I Live Forever in Dayu

I came here to comment specifically from an outside site, an 18-year-old bookworm. I hope the author can persevere in this industry and have produced countless fine works in the past few years. Having read countless films, I can honestly say that I can't read many of the books on the current basic ranking list. If the author abandons his writing, it will not only be a loss to the online literary world, but also a loss to himself. He really has the writing skills and ideas of a great master, but he just lacks fame. The novel is very good. You must stick to it. Come on! ! !

So far, this book has been read and updated, and it has a score of about 8.8 Out of 10. The beginning of the longevity stream is the best. The bottom description is very graphic, and it feels like watching a documentary. Everyone's struggle for survival is portrayed very calmly. The writing is very cold, and the people's hearts are also cold. The sentences are concise and the writing is sophisticated, which is rare in online articles. Many online articles nowadays are really poor in language. The sentences are not fluent, there are many typos, improper wording, and the writing is bloated. The minor point is that I lusted after a real-life star. Surviving for so many years and still having an obsession with a star from a previous life is not in line with the tone of the author's book. It is a bit contrived, but it is very short, just a few sentences. Highly recommended for people who like good stories, but not suitable for people who like fast food culture books.

It deserves a reward! Firstly, I am not allowed to engage in free prostitution Secondly, some people say that the protagonist's temperament has changed drastically and he is hypocritical. I think it is indeed the intended meaning of the longevity style, but the temperament change process is a bit blunt and the details are not enough. Thirdly, some people say that the power of the plot collapsed in the later period, but in my opinion, the overall outline and logic of the later period are not too problematic, but it is too simple and lacks process description, giving people the feeling of an assembly line. To sum up, based on my experience of more than 1 billion words of online writing and a starting point of more than 200,000 points, I judge that this work deserves a reward of 50rmb. Keep up the good work, author! 😁😆

Recommend everyone to watch it I was very surprised. At first I really thought it was a trumpet opened by some great god. Very stable style The writing is good, the story structure is good, and the plot rhythm is good What's more important is that the character logic is very clear, and there is no low-level behavior of suppressing the plot for the sake of the article I believe that the author himself has certain experience in society and has a good position in the company. I recommend authors to write carefully and write more, because I know that good online article writers have a lot of money, and I believe your efforts will be rewarded.

Rating: A good book with good subject matter and good writing. The protagonist has no unnecessary emotions and is not a eunuch. He is decisive. So far, it has basically crushed all the books on the list. Personal evaluation: I originally thought it was just an ordinary pretentious system novel, but I didn't expect that it could grasp the plot so well. The rhythm was also very brisk, and I didn't have the urge to skip chapters. If we can continue at this pace and there is more than one female protagonist, I feel that it can become a supplementary article for SouShu. Com and it has a great future.

This book is well written, the writing style is very comfortable, the details are in place, the character of the protagonist, and the three views are also very good. There are no bad points at the moment. It has been a long time since I have seen a book that is so comfortable to read. The only bad thing is that there are too few. You have rested for an hour. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Go and code

At the end of the month, I will directly help you sprint. 6*3 = 18 Monthly tickets are provided. It is up to you whether it explodes in early May or not.

This is my first fully ordered book. I don't want to write it quickly, I just want to ensure the quality. Come on, finish it.

Good book. I have ordered all of it. I am very happy that there are some waves mixed in with this peaceful joy.

In order to comment, I specially linked my mobile phone number. After reading one chapter, I felt that the author's narration was flowing smoothly. It felt like reading a literary novel. It was very comfortable. I liked it so much. Come on! Will continue to read

One update a day is too little for you. You should update it at least twice a day before it goes on sale.

Chapter 1-141, a veritable fairy grass. Due to the emotional outburst in the previous chapters, the following chapters begin the main theme of the book with longevity, which is different from the previous chapters. Personally, I think it is food. It's not that the author's skills have become worse, but that the subject matter itself will limit the reader's perception.

Sanniangzi mother and daughter

The first 150 chapters are about fairy grass, and then it's all about shit.

I ran away after reading Chapter 191. This book is really capable of becoming a god in the early stages, but it becomes cliche later on.

What a pity this book is. The beginning is good, but the rest of it is really hard to explain in one sentence. It's so condescending...

Holy book, one of the best I have ever seen.

With pig's feet being of the third level, is it really suitable for the third lady to be the head wife? ? ? She is married and has children, and her figure and appearance are above average... And I don't feel that the relationship between them is very good. I can only say that the third wife is indeed virtuous. If she is also the eldest heroine in the future, or even the only heroine, she will be somewhat unacceptable...

