Hong Kong Crossover: Becoming a Cop in Forensic Heroes

I hate it when characters and actors look exactly alike. Don't you have any TV shows or actors in your novels? A world full of identical people is just stupid.

Lin Tingting

Author, you've wasted half a chapter explaining your skills, and many plot points and their causes and consequences haven't been clearly explained, leaving readers completely confused. You may be having a blast, but we don't understand it at all.

The first chapter is really well written. In just a few paragraphs and two or three hundred words, the character of a protagonist with underdeveloped brain who loves to think is vividly portrayed!

Actually, I came to see Liang Xiaorou.

What kind of nonsense is this? Every single one of them is just a copy-paste introduction from Baidu. There are hardly any original words written. If I'm paying to read your copied and pasted stuff, I might as well just search on Baidu myself.

Actually, it's very well written; after all, the first chapter tells everyone this book is addictive and not a waste of time. I've rarely seen a suspense drama fanfiction disguised as a mystery. A letter-writing detective? Disgusting.

Why did it become so padded later on? It's like the author changed; it's all just plot narration with no critical thinking at all.

The case details are too brief, while the character descriptions are excessive! It feels padded. People read books for the plot, not for character introductions! If you're going to introduce these characters, I think you should dedicate a separate chapter to them! I hope you can enrich the plot, @reader

The author has recently devoted too much space to TV shows and character introductions, making the story too padded. Less than a fifth of a chapter is dedicated to character dialogue and interaction, and even that is skipped around. Also, the inclusion of too many TV shows and characters makes the story break down.