Escape from the Monster Asylum

My feelings after reading dozens of chapters: It roughly tells a horror story about an ordinary protagonist struggling to survive in a ghost asylum, an escape stream. Overall, you can refer to the escape scene. There is no upgrading and training, but there are special props. Excellent characterization, solid group portrait skills, and dozens of supernatural events intertwined in daily exploration and adventure. It is very thrilling and thrilling. And because the protagonist is an ordinary person, it can bring readers into their own immersive experience. This aspect can be called amazing. There are signs of the rise of great gods in ancient times. If you are not sure, let's look at the details. I always believe that the scariest thing in supernatural suspense novels is not the bloody corpse-like ghost, but the cold and weird person. I don't know if you have ever played Bloodstained Clock Tower. There is a character identity called an alcoholic. Its skill is to regard itself as a kind character so that it does not know that it is an alcoholic (this kind character is also issued when the identity card is issued). However, the skills of this kind character may be correct or wrong. Note that this is a very critical point. It is precisely because of this that the entire Bloodstained Clock Tower keeps the fun of unknown speculation until the end, rather than becoming boring after the identity is decrypted and broken. The book also cleverly maintains this interest, and the multiple doubts about the identity of the same person are its highlight. There is a writing technique called the iceberg style writing technique, which is the favorite of Guo Jingming, an old Jiangnan thief. It means that the foreshadowing details are hidden in inconspicuous corners, and intertwined with the full text, they can form an iceberg, but we can see The only part of the iceberg that can be seen is the part above the sea level. It is difficult to see the majesty and beauty under the sea surface. This will lead to endless imagination and imagination. The author will only write this point, and leave more to you to guess. What you imagine is the most perfect. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the shortcomings that still need to be improved: 1. The character arc of the supporting characters has not been discovered yet. The important characters can add more daily story lines of their own, instead of just the decryption adventure of the protagonist group. For example, the roommate who committed suicide by the protagonist on the first floor forgot his name. The name seems to be Lao Wang. Doesn't he have a grown-up daughter? Suppose his daughter likes flowers, so Lao Wang found a sunflower from somewhere and kept it well. He would occasionally show off to others his skill in growing flowers. When it blooms, it will definitely look good. Just include it in daily interactions. When the protagonist group found an opportunity to return to the first floor, they returned to the room to pack their things. The moment the nurse sister left, she suddenly tilted her head and glanced inside the room. The protagonist urged her to leave quickly and asked what she was looking at. The nurse sister smiled and said it was okay, it was just a dead sunflower - 2. Horrible things will also care about the rules in the madhouse. The plot of relying on the rules to achieve limits or even counterattack is very cool, but special There are too few props, and the escape flow cannot only be about escaping, but also requires a process of continuous accumulation of personal strength. Even 99% of the links are useless, because the protagonist cannot discover the rules, break them and use them every time. 3. Apply for a supporting role, name: Lu Yuan, personality: painter, quick thinking, multiple personalities, sub-personality is intelligent and cold-blooded, main personality is not always awakened.

A rare product, highly recommended

There are actually ten floors. It feels more difficult to escape than an apartment in hell. The protagonist must have high enough IQ and mobility. This book has mobility, but I think the IQ performance is not enough. But this is the author's first book. I hope the author will work hard and will keep reading 😳

In fact, the writing is quite good, but many people who read suspense books will save them and wait until the truth is revealed, otherwise they will be heart-wrenching and heart-wrenching waiting for more... Many novels have been left to die. Alas, I hope the author can become a big hit next time.

Oh my gosh, this is the first time I've seen it. The book is obviously very nice. What happened to the author?

The writing is okay, but the protagonist is very reckless. Sometimes he seems to be quite smart, and other times he seems to have lost his IQ.

After reading Chapter 14, I am generally in a state of confusion Question 1: The security room diary was read 17 times from 7.31 To 8.16, Each time lasting 13 minutes. The protagonist didn't find any clues, so he knew that the security door opened at 5 o'clock and the key could not be taken off? The diary was discovered after the seventeenth resurrection? The protagonist's abilities are a bit weak. And the diary in 8.1 Said that traces of someone's activities were suspected to be cleaned up. So how did the protagonist die that time? The lack of mention is considered as foreshadowing for now Question 2: Only the security room can be resurrected. This rule book does not mention it. I still turned to the discussion thread to see the author's explanation. Is the protagonist aware of this rule? If he didn't know, then he should have regarded this as a cheat, and there was no reason to act so frightened later; if he knew that dying after leaving the security room meant real death, why would he dare to violate the rules when he didn't understand anything? The protagonist's behavior is also very contradictory. He just took the medicine when the nurse asked him to take it when he came out? So good? Later, when I heard that there was a solitary room, I immediately took off my hospital gown just to be put in solitary confinement. Now I am not afraid anymore? It feels like the author hid a lot of things and didn't say anything to force the plot, just so that the girl later said that she was being targeted by a god and would die if she didn't go to the second floor for seven days. I saw the author saying that the protagonist basically has no strength to grow, and his ability to climb stairs mainly depends on the main line's hard push (this is what I understand) emmm, come on, author

It's okay, but there are a lot of unreasonable things. When the protagonist faced each incident, he just passed it recklessly. I told you not to take off your clothes, so I took them off and went into the solitary room to have a look. Aren't you afraid of dying inside? Reveal your identity directly in front of the nurse, and you are not afraid that the nurse will catch such people. The same goes for mirrors. I always want to try them. Does the author want to write that if you want to go out, you have to break the rules? But this seems too brainless. At least you should know more information before violating it.

Why is no one posting? I am the first one. I want to say that the author writes very well. I like reading this type of writing. I must keep writing.

It's good to watch, but it's hopeless. It's on the tenth floor. But I still hope to see the day when the protagonist escapes from trouble and drive three or four hours to see Lao Wang's daughter.

Author, you are really awesome. Except for being bolder, the protagonist has always been within the scope of human beings, and has not entered the immortal mode. I really love it! Must follow to the end!

It's very beautiful, especially the protagonist has no extra cheats and basically belongs to the category of ordinary people. I really love this. Come on, the author, more ah

It's really super pretty! Love it!

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Have you stopped updating?😥

Although, author, when will you update? (๑`ȏ´๑)۶

It would be scary if the author's Qidian account is logged out😱

The quality is also on the upper level, maybe this type is niche, but I like it very much, and I like it personally.

I came from qqyd and thought I would be the starting point, but my results were still not ideal.

Why would I suddenly yell when I knew I was in this place... Normal people wouldn't do this, right?

For lovers of in-depth horror novels, when I saw Chapter 72, there was no bright spot at all, and it was not scary at all. What the hell was going on in the chapter where Wang Zhang hanged himself? Do you really think you can get out by going to the second floor? What does the protagonist want to express? What does the author want to express?

Take care of yourself, you wrote very well! He has the appearance of a great god.

Very, very good. Does it have a readership?