
Originated in Xingxiang
起源在星乡
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 7k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Future World
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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9Chapters
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Only personal opinion
It feels like there are still a lot of things that have not been written, and the relationships between the characters have not been developed much. There are a lot of things that can be explored in the character story. The two Chu brothers and sisters and the two Yuchi brothers. If their experiences are told in detail, the characterization can be improved and the world view can be expanded. Otherwise, after reading the story, I only have a story in my mind about the brother controller who is willing to destroy the world in order to resurrect his brother. I also feel that Chu Xingyao and Chu Xinghang are really pitiful. They took care of Fan Jiangli, but Fan Jiangli treated them as tools. But overall it's fair, at least the characters' story lines and behavioral logic are in line with the characters. In short, I still like this story. It would be great if the author could improve its content. I really want to see the adventures of the two Chu brothers and sisters in Ganzhexing Township and the story of Yuchi Jiangli and his brother. Come on, author!
Can you write more? I feel like the content could be richer.