In Konoha, I Train in Martial Arts and Cultivate Divinity

1. The protagonist is too self-important. He rejects Orochimaru several times, as if he thinks Orochimaru is too weak to wield a sword anymore and that he's invincible. 2. The protagonist's character and actions are inconsistent. His character is supposed to be focused on developing his power and resources, but he either immediately tries to get close to the Nine-Tails Jinchuriki or rejects…

The training speed is too slow. You have to understand that the power system in Naruto increases very quickly, even for geniuses.

Naruto fanfiction can't be too slow-paced!

Another Naruto fanfic breaking up couples. Honestly, is it that hard to write an original female lead? All you do is focus on other people's wives.

As long as it doesn't end up being a "legend of eyeballs," it's fine. Damn it, all the Naruto fanfiction these days is about eyeballs. It's either Sharingan, Byakugan, or Rinnegan. Without those eyeballs, you're all useless. It's a unified bloodline theory, fuck.

It's like putting up a sheep's head and selling dog meat. The author's self-created cultivation system is at best only referencing a little bit of the Yang God's setting. I'm very disappointed. I thought it would directly use the Yang God's cultivation methods.

There's no need to specify the exact weight in kilograms. Otherwise, how many kilograms of strength would you expect from a fully-formed Susanoo capable of splitting a mountain? You could say its physical strength is comparable to an average genin, and with chakra, it could rival an elite genin.

Upgrading is too slow. Figure out you want a higher ceiling, but first you need to survive. Moreover, the protagonist keeps saying he's just trying to survive, but he's actually jumping around like crazy. They talk about saving their lives, but what they're really doing is acting like they're the main character, jumping around like crazy as if they can't die.

Why break up any couple? Of all the couples, why break up Xin Jiunai? Besides, is Xin Jiunai even pretty? 😅

Martial arts are understandable, given the transmission of knowledge. But what's with the prescriptions? And the medicinal herbs are used worldwide.