The Dragonborn's Journey Through the World

When writing this kind of Western fantasy, it's better to avoid modern slang. After all, you're writing about an empire founder and a god of reality who has lived on Nirn for nearly thirty years. His speech should have been influenced by those around him long ago. Constantly using vulgar language makes him seem like a young man who has just arrived in another world.

I don't like the barbecue and stew here, try my noodles instead... Do you think this feels out of place in a Western fantasy world? The other Supreme King has absolutely no class, acting like a petty tyrant who's gotten his way. His dialogue and behavior completely contradict the established rules. I suggest removing all the "King" or similar titles. Just make a brainless protagonist who gets a cheat code and goes around showing off.

The way this author writes a book, deliberately making the protagonist like this, is purely for the purpose of making easy money after it's released. Once it's published, they can drag out the plot however they want, and disgust the readers however they want. Aren't they afraid that readers will be disgusted and leave before the book is even published? Why turn down money? ~~(ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia

This is really toxic! Don't the Night's Watch see the protagonist's superhuman powers? Do the Starks think they can't be slapped to death? This is just plot for plot's sake. Even animals know to fear the strong; the protagonist is constantly being mocked and ridiculed throughout the entire story. It's so toxic!

What I saw was the protagonist's smug and self-satisfied face. After so many years of time travel, he's not as mature as a middle school student. Did you lose your brainstem during your time travel?

After watching for a while, I still don't see how the protagonist's speech and behavior fit the established character. Is this what a god is? Is this what a king who has fought for half his life is? Is this what a person over fifty years old is like? Isn't it awkward? "I'm still the same boy I always was, without the slightest change!"

The protagonist is too kind. 😥

When the law of the jungle is forgotten, the writing style of this novel becomes third-rate. If the protagonist has power, but others are constantly stepping on him, then it's a mindless story.

The protagonist causes innocent people to die tragically, knowingly lets many evil people in the Night's Watch go, building after building, incident after incident—he seems completely clueless about what he's doing.

The protagonist is too aloof, unwilling to care about anything, putting on an air of magnanimity and superiority, but actually not enjoyable at all. Compared to the protagonist's self-proclaimed godlike image, I think Homelander is better; at least he doesn't wrong himself.