A Washed-Up Martial Arts Master Is Reborn Thirty Years Ago

It's the first time I've seen someone write a novel like this. One chapter is published several times, and it gets ruined without monthly effort.

The writing is decent, but he wasted a good title. Worth a look. It's 40 points worse than expected.

I read it in one sitting. It was very enjoyable and not toxic at all. It is a good book worth reading.

The writing is quite good, the protagonist is not mentally retarded, his level is not soaring, and his overall IQ is online. Although it may not be very suitable for today's Seven Points, it is definitely a good novel!

The title of your book is not as good as my ID. I hope the author can learn from me.

It doesn't look good, it's too verbose

After reading four chapters, I basically understood part of the reason for being scolded. First of all, the memories during battle are the most disgusting. Even if it is a comic, even if it is a famous artist, even if the characters and plots are completely laid out, they can't escape being scolded. Not to mention you. In fact, as long as the order is changed, there are two completely different situations. As long as you put all those memories and feelings after killing someone, not only will you not be scolded, but it may also add a lot of color. The character of the protagonist has not been laid out yet, and readers don't know who he is. Then the world background and the strength of the characters are not introduced. Suddenly, it is a battle or a frustrating plot. This is already a technique that non-masters will not use. You still keep your memories stuck here. To be honest, you are not unjust at all when you are scolded. The second point is that I want to establish a smart character for the protagonist, but use a method that violates logic. In the past life, it can be said that this plot is an experience that changed the protagonist's life. Normal people, even if they cannot investigate the causes and consequences, will recall this painful memory from time to time, and then analyze their thoughts. As a result, I didn't think about anything in my previous life. I only started to analyze the behavior of these bandits after I was reborn. Not to mention the three golden chapters, you have exposed two such big shortcomings in the first four chapters, and even if you write more in the future, it will be in vain. Please refine it when you have time.

In my previous life, I was abducted by Black Wind into a mine and worked as a slave for three years, which caused my body to become almost useless. How could I still cultivate to the level of a first-rate master? The reason is that the author keeps repeating his awesomeness. It feels so awesome. In fact, it is a group of people who pull their crotch.

It's so poisonous, every time the supporting character is about to be killed, the main character pretends to save the day😓. Twenty years ago, this kind of pretense would have been a masterpiece. However, people repeatedly brushed up on this kind of nonsense, and today it has become a poisonous point. The villain always has only one line: Are you tickling me? It's just pretentious writing

A big poisonous point at the beginning of the chapter! No matter how powerful you were in your previous life, you are still a mortal who has never exercised! How can you easily kill dozens of bandit cavalry when you suddenly face them? Your setting is completely illogical

After reading more than ten chapters, Zhang Zhang wants to go back to his previous life as a mining slave. Since he has never forgotten it, you should continue to be a mining slave in this life. Give up!

I suggest the author stop talking so much when writing moves. It is not pretentious, it will only make people feel that the speed of the move is too slow, just like a snail. If an ordinary person punches you, you don't have time to talk so much. What's more, if you are a martial artist or a cultivator, you can analyze and marvel before or after the fight. Don't talk during the fight.

Through time travel and rebirth, even dogs can succeed 😏

Can you please stop letting the pig's feet jump out at just the right time, when the person is about to die, at the critical moment, etc. These plots come one after another, and the people watching are filled with fear and panic?

Let me first talk about my progress in reading this novel. I have reached Chapter 183 of The Long Road Ahead. The author's writing style is quite good, but the sect aspect personally feels too toxic. Why does the protagonist join the sect? Just because the platform is powerful allows you to have a high starting point, but what does the protagonist do after joining? The article mentions that the sect will arrange lecturers to go to the lower house for guidance, but the protagonist is alone after joining. The article does not mention that he went to attend the lectures. It would be fine if the protagonist didn't understand anything and didn't listen, but he didn't know how to get promoted to the innate. And this sect is also weird. It doesn't matter if you have to contribute experience for promotion, but you can't set such a high threshold. It will take others 3-10 years or kill other sect geniuses. 3-10 Years is such a delay. If you want to kill the geniuses of other sects, you have to go all out. It is not certain who will live and who will die if they are both geniuses. With this setting, it is no wonder that the Holy Ji Sect was driven to the corner of Dongzhou and was destroyed. I hope the author can write more exciting things later.

Are you a loser again? Why is there no genius in this novel?

It still has the same long-winded taste as the previous book. Is this something that can't be changed 😂

The first three chapters are nonsense. . . What kind of difficult actions can the protagonist do with his garbage body? ? ? The mind can think it, but the body cannot do it. . .

This book feels very divided. On the one hand, it crazily suppresses the protagonist, making the protagonist look like a clown, who is not outstanding compared to other people. On the other hand, he boasts about the protagonist's strong combat power and deep foundation. I've always been curious about where the protagonist's mysterious confidence in being able to reach the top comes from. The protagonist's talent is unqualified, and the exercises he practices are commonplace. He has no opportunities and no sense of innovation. Apart from practicing hard, he can be said to be useless. In order to be new and different, the author cut off all the exciting points of the traditional rebirth flow, and couldn't write anything else. He could only rely on water to reduce the number of words, which made the protagonist look really awkward.

