Pokemon: Storms over Hoenn

This 📖 is not popular because the author is too young. He often describes some inexplicable dialogues that look cool but actually have unclear meaning and are very embarrassing. Moreover, the writing is a long one, but in fact it has no meaning. The protagonist will smile slightly every time he says a lot without explaining it. It feels incomprehensible and reflects that the protagonist is a philosopher. In fact, it is meaningless. A few dozen words of dialogue can be summarized. The overall feeling of the book is bland, but it is not that the plot is bland, but the whole Riddler is pseudo-philosophical. The literary and youthful dialogues are probably intended to reflect the protagonist's high ideological level, but I am reading an elf novel. Where is the useful information? Especially the space-time island of King Slow. The protagonist somehow knew everything as soon as he landed on the island. He directly had a two-chapter dialogue with the Riddler's pseudo-philosophy with King Slow. Then he found out that Dejima had not explained any dialogues with unclear meanings or explained why you knew everything as soon as you landed on the island. Is it "unfathomable" and "smiling" revealed it? I read through the author's comments and roughly understood it. The ancient civilization was crushed to pieces by the three gods of Sinnoh, leaving behind an island outside of time. King Slow is the final mark. The protagonist has a fate with the ancient civilization and enters the island to gain benefits. Then he leaves the island. To be honest, the author's description and what he wants to express cannot be said to be completely different. I can only say that they have nothing to do with each other. It is said to be an elf novel, but is half of the plot related to elves? At least 5k of the 10,000 words are about various philosophical topics of unclear meaning that the author is suffering from. I suggest changing the title to "Philosophers Mixed in the Elf World", "Youth Disease Can Also Conquer Elves", and "Conversations with Unknown Meanings in the Pokémon World". The plot is very good. The writing is also good. It just makes me sleepy, as if I was reading a textbook in a Chinese language and politics class.

Kyogkar's blessing. Super Swampert.

I've reached about 150 chapters, so I'll read them later if I'm tired of reading. The first 100 chapters are well written, but I can't stand the school in the middle. There are only a few elves, and many of them are not fully evolved, so I start to worry about the country and the people, and engage in education. I teach to find elves for others. I don't know, I thought I was the king of the king. I should at least cultivate a few more elves, maybe form a second team or a third team, and then I can save the world or engage in education later. I see you update about 5 chapters every day, this is really great.

The author actually writes well, but what can I say about the writing? It's too elegant and not as exciting as traditional online novels. If online novels are just a side dish, and he has barely been able to get to the main table in the past two years, then fan fiction is a side dish among side dishes. If you cook a side dish like a palace banquet, you may lose people who originally like to eat side dishes. (I don't know if you can understand the author.)

This novel is awesome and I can't find it for free online 🤫

The biggest problem is probably the ending. As for the two miscellaneous fishes, the Water Fleet and the Lava Team, I really don't understand how they can achieve their goals under the siege of the protagonist's team. There are more than a dozen troops, including the People of the Meteor and the People of the Mountain. The protagonist is a top champion with a legend. There are ordinary champions and weak champions, and there are four or five kings who can't be counted. This lineup can fight these two most hip villains for dozens of chapters. It has not yet succeeded. It has not been able to stop Kyogaku. The author has nothing to write about Raton's Resurrection. If he doesn't let these two miscellaneous fish organizations succeed, there will be nothing to write about. The protagonist has been lonely for several years. The rest of the writing is good, and the PM article is also above average. That's it. The two crotch-stretching scenes at the end were a bit disgusting. It was all thanks to the author's force that he was not beaten to death by the protagonist and was dragged until the two gods awakened. The plot also dragged the protagonist and his IQ dropped. In my opinion, it was half-finished. 🤫

Pictures of the heroine (don't spray pictures online )

Main water type, auxiliary super power? After all, the properties of Tiger Balm can also explain the golden finger

How should I put it? The author's main plot is a bit wrong. A new trainer who has just debuted directly becomes the principal to teach and educate people. This plot is not very reasonable. Furthermore, China's revolutionary ideology is to accumulate grain, build walls, and slowly become king. It's a bit poisonous for you to start reforms without even improving your ability. See the heaven and the earth, the world, and all sentient beings. In the plot, you haven't even traveled to a prosperous city and seen the affairs of high-level people, but you just get into trouble directly. It's a bit unacceptable.

Is this the heroine?