into a strange demon, your book will basically be useless.

If you want to complain, you have to spend a dollar. The author didn't write anything of his own. He just followed the original work and made various cuts. I only read the first few dozen chapters. As for the title of the book, the Devouring Ancestral Talisman, apart from the opportunity to cut off Xiao Yan, does he have no own ideas at all? Why don't you just kill Xiao Yan and snatch the Yao Lao ring and follow the plot and become the protagonist yourself? It was originally based on the title of the book to see how Devouring the Ancestral Talisman can be played in Dou Po, but in the end, there is no plot of its own at all. The whole story follows the original plot. The key protagonist is a bit cheap, which makes people more and more annoying as I read it.

Isn't the highlight of this book what will happen in the Wudong Qiankun's cultivation system in Doupo? As a result, the author forcibly cuts off the path of Tianfu Master, saying that Wudong's soul training is not suitable for Doupo. In the two hundred chapters, he has used the Swallowing Ancestral Talisman less than ten times, and in martial arts there is only a demon-modified version of the Qingtian Dragon Transformation Technique The protagonist is still practicing Douqi and refining medicine. What is the difference between this and the people who have passed through the earth directly? Wouldn't it be better to just give the protagonist a setting with strong soul power? Why bring martial arts? If you bring martial arts and say that the protagonist comes from martial arts, it turns out that if you don't have martial arts masters or ancestral talismans, you don't need to fight for the strange fire.

Can the protagonist finally become friends with Xiao Yan? After all, Xiao Huohuo is only cruel to his enemies, but he is really good to his relatives and friends. In the original work, he traveled thousands of miles to fight against the entire glacier valley for the Little Medical Fairy, fought against the entire North Pavilion of Fenglei Pavilion for the Han family he had just met, and exposed Lin Yan in front of Lord Lei. He also had a holiday with Liu Qing when he was in the academy. Later, He also helped the Liu family a lot, even if he had only met Uncle Kasha twice, he saved his family twice. Having a friend like Xiao Yan is really very comfortable, and it completely explains the concept of "spending time for a friend". Having a friend like Xiao Yan will make it easier to fight against evil tribes outside the territory in the future, right?

According to the description in the original work of Wu Dong Qian Kun, Fu Zu was a person from the Great Thousand World. However, in the memories of the Eight Ancient Masters, Fu Zu also used Yuan Li, and he broke through the ancestral realm in Tianxuan Continent. Then we can draw a conclusion that Fuzu was in the supreme state of Dzogchen when he was in the Great Thousand World. In order to break through the heavenly supreme, he sought the fetus of the lower plane and came to Tianxuan Continent. However, he found that the fetus of the plane was not good enough for a person from this other world. So in order to increase the affinity with the fetus of the plane, Fuzu made a bold decision to dissipate all his spiritual power and cultivate Yuanli. During the rebuilding period, he created his own Supreme Sensing Technique to communicate with the planes, and used the power of the Supreme to break through the ancestral realm. It must be said that Fu Zu is a ruthless person. In order to go further, he even dares to re-cultivate his San Gong. Even the three protagonists Xiao Yan, Lin Dong and Muchen do not dare to try this kind of thing. 🤫🤫🤫

I don't understand, since we already have the Qingtian Dragon Transformation Art, why do we need to go to extra trouble to get the Emperor's Seal Art? Also, why do you want to prevent Xiao Yan from getting the Fallen Heart Flame? The protagonist himself has no use for this thing. The protagonist also knows that there is still an infant Fallen Heart Flame deep in the magma. Xiao Yan has refined the Fallen Heart Flame, and the inner courtyard will not suffer any losses. In this case, why should it be stopped? Now that the Emperor's Seal Jue has been cut off, the protagonist has no enmity with Xiao Yan, so it's understandable to do something good, but it's too much to harm others without benefiting oneself! Why do I feel that if the author continues to write like this, he will arrange for Xiao Yan to die at the hands of the Soul Clan, and then the protagonist will receive Xiao Yan's inheritance. 🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫

As I expected, the energy core of the Dou Sheng level has the same energy as a Dou Sheng. After refining, the protagonist still remains at Dou Zun. The reason is that the energy core of the Dou Sheng is too huge, so the protagonist absorbs the energy and farts the energy at the same time. 😳😳😳😳😳😳

Lin Dong has offended you, go crazy. Before, you were doing public ownership, but now you are like a crazy person. I have been chasing the book for half a year, but the writing is getting worse and worse.

The protagonist already has the Qinglian Earth Heart Fire, so it is best not to engage in the Fallen Heart Flame. The reasons are as follows: First, the protagonist has not practiced the Burning Technique, and different fires are incompatible. If he does it forcefully, it will explode, and it will most likely kill him. This is how Lord Skyfire died. (The leader of the Yan Clan could only suppress the conflict between the two alien fires with the strength of the Eight-Star Fighting Saint.) Many fan fictions can fuse multiple alien fires without the Burning Technique, which is completely contrary to the original setting and is simply written randomly. Second, refining the strange fire will not improve the cultivation level. This is clearly set in the original work. Except for Xiao Yan who practices the Burning Technique, everyone including Yao Lao refines the strange fire and stores it in the Naling. When needed, it can be mobilized with Dou Qi. At best, the strange fire is like a piece of equipment, which will improve the attack and defense attributes, but will not increase the level. After Xiao Yan refined the alien fire, he also used the Burning Technique to completely devour it. When the skill evolved, the cultivation level would also increase, so it was the Burning Technique, not the Alien Fire, that helped improve the cultivation level. In this way, for the protagonist who owns the ancestral talisman, the bonus of the alien fire is negligible. To sum up, the protagonist has not practiced the Burning Technique. It is not only dangerous but also useless to engage in the second strange fire. It is completely thankless. 🤫 In addition, many Dou Po fan novels are about cutting off Hu Burning Jue and then cutting off Hu Yihuo. They are completely Xiao Yan's reskin. They are tired of aesthetics, which is very unoriginal. Writing inherently tests the author's creative ability, and the protagonist cannot follow Xiao Yan's path in the original work. 🤫 Another suggestion is that when the protagonist has the Flame Ancestral Talisman in the future, he can give Qinglian Earth Core Fire to Qinglin. 😚 The secret realm of the Black Corner Domain is a good starting point. You can set up that the Dou Qi Continent has also been invaded by evil tribes from outside the territory (Spirit Swallowing Tribe), so a set of ancestral talismans was born. It can be assumed that the resonance between the ancestral symbols transports the protagonist's soul to the Dou Qi Continent. There is a flame ancestral symbol in the secret realm. In the future, the protagonist can find all the ancestral symbols in other places in the Dou Qi Continent. In this way, the plot can be separated from Xiao Yan first, without being mixed together all the time.

The writing is okay, but please don't make the protagonist's character too out of the ordinary.