Protagonist: In my previous life, I was able to refine the viscera and surpass the Great Luo. I became immortal while the heaven and the earth were corrupt. The sun and the moon destroyed me but I was immortal. I destroyed the universe with a single move of my hand and was invincible. Suddenly one day, I was affected by the aftermath of the fight between two immortal gods in the nine heavens. At that moment, I felt desperate and could only watch myself disappear into ashes. But I was reborn. In this life, when I practice, I will recall it and let readers know the highlights of my previous life. Every time I practice in this life, I will say that I will definitely control my own destiny, because in the previous life, I was so powerful that it is unimaginable and made the world despair. Only in this way can I return to the crazy power of refining the internal organs in the previous life.

Practice in seclusion, improve your cultivation, come out of seclusion and start fighting, just enough to defeat the enemy (you couldn't beat it before the seclusion), gain some insights during the battle, go back to seclusion... And then repeat the same routine from the beginning to the end of the book😒

I have read a book with a similar setting before, and I became a passing martial arts myth, nothing more than a eunuch.

The author gave the protagonist a too low starting point in his previous life and did not have a certain high level of vision. As a result, after the protagonist is reborn, he has no advantage at all except for a new life. The only thing that can be used at the bottom level is the subtle strength of the whole body. This kind of advantage Sun Wukong's biggest reliance is not his talent, but the heavenly virtues left by Nuwa to patch the sky. The most precious thing for Shi Hao is not the Supreme Bone, but the respect of Liu Shen. What is most powerful about Ye Fan is not the holy body, but the invisible care of the ruthless emperor. , The bigger the world is and the higher the energy level, the bigger the "hang" will be. The "hang" is not big enough and cannot break through the blockade of high-level officials. For example, if a person without "hang" enters the prehistoric world of Hongjun Hedao, he will be locked by Hongjun in an instant.

The book has been abandoned. I have seen old authors who have the most trouble writing books. The kind that costs 2,000 yuan a day. The outline is not there yet.

The writing is a bit long-winded, and I feel like the author is trying to make up the number of words.

In a hundred years, the strength has increased to this level. . . . Have you understood the opponent's form and all the rules? You can cause your own body to explode after watching a nuclear explosion? Can your body bear it? When you practice, you don't want to directly practice lofty things like laws and rules, but you still have such realms as Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, spirit transformation, Tongxuan, integration, and Mahayana. Rules and laws are not something you can practice if you want to. The first step is to see it, the second step is to catch it, and the third step is to take it down. Qi training and foundation building are basic exercises. First prove that you are qualified to practice. Golden elixir, Nascent Soul, Transformation God, what is Transformation God? Become a god? You are dressing up as a god, right? Human beings are dressing themselves up as gods, and then heaven and earth admit their mistake and give you the authority to control the aura of heaven and earth. Tongxuan means that after you have the authority of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, go in step by step, until you reach the limit, you can really see the law, and it is useless. The law of light is everywhere. If you see it, then you can catch it. And before you can catch it, you must first make your body able to withstand these laws. What is fusion? Fusion is to constantly improve your physical fitness and prepare for catching the laws of heaven and earth in the future. Only when you can see and hurry up that your physical fitness reaches its limit and can withstand the impact of the law, can you have the opportunity to refine the law. And things like laws belong to the foundation of heaven and earth. Thunder Tribulation is what you are robbing heaven and earth of, and heaven and earth fight back. Normally, it's okay if you rob things like spiritual power, but when you dare to rob the laws of heaven and earth, haha, you will definitely be struck to death by lightning. The ones who can't be struck to death are because they ran away and went to other worlds. But when other worlds see such robbers, they also need to pay close attention. Where can they go? In the fairy world, the fairy world is thick-skinned, and the rules are too easy for him, so he acquiesced. Then, those people felt that the rules of grabbing the world were correct, and they even said that running away meant becoming an immortal. . . . Having said so much, just one sentence, the law cannot be practiced after reading it once. This kind of thing is very important to everyone.

An ancient style of writing. Unsurprising plot and routine. Dry article content.

I just discovered that the book I wrote three years ago was also written by the same author. Hey, I think it's pretty good, but there are always some plots that I feel I don't understand, and the author's ideas are not on the same page as mine. It's a pity to abandon it, and I feel like scolding it.

It was pretty good in the early stages, but later on there were no major loopholes when aliens invaded this world, and it just happened naturally. The problem is that after the supreme battle power, there is no sense of excitement, and the entire sect is destroyed. The plot is so wolf-hearted that it feels inexplicable after watching the plot. Xiao Tianshu's experience of climbing to the sky in one step is simply a stretch. When you zoom in on the map, is it like a dog? Is Hedao a child? I don't want to read any more. This book has left me in a state of heaven.

Since this book is about the revival of spiritual energy, why not write the following one: About me who traveled to the world of immortal cultivation, just became a golden elixir, and lived for a thousand years. Before I had time to enjoy it, the Age of Ending Dharma came and I was forced to develop productivity.