A Washed-Up Martial Arts Master Is Reborn Thirty Years in the Past

After reading four chapters, I basically understood part of the reason for being scolded. First of all, the memories during battle are the most disgusting. Even if it is a comic, even if it is a famous artist, even if the characters and plots are completely laid out, they can't escape being scolded. Not to mention you. In fact, as long as the order is changed, there are two completely different situations. As long as you put all those memories and feelings after killing someone, not only will you not be scolded, but it may also add a lot of color. The character of the protagonist has not been laid out yet, and readers don't know who he is. Then the world background and the strength of the characters are not introduced. Suddenly, it is a battle or a frustrating plot. This is already a technique that non-masters will not use. You still keep your memories stuck here. To be honest, you are not unjust at all when you are scolded. The second point is that I want to establish a smart character for the protagonist, but use a method that violates logic. In the past life, it can be said that this plot is an experience that changed the protagonist's life. Normal people, even if they cannot investigate the causes and consequences, will recall this painful memory from time to time, and then analyze their thoughts. As a result, I didn't think about anything in my previous life. I only started to analyze the behavior of these bandits after I was reborn. Not to mention the three golden chapters, you have exposed two such big shortcomings in the first four chapters, and even if you write more in the future, it will be in vain. Please refine it when you have time.

In my previous life, I was abducted by Black Wind into a mine and worked as a slave for three years, which caused my body to become almost useless. How could I still cultivate to the level of a first-rate master? The reason is that the author keeps repeating his awesomeness. It feels so awesome. In fact, it is a group of people who pull their crotch.

It's so poisonous, every time the supporting character is about to be killed, the main character pretends to save the day😓. Twenty years ago, this kind of pretense would have been a masterpiece. However, people repeatedly brushed up on this kind of nonsense, and today it has become a poisonous point. The villain always has only one line: Are you tickling me? It's just pretentious writing

A big poisonous point at the beginning of the chapter! No matter how powerful you were in your previous life, you are still a mortal who has never exercised! How can you easily kill dozens of bandit cavalry when you suddenly face them? Your setting is completely illogical

It's the first time I've seen someone write a novel like this. One chapter is published several times, and it gets ruined without monthly effort.

After reading more than ten chapters, Zhang Zhang wants to go back to his previous life as a mining slave. Since he has never forgotten it, you should continue to be a mining slave in this life. Give up!

I suggest the author stop talking so much when writing moves. It is not pretentious, it will only make people feel that the speed of the move is too slow, just like a snail. If an ordinary person punches you, you don't have time to talk so much. What's more, if you are a martial artist or a cultivator, you can analyze and marvel before or after the fight. Don't talk during the fight.

Through time travel and rebirth, even dogs can succeed 😏

Can you please stop letting the pig's feet jump out at just the right time, when the person is about to die, at the critical moment, etc. These plots come one after another, and the people watching are filled with fear and panic?

Let me first talk about my progress in reading this novel. I have reached Chapter 183 of The Long Road Ahead. The author's writing style is quite good, but the sect aspect personally feels too toxic. Why does the protagonist join the sect? Just because the platform is powerful allows you to have a high starting point, but what does the protagonist do after joining? The article mentions that the sect will arrange lecturers to go to the lower house for guidance, but the protagonist is alone after joining. The article does not mention that he went to attend the lectures. It would be fine if the protagonist didn't understand anything and didn't listen, but he didn't know how to get promoted to the innate. And this sect is also weird. It doesn't matter if you have to contribute experience for promotion, but you can't set such a high threshold. It will take others 3-10 years or kill other sect geniuses. 3-10 Years is such a delay. If you want to kill the geniuses of other sects, you have to go all out. It is not certain who will live and who will die if they are both geniuses. With this setting, it is no wonder that the Holy Ji Sect was driven to the corner of Dongzhou and was destroyed. I hope the author can write more exciting things later.