My Youth Choice Game

Overall good, but the details could be improved

It's very interesting, but why so few people have read it. Although it has the obvious smell of passing crows, it is also different. Compared with other novels of the same type, it is very good. I recommend reading it.

As of Chapter 66, daily life + love is very sweet. It is visually predicted that there will be the development of supernatural powers in the mysterious village in the future. The protagonist's golden finger (maximum learning ability) and the system's role arrangement and main plot advancement are also worth looking forward to I like this author's daily love part, because it can be seen As for the author's skills, as for the large-scale and overall storyline, I am not very good at it, so I won't lie. All in all, it is worth looking forward to. It is beyond the passing line and has a [good] close to [excellent] evaluation. How about it? Let's wait until the day when the book is finished to make a final conclusion. ৫("ړ৫)

The writing is still okay, but I don't know if it has been proofread. I feel that some parts are not very smooth and the context is a bit unclear. Come on

Forcibly forgetting skills to advance the plot? A little disgusting

This book is well written, but no one reads it, which is a pity.

Managing a trillion dollar company and also working as a high school teacher. Doesn't anyone think it's outrageous?

Compared with other stereotyped books, this book made me feel comfortable reading it. I felt comfortable enough not to read this book, but my monthly vote must be given to you.

The first part is okay, but the second part feels super weird. System tasks are either done or not done. I don't want to do this, but I still do it. I refuse it, but I still do it. This kind of twisting feeling is disgusting.

I feel like my writing is so messy. When I write about one thing, it suddenly jumps to an unknown place.

I don't understand why you used time reversal after being discovered by Mei Yu. You already knew it would be troublesome, so there's no need to ignore the character's personality in order to create conflicts.

There are too many friend scenes, right? The emotional line comes out of nowhere. What's the reason? I didn't see it at all. There has to be a process for falling in love. Also, I thought someone from the sports department was admitted. But it turns out it was arranged for a friend? It would be nice to be able to write a good protagonist in daily life. Don't play a supporting role. The supporting role of friends is really not interesting. I danced the whole time.

Emmm, I don't know how to put it, but the romance light novels I've read that impressed me most are "My Girlfriend is a Evil Girl" and "My System Always Wants to Force Me to Confess My Love". The biggest feeling I have from both of them is that the protagonist is hard-working and has a good outlook on life. There is no sentence describing the character of the protagonist in the early stage of the book. When I read Chapter 12, I didn't know what kind of person the protagonist was. In fact, this is very bad. The biggest pleasure for us in reading novels is to find a sense of substitution. When the protagonist has qualities that meet or meet our expectations, it is easy to arouse readers' interest. There is also the problem of character appearance. First, there are many characters appearing in the early stage, and there is no simple introduction. For example, that Akino, I can only guess that he is from my uncle's family, right? But it's not for me to guess. The description in the article is unknown, only a hint of an acquaintance of the original person. It would be better to give a generous introduction, and the memory of the original person is not well dealt with. I only explain the background of the orphan, but the current situation and the protagonist's attitude towards family and friends are not explained. I hope the author will write better as he writes.

There can't be any yandere characters... A psychopath like a disgusting yandere

God among gods! Superhuman strength in the light of day!

But the plot of Akino Arashi in these two chapters is not good, there is nothing attractive about her. Friends of the opposite sex are different from ordinary friends. When the protagonist says that they are friends, they should avoid being alone together.

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She looks good, but I don't know if it's a real harem. If she really wants to have a harem, she can be considered a yandere. What should I do?

What can I say, turning into an animal is one of my least favorite plot points.

As of Chapter 27, I was in a fog and had no idea how the emotional line developed.

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I'm so angry. There aren't many books at the top of the list that I can read. This one has great pacing and characters, but not many people read it. Now it takes longer to find the book than to read it.