With Good Luck, I Spent the Days Practicing in the Harem

Saw the forced uterus. First of all, it's the writing power. It looks smooth, which means I graduated from the broken chapter class at the starting point! Then there is the protagonist: 1. Goldfinger, swallows luck! Rule-level bugs appear out of nowhere. 2. Personality, silly, dishonest! For the time being, I've seen Grandmaster 3 and I'm still a noob! Hanhan is on top. 3. The harem is a close acquaintance for the time being. The summary is that you can still watch it! Setting: Xi soil + myth + Mountains and Seas Book + Human body transformation + Whispers of the ancient gods + copy of the demiplane of the world Xi soil is the main setting, the royal bloodline exists in Xi soil (pure version), and the protagonist cannot absorb it after being purified by the soul! Set bug! The world of Classic of Mountains and Seas outside the city is one of the general backgrounds, there is not much to say! The Myth Copy (Dead Realm) created a new pit in order to explain the relics of the previous life, and it has been ignored ever since! There is actually a copy of Darwin's Theory of Evolution. It goes directly from Chinese fantasy to stitching together the world. This setting is a bit vague. Human body modification, this is really disgusting to watch, but the plot is here! Just change it! It's disgusting that the protagonist can control the human body and modify it himself! The biggest pitfall is that when the imperial city emits consciousness, it hears the whispers of the ancient gods! What a huge pit! Never fill it in, never touch it! Half World Dungeon! The final boss pit! It doesn't matter if you fill this hole slowly! But there are still bugs! The barbarians in the Northern Territory are on the front line of the gray tide. It is understandable that they first obtain the crossing technology, but who built this ship? Since this ship was built, why did people die? Why don't people enter this world if they are not dead? Moreover, the first great witch dared to float with just a piece of wood. Aren't there a lot of weird things? Still at the Grand Master level, the protagonist doesn't even dare to go there. How does he survive by hiding his aura in his shadow? Originally I didn't want to read a book with my brain, but I couldn't stand the author who kept digging holes and not filling them! If you don't fill in the hole, I'll think about it! But it was mainly the human body modification part that made me vomit! The protagonist is not a Gou style, running around wearing a vest all day long! At first glance, it doesn't look like a serious slut! Finished complaining! Goodbye!

I was a little panicked after reading this book review

As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will definitely become a masterpiece of another kind.

I really like novels of this style. Please do your best, the author.

Let's talk about the highlights of this book: In terms of the protagonist's special ability (gold finger), he can devour everything and generate corresponding strength, items or identities, which is quite thoughtful; in terms of world structure, it can be said that under the boundless weirdness, human beings only guard an isolated island, and the night-piercing monster was born in the extreme darkness under the human being as a whole. The Spear of Dawn is Xia Yan, but the overall situation of the outside world has not yet been revealed; in terms of characters, there are the coquettish and mysterious queen, the cold and kind-hearted Qingmei, etc. However, as for the protagonist's character, I think the author can reduce some descriptions of the drunken madman to create an image of the protagonist who is cautious but not cowardly, serious but not serious, generous but not compassionate. Of course, we need to write more about the daily life of the protagonist and the people around him, increase the dialogue, and better express the image of the main characters, and pay attention to the issue of facial expressions of the characters in the novel... Well, that's all I have for now. I'll give the author a few suggestions, don't be too annoyed, hehehe~

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It was clearly well written in the past. The male protagonist is still growing in the palace. He goes out from time to time to improve his strength. He can occasionally act cool. Overall, he is still developing and getting stronger, and he is the old yin comparison behind the scenes. As a result, when Lord Yan continued to appear later, I felt that the level of the protagonist suddenly dropped. Whether it was his contact with people in the world or helping soldiers in the city to put out fires, he acted like a kind and silly guy who had just left the world, but his temperament was cold. Even the old kid was dragged into the water and forced to detoxify the woman who became the protagonist with the old-fashioned drug. The old and far-sighted old kid was gone. . . I feel that the author's writing is quite messy. It originally needed one incident to reveal the strength of the ancestors within the dynasty. The author arranged half a chapter to directly explain the true situation of the dynasty, and also explained the master and the military god who rebelled inexplicably. Well, let's go directly to the climax of the plot. Maybe the book is not far away, and the author wants to finish the plot quickly. . . . 😅

If you don't like Lao Bangzi, you have to force him. Who wants someone to be a puppet? She has no freedom, has to obey her orders and unreasonable demands, and has to be despised in all kinds of ways. She is turned around. Other readers have already acquiesced in her as one of the heroines. Although she may not accept this kind of drugged plot, I simply don't like this kind of person to be the heroine.

It's not a sneer, it's just so-so. The main reason is that the pit is too deep and the entire map surrounds Yujing. It feels like you are in a room watching animals playing in a washbasin, and you can't extend your thoughts about the scenery outside the house. There is also the Demon Sealed List, which makes people feel as noisy as the final BOSS. In addition, the protagonist Jin's mobile phone also has a force value. You have to say that Gold Finger is not strong. . It's also strong, and it improves quickly, but if you want to say it's strong, it's pretty rubbish. . From now on, the Grand Master will have to find the way on his own and then spend most of the time to become the Golden Finger. Then let's talk about the protagonist's protective power. . This is quite frustrating anyway. You'll know after seeing it

How can I say that copying poems from another world? There are many place names, characters, allusions, and events in poems that are different from those in other worlds. Besides, being able to write good poems means that you have talent in that area. The protagonist himself knows whether you have talent in that area.

