Unrestricted Adaptation

I'm speechless. Later in the writing, I started to talk about the way of faith. The protagonist is like a villain and has no style at all. He uses deception to clone someone else's mother, saying that he can resurrect his mother and gain the power of faith. Is this something that humans do? This is a pure-blooded human being. It is simply a birth, but there are many births among humans. Also, in the beginning, so many city slaves sacrificed themselves for the protagonist to escape, but the protagonist arrived two years late, and all the city slaves were sacrificed to death by blood. However, the protagonist did not feel any guilt at all, so he avenged himself and said with peace of mind that he had an explanation for these city slaves. It can only be said that the protagonist is a loser without a golden finger, just like a selfish villain. All the city slaves have given all their hopes to the protagonist. The protagonist has never cared about saving the city slaves from the beginning to the end. Without these city slaves, the protagonist would have died long ago and become a scumbag. He is not even as good as a virgin bitch. I like it if you write it as a virgin, but it is ridiculous if you write it as a villain.

Read four chapters. There is a feeling of fragmentation and stiff connection. First, go down to the city wall, the so-called elder emphasized. Let these slaves not get out of the hood, otherwise they will risk their lives. It means that the other party needs to employ people, but it doesn't have to be so many people. Those who fall behind will not be cared about by the other party. At this time, it was the best time to escape. But the author forced one to be afraid that the other party would find out that he was out of the circle. The protagonist stays in the circle honestly. . . The author forced the circle back. The second point is more blunt. Obtain the orchid tree to prepare the protagonist's backhand at the point where the elder discovers it. It is unreasonable for a high-ranking person to have the time to look at what ants are doing. But the most blunt point is the third point. When collecting exotic flowers. In front of the so-called elders and young masters. Four hundred runes start running away. It's really embarrassing. Others only pay attention to the exotic flowers. Instead of being entangled in something and unable to separate. Don't run away from such a good opportunity in the early stage. It's better now. Running away in front of others when there is such a big noise. The key is when others are not entangled in anything. Isn't this naked jumping on someone's face and slapping someone in the face? The author describes that because other people's attention is distracted, this is the best time to run away. . . . Awkward or not? . .

Let's not talk about the connection being too stiff and the plot being too out-of-the-box. Let's just talk about why Goldfinger, who is so awesome, is superfluous? Why are you talking about past lives when you have such an awesome golden finger? I can understand the cultivation techniques from the triathlon, but I can't find anything else? Or is it impossible? I practiced hard in the winter, practiced in the summer, and took the time to take more than a dozen doctoral degrees. . . If you are so awesome, just focus on studying medicine and improve your medical skills. Isn't it too much to live for a few hundred more years? It's not too much to learn programming and then develop artificial intelligence, right? It's not too much to learn biology and mechanics, and then become a mechanical ascension, right? And then, for such an awesome person, the skills he learned during triathlon are stuck? Moreover, he was smashed away by the giant python, and then he remembered to use the technique to activate it. How can this be a normal person? With this IQ, let alone a doctorate from a university, it would take many years to graduate from a junior college, right? And what is that 100% pure human bloodline for? And what is the left eye of the 11th-level saint doing? Such an awesome bloodline, people with the blood of dragon and phoenix in their bodies are so envious when they see it, but there is no use for it in the book, and then there is a pair of eyes that looks like a dragon and a phoenix, and even eats too much and it even hurts Kunpeng's stomach. . . What is this? String? And you can't say that his bloodline that everyone admires is just because he can transform into a divine beast? To put it all together, isn't this a Tianlong person? A waste with noble blood, weak brains, and no knowledge of anything?

Looking at the first chapter, what the author should do is listen to the readers' opinions and correct the unreasonable parts of the text, rather than arguing with the readers. In order to set up suspense and make the protagonist lose his wits, he picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelon.

The cultivation system that the human race has spent hundreds of millions of years evolving has laid its foundation in your hands. You do not break through the realm, but only break through the foundation. Do you follow the cultivation system? Can't break through to the last level? If you don't lay the foundation, you will die. Many people will die. In order to lay the foundation, a newbie will not break through the realm, but only break through the level. How can he do that? You're just a rookie who doesn't know anything

It's a cookie-cutter novel. With my nearly 20 years of reading experience, I really can't get interested in reading it.

1 Dragon = 5000w kg

I was a little interested in reading the introduction, but after reading the free chapter, let's not talk about the protagonist's personality setting. The introduction alone boasts all the awesomeness, but in fact it is not as outrageous as the introduction says. This unlimited adaptability is not even as good as the absolute adaptability next door. Why is it written in the introduction as if it is really "unlimited"?

The protagonist joins the force too quickly. If you want me, I will first let the protagonist travel around, cause some trouble, and become an alien who does not need to upgrade the fire. Doesn't the protagonist have more than a dozen degrees? Let the protagonist use his own body to do research, open up a new system (with fire and without fire), and then create a mountain gate to become the founder of the sect, become bigger and stronger and create glory again

Isn't this the low-end version of Emperor Yan-Jiang Yannu 🤔? My writing skills are not as good as Cang Yue's and I have to practice more. I hope the author's performance will get better and better.