In Konoha, I Train in Martial Arts and Cultivate Divinity

1. The protagonist takes himself too seriously. He rejects Orochimaru several times. Does he think Orochimaru can't lift the knife and he is so awesome? 2. The protagonist's personality and behavior style are very separate. The character's personality is based on farming and development. As a result, he either gets close to the Nine-Tails Jinchuuriki from the beginning or refuses Orochi to attract other people's attention, which gives people a feeling of inconsistency. 3. The market for writing fan fiction, a style that speaks cautiously but acts like a dragon, really doesn't feel big. Personal opinion, please do not over-interpret it, thank you

The training speed is too slow. You must know that the power system in Naruto improves very quickly. For a genius,

It's not okay if the Naruto story is too slow to heat up.

This is another Naruto story that breaks down the CP. To be honest, is it difficult to write an original heroine? I know how to stare at other people's wives every day and write

As long as it doesn't turn into "Eyeball Legend" in the end, damn it, now Naruto fandom is all about eyeballs, either the Sharingan, the Byakugan, or the Rinnegan, without those eyeballs it's all trash, unified lineage theory, Fuck.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, the author's self-created practice system only refers to a little bit of Yang Shen's settings. I am very disappointed. I thought I would directly use Yang Shen's exercises.

You don't need to write how many kilograms of strength you have. Otherwise, how many kilograms of strength can you say the complete Susanoo can split a mountain? It can be said that the physical strength is comparable to that of ordinary genin. If you add chakra, it can be comparable to elite genin.

Upgrading is too slow. Figure out you want to have a higher ceiling, but only if you stay alive first. And the protagonist said he was trying to save his life, but in fact he was jumping wildly. Speaking of saving one's life, the actual behavior is that one wants to know that one is the protagonist, jumping around like crazy even if one cannot die. I can only say that I can't stand this kind of goodbye to the protagonist. As a reminder, if you see this post later, don't read it if you can't stand Long Aotian.

Which pair of CPs is not easy to break down Xin Jiunai, and is Xin Jiunai beautiful?😅

Martial arts can still be understood, after all, knowledge is passed down. What the hell are the prescriptions? The medicinal materials are used all over the world.