Spiritual Energy Revived but Warhammer

After reading dozens of chapters, I also thought about the unimagined road when reading the Warhammer story. It was a good idea. As long as the seeds of Chinese civilization are brought to the 40k universe, the evil gods in the subspace will not be so arrogant. After all, God also wants to talk about KPI here. In addition, the author's writing style really needs to be improved. I often can't understand who the enemy is, who the companions are, or even what the protagonist is doing, or who is doing it. Maybe it's because many paragraphs and sentences lack subjects. For those who like to study, it may be understandable, but most readers are not like this.

I feel the writing is quite good. New Warhammer books are rare. Come on, author. There are too few to read. :-D

Oh, I found something, a wild Warhammer fan, let's sneak up on him

Not bad, the author next door dares to directly invite earthlings from the ordinary universe as players to the Warhammer universe. I don't know how he dares to write it. I'm really not afraid. He will be corrupted if he brings him here.

If the author really can't do it, just remove half of the subspace origin, don't mention it in the protagonist, otherwise someone will definitely come out and scold you for suppressing your combat power.

I want to see Angron without nails

Are there any of these

Author, go to Station B and read the original works about the Forbidden Army. There are only a few books in total. The Forbidden Army is really not what you wrote! If you don't know how to write about these corncobs, it's better to write them as cats than as miscellaneous soldiers trying to hide their skins! Recommended original works: "Lord of Man", "The Emperor's Hands", "Blood Games", "The Teaching Power", "Waldo: The Beginning of the Empire" (Several problems in your article: The Imperial Guards are not afraid of Malcador, the Imperial Guards Diocletian almost cursed Malcador directly; the Imperial Guards are not afraid , unless the Emperor is threatened; the Custodes cannot be corrupted. Draconian directly stated that it is better to wait for the heat death of the universe to corrupt the Custodes... You will know this after watching the Lord of Mankind (In addition, the Custodes do not have the honorific title "Master" among them. When they call Waldo, they call "Commander"

I was a little confused, why didn't the male protagonist tell the emperor everything he knew, instead of hiding it clumsily? Why is the Emperor not curious about the content of mind reading but not paying much attention to it? The male protagonist also respects the emperor very much.

The overall rhythm is sloppy, and I ate both ends, but in the end I didn't get any heat.

When I started writing about Warhammer, I thought it was okay, but when I wrote about the Earth for a long time, it was so foggy that I really couldn't stand it.

Overall, after reading all the way, the most poisonous thing about this book is that the protagonist's strength is too slow to improve. He is obviously not inferior to anyone, but anyone can step on him, and there are too many crises around him. The protagonist is not dead just because he is the protagonist. In short, it is a abuse of mainstream novels.

Sure enough, I sent it, but the direction after it was put on the shelf was wrong. It was basically impossible to tell what I wanted to write. Most of them came for Warhammer, so you have no idea at all. Or if you want to write a new book about Warhammer, why don't you reset this one. Focus on writing about Hammer instead of thinking about going back to your hometown to play operations. If you write other suggestions, I'll complete the outline and don't make all the mistakes.

You did a good job. I want to see Kor Phalun and die tragically on the spot.

Nothing to scold you. The early pacing is too slow. Start with Warhammer and focus on the Warhammer line. It's better to catch readers this way. The front is okay but the back is too messy.

The author is forcibly suppressing the battle and suppressing IQ

Save Lorgar, save Curze and Kill King, they are really unlucky. Magical Pony should be able to call his father at this time, why doesn't the protagonist call him?

What is the latest piece of bird feathers that has been published?

How long will it take to ascend? I hit a hammer here and a stick here and there, writing whatever I thought of, and there were a few inexplicable chapters. This has been a trend before, and the transitions were very abrupt.

Loyalty～

😨I recommended this book to others, so I'm sending it here. Can't I still write it if I remove the chapters about the protagonist's world? Everyone only watches Warhammer for Big Brother and Salvation. Are you giving up now?

Let me talk about my feelings after reading this book. The advantage of this book is that it is quite creative. In addition, it is based on the theme of Warhammer 40k, so it can attract some related fans to read it. However, it has many shortcomings, and some of them are very fatal shortcomings. First, the writing is not good, and there are a lot of typos and incorrect sentences, which greatly affects the viewing. 2. Suppressing the protagonist's combat power. First, it is said that the protagonist has half of the subspace essence, and then the performance is indeed very weak, and the combat power is still very slow to increase. 3. The plot has no main plot, just a crow in the east and a stick in the west. 4. There is no sense of security. The protagonist's system is affected by his own creation, which almost kills him. At the same time, from time to time, the protagonist's creation brings some trouble to the protagonist, and it is not over. This is a big poisonous point. Summary: This is a youthful novel with a novel subject matter but poor writing skills and a stream of consciousness about an abusive protagonist.

When will you write about Warhammer and the protagonist? The latest updates are all other stories.

The update is too slow, how can we do big things in 2 chapters a day! ?

What do you plan to write about in your new book? I have an idea that the priests of the Adeptus Mechanicus have arrived in a place similar to Zaun in League of Legends. Because he captured a large group of people as servitors, he fought with the local heroes and false gods.

The youth of the Empire have long faced the corruption of Slaanesh. Inquisition, open the door! Made him loyal

The author can completely reset this book and change the world of the protagonist. I really like this book, especially when the evil god of capital enslaves the devil.

Are you the author of the novel "I am the Emperor of Man"?

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