Starting from Li Mochou, He Became a Disciple of Zhutian

If I were the protagonist, I would directly rebel. The whole world is mine, and then I exchanged the whole world. Directly becoming a star-destroying powerhouse.

The previous TV series "Master" is "Master", the current TV series "Master" is "Lover", and so are the novels.

The introduction is quite interesting, it's just that there's nothing to write about about Yakuza Douluo, it's just the world of sewers

He is also ruthless and not afraid of being eaten. He is truly a cannibal. . Besides, he's just a weakling who hasn't become an immortal, yet he's so awesome. No, it's just not strong enough

It feels a bit fake. The protagonist has been practicing for less than a month. Even with the blessing of Zongzong's magical skills, he can't easily defeat Zhao Zhijing, who has been practicing for decades, right? ! In the original book, Yang Guo was able to fight because Yang Guo practiced Toad Kung Fu when he was a child, and then practiced in the Tomb Sect for several years.

Is Douluo's martial arts not as high as Feng Yun?

The writing of Shendiao is okay, it's pretty good. I looked at the introduction and saw something like Bibi Dong, Ruthless Emperor, etc. Can the author be replaced or skipped? Don't think that they can retain people if they are popular. Internet novels have become popular, but they are fast-food novels. Who will remember whom? Even if your book becomes popular, I will forget it in less than three months. You write fan fiction, don't you analyze the reasons? The Eagle of Gods, Journey to the West, Fahai, why are there so many fanfics? Because people have a film and television background, these things are replayed and remade every year. Even if you don't have an impression, you still have an impression. Only then can it be put in. I wonder what those two online novels were about. It's good to remember the names.

I want to say that ordinary people who physically traveled to Douluo became gods. What do you want to learn? You have learned so many things before, and you are directly killing the world of Douluo.

The author probably has a sense of déjà vu that he is the male protagonist, but why do you think Li Mochou and Ruren like you? Let's not talk about Li Mochou, who is the ruthless emperor? Does she like you? You're not putting money on your face... You're putting money on your face

🙂Invite the moon and wish Yuyan. Hehehe

Reading ten chapters made me sick. I'm most afraid of men making bets if they don't take the initiative. He is a man with both scheming and scheming, but he is also simple and unsophisticated. Martial arts is even more vague, how could he become so small? Why do you have the courage to compete? It's the same as the Huashan Sword Qi battle. How can your ineffective moves be compared with the moves driven by internal force for more than ten years?

The protagonist is too old, and it is impossible for Li Mochou to recycle her. She is dressed as a Taoist nun, and it works well to be followed by an 18-year-old protagonist!

Insert an eye. When will you challenge the master? When will you watch?

It's a little bit toxic, I jumped to watch it, I don't recommend watching it, it feels like a pig's feet are childish.

Isn't it funny? When you kill others, you should use your fists to make sense. If you can't beat yourself, you should use your sense of reason when you are killed! Tell me some truth?

Let me explain first, I didn't read the book, I just read the introduction. When I saw Tang San's book in the sewer, I decided not to read it. Why did I write about Tang San? How hard did the author think about it?

It's quite poisonous, and the protagonist's decision-making is also not very good. I suggest you don't waste your time opening this book.

After reading the first twenty chapters or so, I felt like the protagonist was being led by the system. It's like the protagonist doesn't know what to do if the system doesn't release the task. Also, when Qiu Chuji killed Granny Sun, the protagonist gave me the feeling that he had never thought about revenge before the system released the task of killing Qiu Chuji. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

Chapter fifty-seven can't stand it anymore. The writing is good, but the character of the protagonist is distorted, the plot is almost shitty, the external expression is poor, and the inner drama is almost zero. In summary, the subject matter and writing style are good, but the characters are not fleshed out enough and the plot is poor. PS: Did you ask a gunman to write it?

To deceive the master and destroy the ancestor? ? ? 🙂🙂🙂

What kind of rubbish is this? Author, would you like to read what you have written? It is completely wrong. Worse than a studio 😰

Damn it, I can't stand it anymore, it's gone!

Is this all the Quanzhen Sect? ? Have some brains, okay?

After reading the second chapter, I decisively gave up. If it was Li Mochou who was in the period of killing people, he would have said so much to the protagonist, and just kill him first.

Li Mochou went crazy to retaliate against society because of a broken love. He did anything including murder and arson. This kind of person is extremely evil and should be shot.

Let me ask you about the heroine. Is this book without a heroine? If yes, is there much xo? Are there many female supporting characters? If there is a female protagonist, is it a single female protagonist?

He can do anything with his writing, but he is so invincible. After two months of practice, he defeated Qiu Chuji, and even after practicing, he defeated Ouyang Feng and killed Qiu Chuji. He was comparable to Long Aotian, so invincible that it was boring.

There are a lot of poisonous points, can you maintain some logic?

Looking forward to the appearance of Ye Fan, I also suggest the author to search Manman Zhutian on Baidu, there may be unexpected gains.

Become a disciple of Li Mochou, are you Hong Lingbo or Lu Wushuang?