The Resort Starts from the Inn

I have just read Chapter 33. My feeling is that there is nothing wrong with the idea and plot, but it just doesn't make sense to read. I prefer to read silently. There are many sentences in this book that are very awkward to read. For example, I saw a few dialogues between the protagonist and the shop assistant in the last chapter 33. My current impression is that the protagonist has to call Teacher Aguo again in every sentence, and he calls it again in double quotation marks. Normal people wouldn't speak like this... I mean that after writing it, I have to read it again. Maybe you have been thinking about these two sentences for a long time and don't think there is a problem, but when I read it, there was only a period.

I briefly browsed through the catalog, and to be honest, I was quite disappointed. I only watched this movie for the animals and daily life, but it has gradually developed into a commercial one, which is a bit over-the-top. At least for me, it's like putting the book at the end. Of course, I don't know what the author's outline is. Keep it on the bookshelf for now and see how it develops in the future! You can take a look at Dad's gourmet shop, which has all kinds of daily life, but it doesn't look watery. Everyone expresses his or her opinion and sprays lightly!

When writing novels about rural revitalization, tourism, and cute pets, it is best not to be too eager for quick success and instant gain. Isn't it easy to get rich in novels? Winning the lottery, finding a like-minded rich man, or making a fool of yourself. But the most attractive thing is the things that social animals can come into contact with, but don't have time to come into contact with. Why is there a saying that cats are raised in the clouds? Is it that ordinary social animals cannot afford to raise them? No, it's just that social animals don't have the energy or space to raise a cat. The author's book can achieve a cloud experience, and if readers can immerse themselves in it, the author will be successful. If you write a novel in a hurry to surpass the United Kingdom and catch up with the United States in terms of GDP and values, the novel will probably lose its appeal!

Girls with pear dimples smile very sweetly

I don't understand why there is a plot where Xu Miaomiao accidentally touches the protagonist's thigh?

It's really well written. I just like a plain, leisurely life. But the author doesn't add a lot of messy harem love lines at the end. Please, I really can't stand it (🤔 It's really good. Is she the heroine?)

Damn it, I've just read the last chapter and the elephant hasn't even arrived yet, so bad review

The protagonist is so able to attract small animals, why doesn't he attract some flying mosquitoes, spiders, snakes and other animals, but there are more than precious animals?

The writing is very plain and bland, and I feel that the writing style is okay, but I could add some pictures to make it more perfect, and don't mess up the story about cultivating immortals and superpowers. It's better to be bland and bland.

In fact, I think that the issue of applying for a protected area and construction and development should be resolved as soon as possible, because according to the writing, someone is already coming to camp and have a barbecue. It would be terrible if it was written after the protagonist had a conflict and then applied for a protected area and discussed development issues.

Don't turn it into a commercial novel. What you write is an animal fairy tale world, not a business empire. You have already begun to discover business.

The character creation is really good

Why did you do it with animals?

The inn built with 5 million yuan only has 4 guest rooms. Don't you think there are too few rooms? It's not a scenic spot, and the consumption is so high that it's impossible to fill it up every day. How long will it take to get back the money?

It would be nice if the author could write it more compactly. It would be enough to write about an elephant🐘family of three who had to wait 4-5 days to arrive at the inn but they haven't arrived yet. It's not that I don't want to subscribe to all of them, it would feel unworthy for readers to write like this. I would rather wait until the elephant arrives before reading that chapter.

Regarding the choice of the heroine and some suggestions (complaints) This post is purely subjective and is based on some thoughts and opinions generated in this book, without any allusion to reality. I hope the author has his own ideas about the choice of the heroine, and does not make a fuss about the emotional drama. If there is no heroine, I will not say anything (Diejia, passed) From the order of appearance 1. Aguo: The first one to appear, and the woman who interacts with the protagonist the most, has a good impression of the protagonist, but there are differences in family status and values ​​​​from the protagonist. An analogy in terms of values ​​is like the shopping in recent chapters. As a young man who can work for several years and save hundreds of thousands, the clothes of Xiaobai are just clothes in the eyes of the protagonist, but in the eyes of Aguo, spending a few hundred yuan to buy clothes is luxury. This is an inevitable difference caused by different growing environments. If Aguo is to be written as the heroine, on the one hand, Aguo's mother has recovered from her illness in the latest chapter. On the other hand, I think it is to make Aguo better so that people will not feel mismatched (for example, to improve her cultural level or something, after all, as mentioned before, she is a girl who loves to learn and improve herself). 2. Jiang Xinzhu & Xu Miaomiao: The three views, family, career, etc. All match. If both of them become famous, they can have a dream linkage or something. The disadvantage is that there is not much screen time. If one of the two is written as the heroine, I hope it will not be too abrupt. 3. Zheng Yaqi: A strong woman (? Maybe), with a good family and her own business, and a very comfortable personality. The shortcomings are the same as above At present, these are the ones that may be suggested first. I hope the author's results will get better and better.

Give the author a suggestion, could you add a talking parrot?

It's pretty good-looking, and I like farming 💔 but it looks like the data is not good. Are you ready to pigeons?

Might be entering the palace! Why…………

Can the protagonist attract mosquitoes, flies, bed bugs, and cockroaches?

It's well written. I just saw the paid chapter and checked the word count. I found it was a eunuch and cut my losses in time. Stop watching. Very good content, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch.

Keep it up, nice writing.

It's fully booked and I've given you a monthly pass.

Great, please improve it🌷🌷

The author's writing is fluent and his ideas are clear. It is worth investing in a new book. Suggestions: 1⃣️The characters in the article are very full, but there are still small flaws that need to be adjusted. 2⃣️The animal image construction is not complete enough, and actual plot should be added to fill it up. The author can watch more foreign documentaries and check more information. 3⃣️The protagonist's cheat system should be improved, otherwise it will be very abrupt. Mostly integrated with the plot. Attached are a few selfies of the scenery 👍👍                                                                 🤭

Why is there no follow-up?

The author was miraculously resurrected🙂

Is bread just going away?

Maintain this quality, as long as you don't act like a fool and slap someone in the face, Xiancao Wen

Come on, come on, it's very warm and beautiful