Ordinary World: the Second Son of the Sun Family

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I read the beginning, but I really don't understand the meaning of the author writing such a protagonist. First, because his family was poor, he joined the army at the age of 16. He had to change the allowance from 6 or 8 to 52 yuan, and then send money home every month. But after he recovered, why did Sun Shaoping still eat black bread buns, wear shabby clothes, and live in the Jin family. The situation described in the family is the same as in the original work. So, where did the protagonist's money go? Sent, where is the money? If you don't send it, how can you help your family? So, what has changed for the protagonist? Second, after recovery, she was nagging, not going home, not going to class (didn't say what class she was going to), Wada Junye also started an affair, what is going on? To marry or not to marry, what does Sun Shaoan say? Third, I was a warrior king in my previous life, and I am still the same in this life. However, after I recovered, I became hypocritical. I have been a warrior king in two lifetimes. Is this the psychological quality? To sum up, looking at the appearance of this protagonist so far, I have not seen anything change in the Sun family. I have just indulged in pretentiousness and pretentiousness. Therefore, I really want to ask the author what the meaning of writing such a protagonist is.

The writing is very silky. If the protagonist and Run Ye really get along, it depends on how it ends with Sun Shaoan. The author seems to have intentionally or unintentionally led to the protagonist himself and Run Ye. The protagonist's lover died and he was hurt, but he still flirted with Run Ye. No matter how good they are, the protagonist doesn't seem to avoid suspicion. I'm still too young and don't understand emotions🙄Forget it, I guess I'm feudal.

It's really disgusting to be ambiguous about moisturizing the leaves while having to give it to the eldest brother. Abandoned

It's a pretty good start, but why has it been so bad recently? If I continue writing like this, it will be completely useless.

The reason why the Sun family is in trouble is that they raised a Sun Yuting, who went to junior high school and then went to a steel factory after junior high school. Sun Yuting gave up his job at the steel factory and wanted to get a wife when he returned home. This person has been raised by his eldest brother. With a wife and children, the eldest brother continues to provide for them, so the Sun family deserves to be ruined. He says his family is a mess every day, but you use the food and money to raise your children. Run to raise brothers. The family deserves to be like that.

After a brief look at it, I was so disappointed. Sun Shaojie's scenes are not as good as those of Shaoan and Shaoping, and they are also ambiguous. Giving away a daughter is really poisonous. I would rather you not write so ambiguously and assign Tian Runye to Shaoan, but there is an air of love in every line of your words. If you continue writing like this, how many people will be able to read your million-word writing?

It's disgusting to preach at every turn. I just read novels to relieve my boredom. I'm not here to listen to you nagging you to talk about the truth. If you really want to talk about the truth, can't I just go and see the ordinary world? Overall, nothing special at all

After reading the chapter "Two Bowls of Tofu Nao", I realized why this book was so awkward. It turns out that the protagonist was never Shaojie. Shaojie is just a tool, not even a human being. The protagonist in the eyes of the author is Ping An. I watched Loneliness for a long time. As long as Shaojie is not substituted, it makes sense. There is no ambiguity. How can a tool be ambiguous? It does not exist. It is also reasonable for Shaojie and Xiulian to be together. Because the author wants to write about Anrun, Xiulian will stay alone. Hey, to compensate you for being a super cool guy, you also need a bicycle. Just be satisfied! I feel sorry for you! Tools are not worthy of love, so if love is dead, it is reasonable to accept Xiulian. This is the meaning of the existence of the person named Ruan. The author needs you to die, even if you don't even show your face. Poor, he is also a tool person

If you don't have that level, don't learn how others write.

Dragon King Jia Wenqing also has some tauren attributes.

I sincerely wish the author to go further and further on the road of pretending to be an old father and create greater glory!

After reading more than 80 chapters, I am not ready to read any more First: The whole novel feels like there is no main line, with one part in the east and another in the west. Second: It has been over eighty chapters and there is still no clear heroine. Even if it is slow to catch on, it is too slow. Especially the relationship with Tian Runye. If you want to write her as the heroine, then don't develop the emotional line with Shaoan. If you don't write her as the heroine, then pay attention to the way you get along. When they first met, it felt all kinds of ambiguity. Third: It is completely unnecessary to describe the Vietnamese woman I like on the battlefield. It feels like it is superfluous. It has no effect at all except to serve as a tool for changing careers.

I have been writing out of tune. Since the protagonist is Sun Shaojie, we must follow this main line. If I keep writing about Shaoan Shaoping, I might as well watch TV series. I wrote dozens of chapters and to be honest, I didn't feel any better. It's hard to attract readers when you write like this. The writing is okay. I have watched many TV series. What you are writing is meaningless. I don't know how you wrote the outline. But it's dozens of chapters. Not at work yet. Neither does the main plot. It won't attract readers in the early stage. The latter book is hard to read. Hope to advance the main plot as soon as possible. Don't be chapter 40 or 50 and still have no work.

This book is annoying to read, self-righteous, pretentious but not round.

It's really a horse tethering... Shenma CP He Xiulian and her second child... The editor is showing off? …

I feel that the author's emotional drama is very awkward. Either Runye is with the male protagonist, or Runye is with Shaoan! Pay attention to what era you are in, otherwise the sense of immersion will be poor! Come on!