Having sex with Lao Bangzi is so disgusting, so damn toxic. I won't watch it. I won't watch it anymore. What did the author think? It's so disgusting.

The front is good, grass jelly. It wasn't until Li Qingzhao appeared that he responded. First of all, the name that I should be familiar with is Li Qingzhao and layman Yi An. Many Internet articles like to use this kind of name. Then, the worldview from the beginning once again opened up the power of the literary world. This is not a contradiction, but I don't like it either. It is too scattered. There are too many important women. Specifically, the supporting female roles are too heavy, and the enemies are like weeds. There are too few words and inks, and they are not systematic. As a result, the whole text is not solid enough, and it all relies on the queen to support it.

If any book friends encounter the problem of confusing chapters, please click to re-add to the bookshelf and the problem will be solved. Thank you!

Update, don't be afraid of being told by two or three people that the plot is disgusting. In fact, many people think it's okay, but they just don't say anything.

In this novel, is the power of individuals greater than that of the army?

Damn you are so beautiful. I will tell you the truth. What you have written in the latest chapters is half of the rebellion. Please delete my comment.

The setting is really good, and the whole world framework is complete, but there are many pitfalls. And it has the same problem as the old book. It started to develop in an inexplicable direction in the middle and later stages. In the beginning, Devouring Goldfinger was good, but after acquiring various upgraded talents in the mid-term, it started to get out of control. The talents that were supposed to be added as a supplement, mainly turned against customers, affecting the development of the plot, giving people a depressing feeling that the protagonist cannot control the situation. Recently, the Beimang War that was supposed to be ignited has become a bit of a slapstick affair. Most of the preparations for the Demon Sealing List turned out to be something belonging to an ancestral witch. After that, the ancestral witch easily took away the key Seal of Death, and the entire villain's strength plummeted. This love affair is a real failure, making all female characters homogeneous, and the originally stylish novel becomes very nonsensical.

Up to now, I am afraid that it is not just the characters in the novel who have rebelled, but real readers. What is this twist about? You should also read it yourself, the plot twist is not rigid and the plot is forcibly arranged. If you don't want people to continue reading, just say so.

The pig's feet are somewhat seriously ill 😎

Weird, talented, surnamed Xia. This vest is so easy to guess...

After seeing Chapter 33, I couldn't help myself and came to post a chat. I think both the plot setting and the general world view presented above are pretty good. It doesn't matter if there are occasional descriptions by young writers, as they won't affect the viewing experience. But starting from meeting the person the protagonist liked in his previous life outside the city, everything is quite strange. If you want to say what methods others used to make the protagonist see the person he likes, at least let me remind you, it is not at all. What is written is that the protagonist feels that someone has deliberately set up a person he liked in his previous life. It is very speechless. No matter whether this plot will happen or not, it feels like superfluous. The second is Qilin Pavilion Climbing the Tower, which is too pretentious. Xiaobai's words and inner drama suddenly become more and more abrupt, and it is very abrupt. Even if the relationship was very good before, it has deteriorated for some reason, and there are no descriptive words. After the show is over, the protagonist comes to play "Maybe their relationship was not so bad before." The abruptness has been caused, and the same is true for the old palace maid. The protagonist's trial is over, the author does not leave any foreshadowing, and then directly transforms into the image of a master, which is abrupt. Climbing the stairs is just as easy as climbing up the stairs. The difficulty is too ridiculous. In a place where martial arts has not been described at all, there are suddenly strange difficulties in climbing up the stairs. It is so abrupt that it makes people feel like they are watching Mao Ni's Academy Climbing Up the Stairs, but there is a different style in front of you. I don't know if the author is a newbie (I think not according to book friends). I think if the author has another book, he can just write it according to the previous feeling. The plot and world view are laid out normally. A more literary approach will be mixed with more emotional factors, which is not suitable for writing about the power set and the personal world. It makes people feel like "I have been practicing for many years and can destroy the world, and then you tell me that the person I love doesn't love me, and I want to die." The strange phenomenon. Just sauce.

Brother Shui, don't let it go unfinished. People compete for a breath of air, and Buddhas compete for a stick of incense!

Whose vest is this? Cut water?

The winter hunt came as scheduled within a few days, but for some unknown reason, after a heavy snowfall, the queen mother in the palace suddenly suffered from typhoid fever and was unable to attend the ceremony. Instead, she sent a young lady from the Northern Dream Family to accompany the third prince. With a "snap" sound, the snow on the pines and cypresses fell down, startling a squirrel to run deep into the forest. In the distance, as the wheels rolled over, two deep tracks were left on the flat snow, and carriages carrying dignitaries drove into this place Why didn't you participate in the winter hunt in person? Is the girl surnamed Meng born like this, or is it another calculation... Thoughts were flying in his mind, but there was no abnormality on Xia Yan's face. As if sensing Xia Yan's gaze, the woman surnamed Meng also looked sideways at Xia Yan and smiled politely. This smile made two dimples appear on her face, and made Xia Yan look forward again. However, the vigilance in my heart became even heavier: it was so similar, it completely overlapped with the "little fish" in his memory or fantasy, as if his dream had come true, giving people a dreamy feeling But before Xia Yan could ponder for a long time, Bai Suli reminded him, "If there is an assassin who will be smarter later, don't die." Listening to the cold voice as always, Xia Yan responded with a smile: "With Qingmei's concern, I can't bear to die~" Listening to the frivolous words, she glared at him with charming eyes and said, "Don't think too much, I'm just afraid of missing the important event of the queen." "Yeah, okay, okay..." While chatting with Bai Qingmei, the winter hunting land has arrived!