They start with a younger sister, and then leave her alone and unmarried. I don't even understand what these authors are thinking? If it's not easy to write, you might as well not write.

After reading novels for so long, your book is still my favorite. Your book is my favorite this year. In previous years, it was Lan Ke and Senior Brother. I am so disappointed with the current online articles. I've been reading this year for so long, but I still can't find a novel that can compare with yours. Bah, most of the charts are garbage to me. I have been reading online articles for at least 13 years. I started reading online texts using a keypad machine. At that time, you had to go to a mobile phone store to download novels. I'm too old, I'm an old reader, or a fan of old cool books. There are no new genres in online articles this year. Those online articles will tell you the routine as soon as you look at them. Nausea.

The writing is quite good, and the writing style is also good. I just read Chapter 33, and I asked the big guys who have read the later part, if Sanniangzi is the heroine, if so, I will not read it. . . I simply don't like this type of heroine

What I like the most is the combination of the Fang family's warm daily life and the protagonist's mischief. Now that all the Fang family members are dead, I feel like I have lost my motivation. I will keep it on the bookshelf for now. Remember to kick me when the daily life returns.

Let me summarize the outline of the book: Add points to upgrade to kill Comparison of the living standards of the surrounding neighbors and Fang Rui's family The surrounding neighbors are envious, jealous and attack the Fang Rui family The surrounding neighbors regret not trying to please or get Guilty of Fang Rui's family Fang Xue's third wife, Fang Lingnan, and a group of female family members and children are waiting for a happy life under Fang Rui's protection Fang Rui and the third wife's happy life Disaster strikes and the world is in chaos, but Fang Rui is calm and composed, watching the clouds rolling and relaxing.

Damn it, Tiantian Shuhuang has ruined the starting point all day long. I can't find a satisfactory novel.

This book is really good. I heard that the author is an old eunuch who should not play with others? I don't care if you are or not, the requirements are not high, just don't be a bad eunuch 🥺, even if it is really bad, at least it will be said in more than 600 chapters, if you can't do this... Hahaha, I will be blacklisted, decisively report and permanently blacklisted I will keep everyone away from lightning in the comment area of other books, and spread the name of your "Eunuch" in the book club I joined. If I see writing similar to yours in the future, or if it is a new book, I will repeat the above operations. I will do what I say 🙂

A book that opens high and goes low. . . The early stages were pretty good, and I could tolerate the back-and-forth plot with the court, but I really couldn't watch it later. . . And the plot behind it seems familiar. . I've seen too many scenes like this. . Just gave up. .

The author is already an invincible writer, and his writing is really good, almost catching up with the level of copywriting Although many people don't like it after the death of their loved ones, but on the contrary, after the death of their loved ones, I feel that this book starts to become interesting.

I really can't break through the dilemma of being able to watch the first half of the bad Ke-style cultivation of immortality. In a small county town in the barren mountains and wild ridges, one person and one cat roam the clouds and cranes. The writing style of prose takes full advantage of the author's writing style and reading capacity. But the writing is obviously one of the best at the starting point, but when it comes to the secular world, the rivers and lakes, the court, and the war, it tests my novel writing skills in terms of plot, and I really can't write at all. The scenes in the second half where the other world pretends to be sexy are even more annoying, and the assembly line writing style is extremely ugly. I would believe it even if someone said there was a replacement. Originally, if the fairy spirit is not maintained, I can fill it with innocence and childlike interest. I can write fairy tales, write about raising a daughter, or even copy some modern prose or even the childlike passages of Yilin level. I can continue hundreds of chapters by catching calico cat hair. As a result, the content of cats has dropped, and I no longer write dialogues between humans and cats that are plain and profound. It's a pity that such high-quality writing is so rare, what a pity 😭😭😭

The novel is very good, of course, it's a little bit anticlimactic, but it's still readable. ㊗️Congratulations to the author on finishing! No need to go to the palace. The contrast between the warm home and the cruel chaos in the early stages of the novel is wonderful! The fight between weak cheaters and powerful corrupt forces in the mid-term is also very good. Generally speaking, they all have online IQs and sound logic. In the later stage, they upgrade too quickly and the plot connection feels weak. Everything else is fine. I hope the author's next novel will be more exciting and beautiful.

The Lord of the World of Hongyu Realm should be about half-step Daluo. In the world, the power of the world can compete with Daluo, but only to compete. After leaving the world, he will be a small Karami, which is similar to the Earth-bound Spirit. But the most suitable Earth-bound Spirit can start to invade all the heavens and worlds in the later period. I hope that the force will not be lost. I just want that mysterious and supreme feeling. If I write about invincibility now, I will continue to write. I will support it. Come on.