The Stand-In Messenger of the Beauty World

I really want to change your life and rush to the street, write about Killer Queen with a power of 200 kilograms, damn, even an enhanced version, fight a bear with a cricket and fight against the wind, damn, in order to publish this chapter, I also voted for a monthly vote, damn, I am really blind.

Among all the substitute messenger novels I read, this one has the most interesting protagonist.

The Killer's Girl is called an enhanced version, but it's actually a tattered version of Beggar's Youth. It's too inferior. Killer Queen and Zombie Ola, how could you come up with such a plot?

What the hell is the author? He clearly said it was an enhanced version of Killer Queen, but you wrote it like a weakling without even an A-panel. Can you please stop selling dog meat like a sheep? It's disgusting.

It feels bad to have the protagonist's memory modified, which makes it easier to write the plot, but it's hard to watch the protagonist make mistakes.

Seeing that the Stand's ability has been completely changed and weakened, I originally looked at the Stand and the American Supernatural, but after seeing the transformation of the Stand, I immediately lost interest. It feels like trying to sell a sheep over a dog's flesh. If you choose a Stand, the most suitable one should be Weather Forecast. It has strong abilities, great potential, and many tricks. It is very suitable for writing an upgrade flow. It can play wits and perform miracles with great strength. Damn it. There are so many ways to play with the ability to control the climate. If you don't want to write a battle of wits, you can use your strength to create miracles. Play with thunderstorms and strong winds to crush the enemy. If you want to play a battle of wits, just play micro-management like the original. If you play the upgrade stream, you can work on the strength and precision of the ability. Later upgrades can upgrade the control of planet climate to the control of cosmic phenomena such as solar wind, flares, cosmic rays, etc.

Can the author change the ability of the avatar? It's all wrong. The little tank is called wither and penetrate the heart attack, which is the name of Queen's song. The third ability is called the loser eats dust, which means if you lose, you eat the dust. What is the loser king?

It's written in a different way, rubbish

Writing fan fiction itself is a trick, especially when using big IP themes. What you attract are fans of these big IPs, allowing the author to quickly accumulate a fan base. However, the expressiveness of your writing of these IPs is not as good as the original work. That's sorry, because the original work itself has its own logic. If you use the original work's own logic to write your own book, it's like a draft has been made. But if you don't write according to the draft, let alone a fan base, you will only get a slap in the face. When you write about JOJO, you must first understand JOJO. At least his fighting style, his jokes, even his painting style, and his cool points are all the basis for attracting fans. But only the ability is similar, and then it is gone.

How to say it! The first three chapters seem to be urban stories. In the fourth chapter, zombies pop up, and then there are puppets and mysterious ones. After a few chapters, the stand-in messenger comes again! I feel like the world view is a bit confusing. It is better to establish the world view through flashbacks in the previous chapters and explain the protagonist's cheats. Then explain what happened. Otherwise it would be too much fun to watch!

A weak substitute, or an enhanced version? Worse than the original version!

The author's idea is good, but the content is... Well, it's a bit unreadable!

Playing to delete and modify the memory of the protagonist. So there is no point in having a time traveler protagonist or a protagonist who knows the plot. This is a huge poison to me. Withdrawal.

In such a chaotic place, if you have the ability to be a substitute, will you have no money and be chased for debts?

What you wrote is a bit complicated. . . The description of the organization that blocks the area is incomprehensible.

Sure enough, I was thrown into the street, hahahaha

I feel like the novel has a common problem of new writers, that is, there is no logical anchor point to go to. I was drawn into reading it because of the stand-in and the elements of the horror movie world. However, it seems that the stand-in is a bit discouraged by the second design. The world view of the horror movie has also been changed for the follow-up plot. Basically, if Killer Queen really needs all the abilities, it will come directly If it is used, it means random killing, so the ability is greatly reduced, and if the world view of a horror film follows the direction of the plot, the author feels that there is no originality, so he also changes the plot and setting. This has led to the first dozen chapters that I have read so far, the two attractive points of the stand-in and the horror film have become points of dissuasion. This is a common problem with too many fan fictions.

I really recommend that you change the part where the mini-boss crippled the protagonist. I didn't think this dungeon was powerful, I just thought the protagonist was stupid. If you want the protagonist to die or be injured, could you make the monster side look sinister and powerful instead of making the protagonist look stupid?

Guys, please read, please read! Collecting and reading is more than 30 years old...😭