Across the Heavens, Starting with Lake Changjin

I have some suggestions for the author, and I just happened to reply to a comment that came to mind. The previous protagonists in the War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea all improved their personal abilities. It can be said that now he has no problem wandering around alone to fight for a basic company, but this is basically the limit of personal force without cultivating immortals. It happened to be written that the starting identity of the leader of the dungeon happened to be the leader, which just allowed the protagonist to exercise his leadership in this dungeon. Ability, training the ability to lead a regiment, a brigade, a division or even more. In this way, in the future, when writing about the Western Front battlefield of World War II, the protagonist's identity can be directly raised to a high level but he has good ability to lead troops. Writing can also be very brilliant. Otherwise, it would be too cliche to just rely on personal ability to wander around the soldiers. , Falling into a cliché is nothing more than constantly improving personal abilities, changing locations, and opening up restricted scripts. It is really meaningless to watch too much. It is better to introduce it step by step, so that it can play a decisive role in many battlefields, and then you can change a lot of plots and have a lot of explosive points, instead of watching the plot to take your own way. You can't change it. It's okay at first. But as the protagonist gets stronger and stronger, you will feel a sense of tearing. He is obviously strong enough, but actually playing soy sauce on the battlefield is not fun enough. However, your position is purely military and you cannot write the protagonist to be as strong as a cultivator. Then change it to become stronger and stronger in the ability to lead troops. There is still much to write about.

Laughing to death, how stupid is it for a modern person to travel back in time to that era and go to the battlefield? If the bullets on the battlefield don't have eyes or a halo, they will die early. The biggest thing for a modern person is the knowledge in his head. If you go to the battlefield and kill a thousand or ten thousand people, it will not be as good as the future that modern people know. With the knowledge provided, going to the battlefield is just the stupidest choice.

Having a protagonist is the same as not having a protagonist. I am afraid of changing the plot. Every time I let the protagonist fall into trouble following the plot, and then sing over and over again to sensationalize. Too much chicken blood will make people feel tired.

Nonsense, three chapters to persuade him to quit, all his property to be given to the country, his skills are quite good, but he still has to fight with others before he can join the army? What rubbish plot

During the War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea, the memoirs of South Korean general Bai Shanye: "The food of the US military is divided into three grades: A, B, and C. Grade A is Western food including steak, grade B is hot sausages and other hot foods, and grade C, the worst, is canned food and convenient field foods. The Korean army has an adequate supply of rice, and they can often eat seaweed, squid, and even kimchi that are flown in from Japan. The rations for the volunteers are fried sorghum, millet, and soybeans.

Entering the pit from Changjin Lake, I was moved by Shangganling. I saw Chapter 52 of abandoning the pit in Shangganling. Changjin Lake may be the opening chapter, and the writing is above average. The author of Shangganling is getting better and better, and the writing is touching, and also has some hints of preaching and science popularization. This is tolerable, but the more you write, the more you write, and the further you go, the more you feel visual fatigue. Let's leave the rest first. I don't dare to read it. I will keep it to see the effect!

This is the period of 1951, when Chinese and American soldiers used individual equipment.

Don't ever draw a sword, you'll almost have a phobia of drawing swords😨

I discovered this novel the day before yesterday. Generally speaking, I think it's pretty good. There's just one problem. I don't feel happy about it! Your comrade has extremely low ideological consciousness. He kills all enemies at every turn, shoots at enemies who are injured and begging for mercy, and leaves no one alive at every turn! It looks so cool! But, why, the three major disciplines and eight points of attention are no longer needed? You're going to make a mistake! Our army has always treated prisoners preferentially. Even during the Anti-Japanese War, you will still be punished for your actions! I don't know for a moment whether you are hacking our army!

27th Army Attrition Report