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The tentative heroines are as follows.

This is my first time meeting Minnie

It's very common. Does a time traveler with memories of his past life still care about a mother who has been hiding from him for 8 years? Even though I had already left him far away, I have never understood why an adult of several decades would care so much about the parents of that body when he takes his body with his memories. After reading a few chapters, it felt very average.

Huang Lizhi

Minnie

Instead of writing a lot of beautiful and good-natured heroines, I focused on the most unattractive Minnie who also had a ruined house.

Huang Lizhi

I have no feelings for Minnie. I don't mind if I don't like it, but I respect the author's preferences. But can Minnie's role be reduced or add more scenes to other characters? It's really boring to see a male protagonist and a female protagonist who has no feelings.

The author needs to improve his appreciation of women's beauty. Is Minnie beautiful? ? I can't appreciate it. If you can pick three female protagonists and bring the characters to life, it will be better than writing a bunch of women.

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It can only be said that readers now only know a few idols, so the heroines in the current environment are just cabbage, Girls' Generation and Bunny Gas. The author can write Minnie as the heroine, which is really a way to generate love.

The author should change his approach in the next book. I can't read it at the beginning. You write too detailedly. You are the beginning of a novel, leaving room for the reader's imagination. Don't fill the reader's mind with words. When you write the protagonist, you even write down the clothes and buttons he wears. Why not just write down what kind of underwear he is wearing, what brand, and what material he is wearing?

This is the first time I saw someone write about pink mouse😰

Since the heroine doesn't have Kang Seulgi or Hirai Momo... It's so scary. 🤔

It's hard not to love Minnie, the daughter of a real rich family, and the hard-working Lychee