Land

Can you write more male characters? Now I see that the only outstanding male character is an Aries, and the rest are female characters. Can you portray some resolute and brave male characters? In addition, I really don't recommend that most female characters like the protagonist. As a god, the protagonist will definitely not have love. Those female characters will definitely get married and have children. At that time, there will definitely be a lot of people scolding you for giving away your daughter. Unless you plan for these female characters to live alone forever, but I wouldn't recommend that. One or two are fine, but if it's most of them, then what do you do with them? I can accept that they end up alone for their own ideals (gods), but they end up alone for the protagonist, which makes me feel that there is no need for them to exist. It feels like they were created to remain widows.

You have land without monsters, what do you think?

Come on, come on, it's so well written

The writing is okay, no one reads it? So few comments

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This is too light, so don't keep it.

It's a bit ordinary, but in fact the pace is still slow. Maybe this slow pace doesn't bring out the splendor of slow writing. In short, it feels okay, but it feels bland. This may have been okay in the past, but now under the impact of too many online articles, this kind of writing seems to be less brilliant and always tastes worse. I came here after seeing a recommendation advertisement. The advertisement said that the pace of development is fast, but in fact it is still slow. Although there is no system, as a time traveler, the transcendence of vision and experience does not reasonably reflect the excitement. It would be fine if the indigenous protagonist were slower. As a reader, I might find it interesting to watch the indigenous struggle with full knowledge. However, as a time traveler, the pace of development of the protagonist is too realistic and the plot lacks flavor. It lacks the sense of inefficiency that can obviously be faster but seems slow. Losing the sense of refreshment, maybe the facts are like that, but the work does not need facts, but reasonable logic, self-consistency and a sense of refreshment. This is the reason why art originates from life but is higher than life. If it is too realistic, just like the helplessness and compromise that are everywhere in life, life will indeed be refreshing and dry.

There are a lot of bugs, such as language...