I had high expectations, but after reading Chapter 30, I was a little disappointed. I have been reassigned to work, but I haven't seen any work. The writing is all vague. I may want to introduce the background, but I will introduce one and jump to another one at a time. How can I put it, the writing may be okay, but the idea is not clear, just keep it simple. It's a bit embarrassing to hand in the blueprints in Chapter 30. It's completely illogical. You're working for the intelligence department. You can't tell the source of the blueprints clearly. You also chose the wrong Goldfinger. The one you chose is suitable for the industrial route and not the farming route. There is a very good book about the ordinary world in Qidian. I recommend reading it.

Shaoan Runye, Shaojie Xiulian, Shaoping Xiaoxia. Shaoan Runye, Shaoping Xiaoxia are speechless, Shaojie Xiulian, who can endure it? Writing like this is a dissatisfaction with the class gap and the debate between households? There were four or five girls lined up in front of Xiulian, but she suddenly had the idea to "pursue you for the rest of her life" on a whim. She also pursued her former sister-in-law and had a very good relationship with her current sister-in-law. All those girls were given away? Wonderful, really wonderful! How many people will read it after writing this? Let's wait and see. For the sake of nourishing Ye, do you deny the bond between the original official wife, or do you think that to make Shaoan live a good life, you need to marry someone with good conditions? Good guy, I have it for you.

After preparation, and honestly writing an outline for the first time, "The Ordinary World: The Second Son of the Sun Family" is finally ready for everyone to see. It's not that I have to stick to the book The Ordinary World. The main thing is that I have read this book over and over again more than a dozen times. I still listen to the audio broadcast before going to bed at night. Every time I read or listen to it, I get different results. With these gains, you will have the urge and reliance to continue creating. And under the background of being extremely familiar with the world in the book, the difficulty of creation will be reduced a lot. Gu Ying hopes to get exercise by writing a few fan books, so that he can write an original book with good quality as soon as possible. Therefore, regardless of whether he has signed a contract or not, Gu Ying will generally work hard to write it down, whether it will be long or short, but he will try his best to write a complete story. "The Ordinary World: Shaoping's Struggle" was greatly saved by the editor. It was originally written to end at Chapter 76, "Farewell, '74", so later on the plot of "drugging at a banquet" and "car accident" appeared, and the heroine was written off. But that day, the platform suddenly sent a message inviting people to sign... So, after a major revision, it was written, and it developed into multiple heroines. There is nothing we can do about this. Sun Shaoping needed a lot of money to manage the Yellow Plains. He himself did not have that much ability and energy, so he could only rely on others. However, except for the wife who is devoted to the protagonist, other people really can't do it like throwing a lot of money into mountains and rivers where there is no benefit, and without any complaints! Therefore, "Shaoping's Struggle" can be described as full of twists and turns. Originally, many book friends were dissatisfied because of the "drugged" plot. Later, the multiple female protagonists angered another group of book friends. In addition, the signing was too late and there was only one recommendation time, so the results were not good, not as good as the first "The Boy Who Traveled Through the World"... In fact, even though there were so many mistakes, the final result of "Shaoping's Struggle" was far better than that of "Youth"... Not to mention, "Youth" started well, but there were too many regrets later... It was the first time, so I had no experience. Therefore, there is this new book - "The Second Son of the Sun Family in an Ordinary World", hoping to make up for some of the previous regrets. If nothing unexpected happens, I will write another one about the human world after this book. Guying's own plan is to write two more fan books and start original work. Finally, Gu Ying hopes that book friends will frequently read "The Ordinary World: The Second Son of the Sun Family". After all, there is no charge for public chapters...

I also feel that the author writes that Sun Shaojie is a tool man and Shaoan Shaoping is the protagonist. Everything must be provided to them first. If you can wrong yourself, you will not wrong Shaoan Shaoping.

Maybe my expectations were too high. When I reached Chapter 43, it was filled with repeated sermons. The original book was told again, and the existence of the characters was dispensable. I really had no desire to read any more.

The author's self-assessment is very appropriate. It's very confusing and uncomfortable to watch. There are too many female characters arranged and they are all very confusing. There is also a person who knows ancient martial arts and fights according to the protagonist.

The protagonist has spoiled this whole family. No matter how big or small the women who have come into contact with the protagonist are, the protagonist treats her like his own mother. Even if he says he loves her, he still kneels and licks her!

The writer was maliciously reported again, and it was over in a hurry

I wanted to complain before I even finished the first chapter. First, the military uniforms of that era were very bloated and not as straight as they were straight. Second, there are no guards guarding the compound or the family area.

If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's an insult to the classics.

I don't want to read it. It's frustrating. Maybe it's not suitable for me. I still like to read some interesting articles.

"The Counterattack of the Grassroots Across the Human World" This is a story about achieving a class jump through one's own efforts, set in the human world, and is the penultimate fanfic. How difficult will it be for the first child from a rural family to enter the city to go from having nothing to truly establishing a foothold? Zhou Wen answered this question with half his life experience. As a child born in the 1970s, he almost completely missed all the opportunities that could make pigs fly. He worked hard in every possible way, and finally stepped into the entrepreneurial trap... After all the troubles, his life turned around, and when he was finally about to find peace and prosperity, a car cut off all his hopes. Fate is unpredictable. It closed his door, but opened a window and gave him the greatest gift in his life...

Has the author read "Chinese Wandering Dragon"? This writing feels very similar to