Konoha: Starting from Meeting Kaguya Otsutsuki

There are many contradictions in the foreword and the afterword, and the level of changing perspectives also needs to be improved. Another question is whether this book has a single heroine? It's open to discussion, I think it's nothing to be served by a clone. The problem is that these two clones have independent consciousness and never merge. They are more like clones. The characters are also quite impressive.

By the way, Naruto has two filial sons, one is the Six Paths Sage Hagoromo, and the other is the weasel Uchiha Itachi. A person who kills his brother and his mother, if Kaguya is not immortal, will definitely achieve the achievement of matricide. Even if he fails to kill his mother, he will be imprisoned for a thousand years, let go for a while, and continue to be imprisoned. The other one, for a group of outsiders, killed his father, mother, and annihilated the clan, trying to change his younger brother's will to become a Konoha like himself🐶, he is really a filial son

Let's just kill Jiraiya and Naruto directly, they are too much in the way, and Konoha can be leveled. Since you are with Kaguya, it is an excellent choice to recycle chakra and develop technology and natural energy. Putting Kaguya to sleep again would be even better.

Ever since the male protagonist tested Kaguya, the perception has dropped significantly. The male protagonist has a greasy feeling, pretending to be a child, and feels like the pirate Momonosuke.

The protagonist of this book is a real trumped-up character, not the kind who is manipulated by Kaguya and suppressed by the protagonist.

To sum up: the male protagonist is Kaguya's Teletubbies

If you do this, almost no one will read it. If you don't write about pig's feet, what's the point of using bare ink and supporting characters? You don't need to write too many other novels.

I read Chapter 120. To be honest, I was confused. Does this book need you as the protagonist?

I can only say that it is quite strange. There is too little description of the interaction between the protagonist's personality and Kaguya, and there are too many plots of other characters, which made it impossible for me to empathize with the protagonist. Kaguya's feelings are traceable, but the protagonist's feelings are more like Stockholm or faked under the pressure of Kaguya. Come on, the protagonist has not really done anything that can be called a villain's charm. He is more like a villain who constantly whitewashes his bad behavior and puts himself in an innocent position, or is not aware of his bad behavior at all. This is what makes people feel the worst and makes him lack of charm. I don't know what kind of story the author wants to write. There are no obvious loopholes in the plot. It is very novel, but it is not exciting. I can't appreciate the character of the protagonist, so I left it. If the author just wanted to write such a story, it would be quite successful. Of course, this is all my personal opinion.

A batch of people are set to pull together, and the ashes and ashes can't be killed in seconds? You are kidding! Obito will die if he has the power of six paths! Withdrew

When Wuying discovers that the protagonist has white eyes and is not a caged bird, why don't he take it directly and put aside the treatment?

I finished reading Chapter 200 in one night. It's so cool that the protagonist can kill the resurrected people. The reincarnation of the dirty land is a big bug. He died and lived again. I was so sick when I watched Naruto! I just feel that Tsunade is so pitiful, so pitiful.

I don't understand why Obito was killed so suddenly. Why did the previous chapter describe Obito's activities so much? Why not write more about the daily life of pig's feet?

When writing a fanfic, you should complete the existing setting of the original work, rather than ignore the original setting and make your own way. The setting established by the original author cannot be changed. If you want to change it, why not create your own worldview?

Don't be too exaggerated in terms of combat. Kaguya is really awesome in terms of anime performance; she only has strength and no skills.

Isn't this the tattoo replacement in Boruto?

This is a perverted book that can easily affect an individual's way of thinking about right and wrong. I do not recommend reading this book if you are under the age of 28, and I do not recommend reading it if you are inexperienced. It will distort your outlook on life. If you have a ghost in your heart, you may actually become a ghost after reading it!

Using Yukito's body to release the ashes of a comrade is really awesome

I have read so many Naruto fanfics, large and small, and based on the plot, you are really ranked in the top three. I don't know why no one follows it. Maybe it's because the protagonist really didn't have much role in the early stage?

What should I say? Just read it if you like. Don't worry about what others say. The author will update slowly.

One chapter is updated in three days. Since the update has continued, I continued to read＼(`Δ')／

Good update🙂🙂