If You Don't Fall in Love in Tokyo, You Will Die

This book was interesting at the beginning, but Kamishiro Akane made me feel speechless. I thought it was just a short subplot, but this five-year-old girl has more words than the heroines. This story is very connotative and philosophical, but! I am not here to read such boring supernatural events. What I want is a sweet and cheap love. This five-year-old girl, how can I love this five-year-old girl? Bagaya Road!!!!!!

Good guy, there are only 37 people on the book friend list. This is too miserable.

Do you want to write a romance where the protagonist would rather be the enemy of the whole world and protect a little loli no matter how much casualties it causes? How did you come up with such a disgusting plot?

You can write your negative comments here and I will try my best to reply. The outside me has moved here, and I don't want to affect the perception of new readers.

It was pretty good in the early days, but it started to get worse after it started raining.

The writing is very messy, the emotional lines, dialogues, and the appearance of the characters are all very messy. Sometimes it even feels like the text is messed up. I want to write about Riqing, but I can't write the flavor of Riqing. In novels that favor Riqing, the plot and dialogue will have some "smart" characters, or the Riddler or something like that. But when this novel is written, it will only make people feel that it is irrelevant. To put it bluntly, it is "a bunch of illogical nonsense."

It's still raining, it's still raining! Just change the title of the novel to Rainy Day.

I feel like I've been cheated, this is not everyday writing at all

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In summary, it is very messy, the emotional lines are very messy, and emotional fragments that gain heartbeat value are forcibly inserted. The whole book seems very messy, and what the hell is it raining all the time? It was originally written well at the beginning, but it started to feel toxic when it started to rain.

It's so distracting, isn't this a romance novel? How come it's like a supernatural and superpower novel? It's written that the protagonist slowly opens up the heart of the Gods. Wouldn't it be nice if the rain stopped? Also, wouldn't it be a little bit that the whole city's economy and buildings were damaged because of a rain?

Is it still raining? Your plot should be arranged in the middle and later stages of the book's story, instead of bringing out the magical elements directly in the early stages. It's too long, really. Your writing style is very tasteful, but this is an online article, after all, you only need to read the plot 😅

I feel that Shui Yong's emotional line is a bit baffling... The rain hasn't ended yet and I feel it's okay now... Let the rain end as soon as possible...

It's a bit messy, but my daily writing is okay and I can follow it!

Akane Kamishiro started to develop into mysterious powers, especially the old lady who owned the house, she was very cliche and dramatic.

This result is a little too outrageous. The author is so outrageous about updating it. Please support me.

Very well written, good luck to the author

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The title of the book should be changed to "If you don't fish, you will die."