There's Something Wrong with My Sailing Game

It really affects reading. In the first three chapters, you only mention what it was like in the past life every few sentences (the key is still the same content). You forget it once or twice, but you end up mentioning it seven or eight times, the new hydrological method? ?

The author is a person who can write about new topics, but my friend held a minute's silence for his sister-in-law.

Although it's only 13 chapters, it's still good so far, but the author is actually an old eunuch who slipped away

It's true that the same thing is true. How was it before? What was it like before?

Is this a pirate? This is Young and Dangerous!

The main reason is that the eunuch really doesn't dare to look at it.

I didn't see anything interesting. I kept licking and making it fancy. The pig's feet were always there, magnifying the dog-licking style used in business and workplace. I really didn't feel it.

Brothers, is there such a possibility: this is an official article, not a game article, I mean it is possible

Look at the gap between the author's books and those written by others. You started writing two months earlier than others, and they have thirty more chapters than you. Author, you are really capable.

Everyone, in addition to the author of this book, what other great father-in-laws can you recommend? There are too few books to read. Now I plan to read the old books of all your father-in-laws (although they must be cut up, but being able to make a name for yourself in the palace, and there is a group of readers who will not leave, shows that the level is guaranteed to a certain extent, which is better than digging for gold in your own shit)

Recently, many novels of the same type have appeared. They all start with ocean and ship elements, and players cooperate with the official. The first batch of novels has a female player who is a badass in her previous life and cooperates with the protagonist. This is the third novel I have discovered. Is this novel following the trend or is it a studio novel?

When does the author-protagonist start to get on track? Just engage in some incompetent negotiations and battles of wits all day long, forget it in the early transition. It's already sixty or seventy chapters in and there's no mention of the upgrade system, the players don't appear, and there's not even a rough outline of the background. What on earth are you writing about? Is the author going to write a novel about officialdom?

The writing is very good, but there are too many official dramas, and there is no promotion in sight. The majestic plot makes it not satisfying enough. Farming is not even mentioned much. The highlight of the fourth natural disaster is farming and harvesting players. Moreover, it is too early to put it on the shelves. It should be put on the shelves when players arrive for the best effect. Readers will be happy to read it with a sense of anticipation, and they will not be as unhappy as now, and they will leave as soon as they want.

According to you, the score shouldn't be so bad. It turned out to be a eunuch too many times. Others at least fooled the ending. Well, you just cut it off. It's not that the book is not good-looking, but that you don't believe in the author's character.

The East and the West are mixed. If you use a Western pirate background and apply it to Eastern people, will it look funny? Or use an Eastern background to see what the pirate world looks like in Gu Huo Bird and apply it, or use a Western background to apply Western people to Pirates of the Caribbean. It would be better than yours.

I was just about to watch it when I looked at the discussion forum and saw that an old eunuch had slipped away.

The writing is very good, but you seem to be a eunuch, please update more😱

It turns out it's you, hey, I've been waiting for month after month for the last book, you tj.

Pirate, extraordinary, desert island title deed, I'm sorry, I can't stand it anymore, even if you set up a god of law to guarantee the validity of this title deed?

After reading Chapter 62, I have always had a question, and I just can't bear it anymore. Why don't the three pirate kings in the southern seas run away? This is a real world, twice the size of the earth. How big is the ocean? Just one country? If the Rat Emperor had no time to run away and the Wolf Emperor didn't think of running away, then what about the Wen Emperor? For the sake of his men? It doesn't make sense. How many pirates would commit suicide for the sake of their men? Even if it's for the sake of his subordinates, can't everyone retreat collectively and go somewhere else? Must he die in the southern sea? This is really a bit like the map in the game, limited to one map. But this is the real world, not a game, and there is no such thing as changing the map. I was attracted to read this book by the dialogue at first, but after reading this, I really couldn't figure it out. As a big boss of pirates, and not a philanthropist, he would rather die than save a group of pirates (or a few confidants) who are killing people and robbing wealth, and it may not be possible to save him. It makes sense to just take his confidants to other sea areas.

I can't write about it in Eunuch if I don't have good grades and I'm miserable with everyone. You just cut it off without saying a word. You don't treat the book friends who are reading as human beings, right?

It's been 5 days, I'm a eunuch, I feel so uncomfortable, even asking for leave is not so uncomfortable.

I'm going to die if I keep it, just start a new book and kick me in the ass

Today is also a day to miss copies.

I saved dozens of chapters and read them all in one go. It was so cool. The protagonist is really awesome, with an IQ that crushes most of the protagonists from the starting point. The only shortcoming of this book is the author. The pace is too slow due to the lack of updates. It would be much better to publish two chapters of 4/5 thousand words a day.

Brothers, I'm withdrawing. I feel like the price system has collapsed.

Call me when you get a new vest, I will support you when I see it.

It's such a good thing to be a eunuch, but it's a pity that it almost got exposed.

If you have new ideas, they are better than 90% of writers. The advantages are rarer than the disadvantages. It's not difficult to keep at it and download this masterpiece.

Can there be a book that ends normally?