The Fateful Star of the Peninsula

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Single heroine, pretty good, most HY nowadays are time management masters

More than 210 geniuses have invested in 11 novels. This is my second failed investment.

Is the male protagonist a reference to Death Walking in My Door One Day?

Another investment failed and I was tired. I hope I can come back in a year. After all, I have seen some authors like this😭😭😭

Why isn't it updated?😭

Aspects of my destiny~

Don't you want to update soon? Donkeys are not as lazy as you

The setting of the book is really novel. Although the protagonist is a "superman", he lacks certain emotions. The main line of the story is that the male protagonist and the female protagonist create a spark of love in the process of replenishing their emotions. But the plots to complement the emotions written in the book are too superficial and can even be said to be casual. Just some small interactions with the heroine can supplement the emotions. One chapter can even supplement two or three emotions, making the process seem too trivial, failing to leave an impression on the readers and wasting the setting. My little suggestion is that the author can focus on selecting a few very important emotions to write about, such as love, hate, jealousy... Some emotions that are not so important can be omitted directly or have been acquired in the past, such as embarrassment... Otherwise, if there are no small emotions, then the male protagonist should be a cold robot. Why choose jealousy? Because the male protagonist is a seducer. Decades of work have made him numb to things in the world. He is a bystander to things that others hate. Therefore, he cannot understand the emotion of jealousy. It was not until he saw the female protagonist feeling jealous in her interactions with other men that he slowly understood this emotion. When the emotion is added, the author can use some words to describe the feeling, but cannot directly indicate what emotion it is because the male protagonist has never experienced this emotion before. At the same time, you can also use contrasting techniques to mention that the male protagonist was indifferent to a certain thing before, but when these things happened to the female protagonist, he could not remain indifferent. Writing like this has several advantages, that is, the story can be written very long and well written, instead of like now, the book becomes thinner and thinner. This is not to say that the author has nothing to write later, but the further he writes, the more he will be left with the romance with the heroine, and the story will be repetitive and the audience will be thinned out. When the acquisition of each emotion is treated as a unit, the sparks between the heroine and the heroine range from not acknowledging the specialness of the heroine at the beginning, to caring about her arrogantly, to finally completing the last emotion in the final chapter, that is, learning to love someone. I believe that this book will also reach its climax, and this book will no longer be a self-pleasure for the heroine's fans, but a feast for novel readers.

Eunuch, it's a pity that no matter how beautiful the book is, you can't read it. The eunuch article is like watching the director of a movie. Halfway through, the film freezes 😫

The writing is very good and the ideas are very original. Please update it.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Please update it, please 😁

I also failed to invest in this book, The Eunuch

For Zhao Mian🌹

There are not many novels that I can read. That Peninsula Restaurant Story, I read Chapter 30 and discovered TJ. The writing is good. If you polish it carefully and write a story with multiple female protagonists, it should be popular. After all, the popular ones are all with multiple female protagonists.