
Be a Passerby in the Elf World
在精灵世界做个路人吧
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 508k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Practice elf writing, please be careful when writing books! [Go here to avoid lightning before watching]
[Please be careful to avoid lightning before reading the book] Dear readers, if you are looking for rigid settings similar to the game, then don't click in and read it, otherwise you will be poisoned and die later. Some of the settings in this book are not based on the original game. It is an imaginative text. It follows the flow of plot and emotion, and alternates between daily life and mystery. It is not a simple novel! Everyone has their own story and unspeakable secrets in it, not just a soulless supporting role to set off the protagonist. The protagonist is not perfect, or conforms to your ideal image. All he can do is think over and over again and change himself in what happens. Maybe you can't stand it at the beginning and are poisoned by the protagonist... That's it. The author's writing skills are insufficient, and the protagonist he writes is an ordinary person with the flaws that humans should have. Laziness, greed, wishful thinking, self-righteousness and other problems... I'm really sorry that I didn't present an image that met everyone's expectations from the beginning. Also, this is not a cool article! Not a cool article! So please read with caution! It's just a warm and passionate imperfect story... I hope we can turn this imperfect story into what we expect! [The core of this book is this]
It's a pity that the beginning was amazing, but the plot direction and character portrayal were not grasped well, and the development was a bit deliberate. The structure of social relationships is too immature. If it can be followed as it was at the beginning, with the protagonist and Pokémon growing up in ordinary life alone, and developing step by step like the name of the novel, avoiding the plot of human society that the author is not good at, and laying the foundation in the later stage before moving on, this book will definitely achieve good results. However, I can't change the final form now, so I'll just follow the routine and slowly continue to accumulate some experience. I hope that the next work can learn from the experience and give full support to new authors.
Can you let me be your rival?
I'm very confused. For someone who likes Pokémon so much and even quit his job for it, his knowledge of Pokémon seems to be too poor. When I watched it, I felt like a person who only heard about Pokémon from a friend traveled through time. It's not like someone who knows and loves Pokémon traveled through time.
I have an outline but no writing style. Would you like the author to give it a try? The core is big, big, very big. First of all, rich people choose Bulbasaur at the beginning, and orphans choose Magikarp at the beginning. Bulbasaur practices rooting and growth photosynthesis, and then feeds nutrients like crazy to fight for Bulbasaur seeds to grow to one meter high. Then it accumulates energy to the extreme and starts to evolve. The evolution process can give Grass resources or a large amount of grass stones provide energy. If you follow the setting that the evolved size will become larger, in theory Ivysaur can grow to at least two meters and more than four meters. Repeat the operation, and the final size of Ivysaur will be between four and sixteen meters. Then go to Alola to learn the Overlord Aura and strive to reach 20 meters. ,,5,15,,8,20, Then there is the mini dragon. The mini dragon will grow when it sheds its skin. Arrange to learn dragon dance or do bodybuilding to stimulate the body. It will continue to shed its skin and increase its body length to 5 meters. The hacker dragon will evolve to 10 meters, and the fast dragon will grow to 20 meters. Plus the overlord aura, you can challenge that huge fast dragon Next is Yukila, who does the same thing, but doesn't have the innate advantage to grow very big. You can consider feeding the wishing star, which is also a mineral. As long as you feed it more, exercise more, and still have the energy of the wishing star, it is expected to be more than thirty or forty meters. ,,,,()
Ear, please refer to this picture
Please refer to this character design for Ear. But she can't be considered a heroine because she often loses contact (•́ω•̀ ٥)
All this is just the fantasy of a patient with chuunibyou before they die😜
If you really travel through time, Guisi is a must. His skill pool is not low in strength, and Gengar can always hide in the shadow for personal protection. Don't even think about quasi-gods. It's too difficult to cultivate and it's rare.
I feel like the main character is really useless, and he always shamelessly messes around, which only troubles others and the elves.
Suddenly I thought of a plot. What if the next book was about the daily life of the remaining Rockets soldiers after Team Rocket disbanded?
Character reference, Sakura Ogawa
(Settings will be added later) Appearing to be weak, but actually a little too stubborn, he can understand the elf best and regards his skirt lady as his family. Social phobia, not knowing how to interact like normal people, becoming a trainer late. My family is from a prominent family, and my parents, brothers and sisters are all master trainers! Unfortunately, I am a cowardly trainer QAQ
What a pitiful protagonist, I just don't know what the opportunity is for the protagonist to turn dark 😅
I just started reading it, and I hope the author can write some new tricks. Gengar is really boring, and there is something about encountering quasi-divine beasts at the beginning. Training a demigod to the level of a demigod doesn't mean anything. Only when Master Chi cultivates a demigod Pikachu with reverse attributes can he be called a trainer.
At present, the protagonists have no special skills or advantages and are very ordinary. This means that the subsequent plot will be very difficult. Unless you suddenly open a big melon. The protagonist doesn't have any characteristics that are different from ordinary people. In fact, he is not a protagonist. Don't argue with me that super ordinary is also a kind of thing. I can only say that super ordinary protagonists are realistic novels.
What a pitiful protagonist, to be honest, even if you don't cheat on this guy, please make him a little smarter, or in layman's terms, a little smart, otherwise it will be really lonely. Of course I didn't say it wasn't a good book.
The darkened protagonist has gone crazy and ordered Pokémon to attack innocent people. Is this really what a person who loves Pokémon would let a Pokémon do? Watching Miss Skirt dance and kill people is really disgusting. If this darkened protagonist is essentially the same as the protagonist Then I couldn't take on the role of the protagonist, because the protagonist doesn't love Pokémon at all, and it hurts my heart. I originally thought it would be an eye-catching daily novel about the world of Pokémon, but I didn't expect the twist to be so big. I have avoided so many Pokémon Dark novels, and I stumbled here.
It's actually quite good. Although the protagonist is a bit miserable, it's still quite realistic and I can get along well with the elves. But now I don't know how to turn around and become stronger 😭
What on earth can this protagonist do? He is inexplicably favored by many people, but he is also inexplicably incapable of doing anything.
What does Zhu Zi say? There are many powerful new Pokémon in it, not to mention the cover god who is a solid and solid one. The ones that require strength include: Family Rat, Iron Arm, Winged Hair, Salt Stone Giant Spirit, Roaring Moon, Ancient Jade Fish, Ancient Sword Leopard, and Dolphin Man. The handsome ones include: Iron Thorn, Iron Warrior, Roaring Tail, Majestic Fang, Blue Flame Blade Demon, and Red Lotus Kaiqi.
A very good novel, you can feel the beauty of the elf world, instead of relying on cheating to pretend to be in the elf world
Phase one, complete! I wish the author to write better and better
Brother, what are you writing? What kind of development is it to suddenly jump to the future and then meet another dark version of yourself? It is really confusing to suddenly insert a plot like this in the plot line of the game.
Personally, I think it's okay. Why are there so few people?
I'm still waiting for Lily Root Doll to evolve.
There are more than 140 chapters and the character card only has one Pokémon? Or did you forget to upload the new Pokémon character card? In addition, after reading the introduction, I aroused a strong interest. It is neither cool nor dark. It feels like watching anime, but I don't know the world view set by the author. If everyone is squishy, like Dr. Ohki and Xiaozhi, he will be electrocuted and burned by various elves without any problems. It would be fine.
Emm…Although but