One Sword to Live Forever

The name of this book should be changed. It should not be positioned as a fantasy or palace battle drama. It does not conform to the logic of fantasy.

Even though I changed the map, I didn't see any interesting places. The depressed style of writing is indeed still alive, but I don't like it. . . . . . Insufficient appreciation. I don't deserve it, I feel sick after watching it😖

The first few chapters were good to read, but I felt like something was missing in the middle. The part after I went to Beijing, including the first time I arrived in the world of Buddhism and Taoism, was also good to read. Then after I got to Yuncheng, it was almost uninteresting. I felt that the author's writing power was up and down.

This is my first time writing a book, so please forgive me for my bad writing. I will try my best. Thank you for reading. Please tell me a few points. First of all, please be brave enough to read every chapter, and don't keep the book, because if you keep it, it may disappear. This is a common problem for newcomers, and I am a newcomer too. I want to continue writing. So I need to read more, please. Then there is the matter of the heroine. Maybe I personally think that the heroine is not that important. Cultivation is to compete with heaven. Unless one day Li Changsheng says that the sword has been thrown away and a woman will come, then there will probably be a female protagonist. I saw someone saying that I can imitate the sword, but I can't imitate it. If I could imitate it, I wouldn't be at this level. Except for the sentence "Jian Lai", it has nothing to do with the book "Jian Lai". And I write books as I please, so you can't possibly guess what I will write in the next chapter. Finally, I urge you to turn to the last page every day, hoping that my first book will have a perfect ending.

No woman can survive in your book, right? Is this cultivation of immortality?

Why is it not being updated? Or is it that the plot is written to death, and religious issues are written beyond the limit? Can't continue writing?

It's impossible to become popular by just imitating swords

Don't write anymore after you write something really good. Why not write a diary here? If you can't tell what a novel is, does a serious person write a diary?

It's very immature, whether it's the writing or the plot, but you can see the intention. It is more comfortable to read than most short-form articles, which is rare. Come on.

People who read this book should pay attention. There is no female protagonist for the time being. Judging from the situation, it cannot be a harem novel. The most important thing is that the female supporting characters in this book have no good ending. They either die, their innocence is ruined, or they kill their daughters to prove their enlightenment. Fortunately, it's not poisonous and can be watched. As for the other things, I can't comment. Just watch it yourself.

This book is very well written, but it is too traditional. I'm afraid not many people will want to read it.

Where is the heroine? Chapter 81: There are so few women. I thought the heroine was omitted when she appeared. I can't see the heroine in Luo Qing. She doesn't know how to be a bachelor.

Well written, I personally prefer the kind of mortal world, coupled with the sword, it is simply invincible

Is this book gone? Is the eunuch gone? Why no more updates? Will you continue writing?

I saw on the post forum today that the author was banned. He was so scolded that he could be recommended. I want to see how he writes. Brothers, be back in half an hour!

I came to Tieba because of its reputation. After reading Chapter 12, to be honest, I was a little overwhelmed. First of all, you should position it as martial arts, not fantasy. Also, it is too plain, like a running account. I didn't see the character traits of the characters, they were just unremarkable. Then kill all the way, a bit like passing five levels and killing six generals. This should introduce various forces and deepen the world view. But these forces are as bland as water and have no characteristics. I won't read it anymore. The author should keep working hard. The writing is good and quite fluent.