Starting from Xiao Li's Flying Knife, He Started to Chop Randomly

Can we be less watery? Some chapters describe more than 2/3 or even 4/5 of the inner drama.

Alas, when I saw Ma Kongqun being hacked to death, I started jumping into the movie. I originally thought that the protagonist would kill decisively. As a result, as soon as they met Mrs. Bai and Huang Qianqian, they became as obedient as a licking dog. When they were ordered around, the protagonist would just stay furious. The contrast between the characters is too great. The writing style started to become Mary Sue style.

Up to now, there is nothing wrong with the overall plot and style of this book. The downfall is that there are too many scenes with the two characters, Mrs. Bai and Huang Qianqian. Zhutianliu, unless your protagonist is a wanderer or someone who can bring the heroine back, otherwise there should not be too many scenes with the female character that have nothing to do with advancing the plot. In addition, it has been repeatedly emphasized in the main text and extra chapters that none of the ancient heroines are easy to mess with, so why arrange these two people? I hope the author will pay more attention and write better in the future!

Finally, I understand why this book is not popular. First, the protagonist makes a mess of shoes and fucks other people's wives. I think there is no difference between this Mrs. Bai and Lin Xian'er. It's just that one finds many men and the other finds the protagonist! It's not a good thing at all. Every time Mrs. Bai comes, the key protagonist behaves like a dog, which is very disgusting.

Could you please stop having so many monologues?

The writing is okay, but the ramblings are annoying.

Don't write novels like Gu Long. Nowadays, no one can calm down and read martial arts. After reading too much fairy tales and fantasy, and then looking back at martial arts such as Gu Long, I always feel that it is ordinary and nothing more. What's more, if you read it quickly, it will be in the clouds. After a few days, you will not be interested in it.

I'm speechless. The two extra episodes are full of conspiracy theories, aren't they? YY's is unrealistic. Does Li Xunhuan still have conspiracy theories? From the moment he gave his daughter away, everyone knew there was something wrong with him 😅

The worldview of Xiao Li Feidao is really scummy. If you have the ability, just kill them randomly. There are really not many good people left.

Quick wear is popular now. It's not suitable to be in the same world all the time. A world needs to be completed in twenty or thirty chapters.

Lao Qi, please get up and update quickly. Don't lose your appetite. As a human being, you must talk about Wood.

Can commoners take concubines? Doesn't seem to work

The biggest problem with this book is that the author wanted to follow his own style but couldn't do it well. The narration makes it uncomfortable for people to read. I don't know if the author has read it after writing it. The distortion when reading the whole book is really unbearable. Of course, the author will not change it. I am just saying that it doesn't matter if you can change it or not.

Personally, I think the one who deserves to die the most is Li Xunhuan!

The author's complaints are too much, which greatly affects the experience. This is the first time I have seen the author being so rude.

Although it's a little unreasonable to pretend to be a fool for six years after traveling through time and discovering that you are a fool. Although the writing style is hard to describe, (but), this article does have a sense of stupidity. Don't tell me, it has a strange feeling when reading it. It's quite exciting. It's really a strange text. I don't know how the author conceived it.

I haven't read the book yet, but the title always confuses hacking with blowing.

The writing style is okay, but it's really too watery. Sooner or later, it will make readers abandon the book. It's too messy.

I'll just tell you what time it is. The content is not concise enough and is a bit verbose; The writing style is obviously rough and crazy, almost writing whatever comes to mind; There is nothing wrong with the plot line, but the protagonist behaves too crazy, has a distorted outlook, and is so self-justifying that he has no kindness at all. But he almost goes to the point of killing everyone he sees (think about it, at least half of the people who appear next to the protagonist have a mortality rate); ... Suggestion, if you open a new book in the future. Written in a solid style and don't go crazy. Just give the protagonist a "hard-working" character (the experience of killing people is a bit crazy after all), establish a "harmonious" character for a while, smile on the surface, and send it to others neatly in the evening. Just keep it simple. Congratulations on the fire.

It's very well written. I hope you stick with it. I'll give you the monthly pass. It seems really comfortable. I feel angry in life. It's impossible to read novels and still feel angry.

The existence between Internet literature and martial arts novels.

The new ones are good, keep writing. Some of the previous comments have mentioned that the handling techniques are probably not good enough, but these are minor problems, not flaws. It will be much better in the future to reduce the storytelling style of writing that does not have a strong sense of substitution. The latest chapter is getting better and better, and it is one of the few popular works that I have read (I think this is very rare and valuable. The current Internet environment is not good, there are too many assembly-line works, and the overall development trend is rigid). The character creation is three-dimensional and not rigid, and the plot advancement is also quite rhythmic. As for some plots, everyone has different preferences. Some people like it and some don't. It varies from person to person. The author does not have to cater to certain people and change it, which will disrupt his own writing rhythm (many collections of good books have been discontinued due to this reason. Can you believe that 7 out of 10 new books that I thought had potential were cut in half? Not even one book can reach 600,000 words). Maintain the integrity, harmony and rationality of the work. If you write a good story, someone will always like it. Come on

Although the extra story is from the same family, it still has some meaning. In fact, protagonists like Li Xunhuan and Linghu Chong may seem awesome to you as a teenager, but when you become an adult, you will feel really uncomfortable. Moreover, as mentioned in the extra chapter, there is indeed something wrong with Li Xunhuan's training in flying swords. To paraphrase a sentence in "The Rain and the Clouds", he can only be extremely affectionate and considerate of the sword, just like the waves turning over the clouds. Li Xunhuan had the same purpose. He was always carving Lin Shiyin's portrait puppets. If Li Xunhuan was the only one to do this, it could be said that Li Xunhuan found the trick in a unique way. However, Li Xunhuan's descendants also have their own quirks that are different from ordinary people, which would be interesting. Set an extremely harsh condition for yourself and constrain your ability, so that your martial arts will increase exponentially under these conditions. This method is common to both Buddhism, Taoism and Confucianism. Li Xunhuan's family background is that he was a father and son who were seven Jinshi scholars. He was absolutely profound in Confucianism. Most of the ancient literati were involved in Buddhism and Taoism. Li Xunhuan, who was able to study for flowers in high school, was extremely talented and must have dabbled in Buddhism and Taoism. There was a high probability that he knew this method, which was not absolutely secret.

It's a very good book. Why is no one talking about it? I'll reward you with a hundred points. I hope the protagonist will go to the TV series version of Seven Swordsman.

It's okay. At least it's not like many novels that people can't stand. I may not reward them, but I will order them all.

Hurry up and write, brother, it's all settled.

I have been reading books for so many years, and this is the first time that there are zero comments in the comments section! Even if some new books only have a few chapters, the author will write a few chapters! Then let's talk about how the book is going. I've read eight chapters, and there's nothing bad about it. I feel like it's okay! It seems okay to me who is a book-hungry person, not bad!

It's interesting to write, but why no one commented?

Good. . . . As a book reader for more than ten years, yes.

After reading it, let me tell you my thoughts. In fact, it was quite exciting before it was released. However, after it was released, it was mixed with a lot of the author's personal information and personal opinions, which was quite unpleasant. After all, it has basically nothing to do with the advancement of the plot and the characterization of the protagonist. If you secretly hide the personal information in the plot or on some characters, it will advance the plot, enrich the characters, and will not make most people resent the inclusion of personal information. Overall, the writing is good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.