Immortal Journey

It was originally a night to read the thesis I read this book yesterday It was very good, I stayed up late to read it I read more than 300 chapters tonight I couldn't help but read the last few chapters The ending showed me emo I felt depressed in my chest It's so frustrating Oh

It is indeed a bit too pretentious, like following the trend of Ke Qiyuan, but I can't express the artistic conception, and I can't stand it anymore.

This book is well written, I don't understand why no one reads it? ?

This book is too scattered and messy, and I am always searching and getting lost. According to current terms, it is just talking about nonsense.

Actually this book is really good. It's suitable for the elderly, but it doesn't look that pretty to people. Feeling like nothing is important

Pure rubbish, following the trend of bad guys, no charm at all, trying to pretend to be a literary youth.

It feels like the writing is not up to standard and it makes my eyes hurt when I read it.

Pure studio writing, super low-profile version of Ke Qiyuan

This book is okay and can be interpreted by thousands of people. Different people have different opinions about this book. It's okay.

After reading a little bit, I feel that the problem is still a lack of imagination. The protagonist is superior to others, but there are very few places where he can show it in his words and deeds. Even if he talks nonsense, the other party will just give in. I feel that people in this world are very ignorant.

The ending is a mess and the author is depressed? Everyone should have fantasies about beautiful things instead of blindly escaping.

After reading the first 50 chapters, it does feel a bit bad, but many details are not interesting and too deliberate.

It's finished. I came here from the video. The poor can only reward 100 coins so I won't subscribe. It suits my taste very well. For a person who lives in pain, every second is torture.

This book has a plot but no plot, and it has to be exciting but not exciting, just like a glass of boiled water.

The front part is okay, but the back part is not good. The protagonist is too weak. Whether it is a prince or a monster, they take advantage of the protagonist. They all rely on the protagonist's weak temper. If he is used, he will not kill him in turn.

No wonder no one watched it. First, the protagonist let a eunuch suffer because of him, but he didn't care. Second, it was raining heavily outside the theater, and just because someone came to take shelter from the rain and scratched the protagonist while he was sleeping, he was called a rogue by the protagonist's side and was madly criticized by the protagonist's side.

The first release is not like Tomato. There is no author interface on the Tomato avatar. I am really curious as to where this author was first released.

It won't work after Long Jun comes out.

I went to see some chess source... It's said to be plagiarized. It's inexplicable. You guys are all blindfolded when talking nonsense. Aren't you afraid of losing your eggs? Although the imagination is not as wild as in "The World in the World", the most valuable thing is the quietness of the writing. Good book, recommended to collect.

This book is also very popular, and many people have read it.

I've read Chapter 50, and I'm kind of following Lan Ke's shadow, but it's always a bit less interesting than Mr. Ji.

This book should only be suitable for people of a certain age who don't want to read so much. I think the daily parts of this book are better written. As for those who like this book, I will not read it after this comment. Some of the principles in it are too Bodhisattva-hearted. The Clay Bodhisattva has 3 points of anger, but the protagonist's anger is probably barely 2 points. And the author really doesn't know how to write pretense. There is no momentum at all in the writing. . When writing about characters, it's best to only write about his actions and words, and let readers come to appreciate it. For example, if you write that a character is a hero, the author only needs to write his action language. In this article, he will always tell you what this character is like, with special emphasis. If readers have different opinions after reading it than after reading it, they will definitely feel uncomfortable. Moreover, the author's ability to give the male protagonist is really poor. It's really better to just write about the male protagonist being invincible. There's really a big problem with reincarnation in it. Many novels are disgusting whenever they mention the reincarnation of life and death. The cause and effect of past and present lives were all pulled out, but the author couldn't figure it out one by one, and then the writing became more and more stomach-ache and nausea. It's like making a pot of pork porridge and adding everything to it. The whole thing looks completely different. It's not as simple as a hodgepodge. There are big problems with the way of heaven in this novel, especially in terms of reincarnation, where cause and effect are unclear. It's not as good as those novels about cultivating immortals where people are dead when they die. Some of them touch on reincarnation, but they are just scratching the surface, so they are not bad. . Why did the author write about that demon lord and that Zhao Yuqing? I'm halfway through reading it, and the author really likes to intensify the villains. On the protagonist's side, I see that the only one who is strong enough is the protagonist. A dead demon lord's sword can fight with the protagonist, and the protagonist's apprentice is holding the protagonist in a fight. Doesn't the author feel disgusted after seeing this? Not bloody? If Zhao Yuqing hadn't been given a soft-hearted temper, the protagonist would have died long ago. There are also a lot of widowhood plots. It's the plot of two lovers who are in love with each other and are separated by nature. Author, couldn't you write more about making dumplings? The protagonist is really disastrous in dealing with emotions, very disastrous, especially in terms of the protagonist's speech and expression. Firstly, he likes the Riddler, secondly, he doesn't like to argue, and thirdly, he likes to insist on truth. In fact, many things in the plot are not that big even after the protagonist explains them clearly at the beginning. Moreover, many emotional issues are unreasonable. The protagonist always ponders over those truths, but then fails to figure them out clearly. It's because the opponent misunderstood. The protagonist didn't argue with the opponent at all, didn't talk to the opponent properly at all, and kept pretending to be the Riddler in front of him. The author may think this is very spiritual. I don't think this is virtuous at all. I watched it, and I just felt that the protagonist lacked the ability to express himself. Protagonist, you are not afraid of mortal karma, you have already experienced it all. He usually exposes his immortal skills, and from time to time he has to pretend to be in front of mortals, and then he insists on hiding it in front of some old friends he has known for many years. Then all his old friends know that he is an immortal, so what is there to keep hiding? You know and I know, what's the difference between the protagonist still pretending and taking off his pants and farting.

It's enough to see the emperor running away from the mountain, but looking back only adds to the sadness, and there are a lot of holes left unfilled. The last chapter is spoiled below, if you are interested, scroll down and read it , , , , , , , ,, , , , ,, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , In the end, every time the protagonist is resurrected, he uses his backup body to hide back in the "between life and death", leaving an empty shell outside, and then... Gone, just like this open ending, not even a bunch of holes are filled.

I have been a bookworm for 20 years, and I have found another excellent book that is suitable for reading slowly word for word. This kind of flower of the road only takes two years if you are lucky, but four or five years if you are unlucky 😍

Who is the green sword Mr. Lan made for? I forgot about it after seeing it, can anyone tell me?

I don't know how people can be so malicious and just start blabbing here after reading a few chapters. Overall, the writing is quite good, but the book is very depressing and ultimately despairing. In addition, there are indeed a few holes that have not been filled. In my impression, there are three or four, and they are not particularly important.