Naruto: the Hunting Career Begins in Konoha

Don't look at it, the strength of the perfect sage mode is still a jounin. The key is that his original strength is that of a jounin. In other words, the perfect sage mode does not bring any improvement and is a pure waste

I have to complain that the author is a ninja and doesn't know how to transform? Turning into a woman is more reasonable than stuffing two balloons with you, and the probability of being discovered by Jiraiya is lower, you are really amazing this author

How is your protagonist Jiraiya-sama talking?

The characterization is too petty. Jiraiya actually managed to escape from prison after being detained for only ten days. The Sandaime even came to the prison to put pressure on the protagonist for this trivial matter. And the plot design of the protagonist threatening and arresting Jiraiya through the safety of civilians is also very awkward.

The protagonist's IQ is insufficient. I don't know if it's the author's lack of IQ or what? If you don't have the strength, just lie down. What's there? I don't have the strength to touch porcelain Jiraiya. Even if you want to touch porcelain, call the security forces. Also, you are too young and not old enough to hold office at all. Acting like a fool.

A bit like what Ai wrote. Pure reliance on defense.

After looking at it carefully, there are actually some highlights in the design, including the prison system and event conflicts. But I have to complain about two problems. One is the lack of imagination. A ninja, or a jounin, can actually dress up as a woman instead of using the transformation technique? You're not even as good as 10-year-old Naruto. The second problem is that the penmanship is visibly poor, and the expression and description look very embarrassing.

This book should be called: To become a superman, I still care about what ordinary people think and don't become a citizen of the motherland.

I felt a little nauseous after watching it

It is indeed a daily guide to poison, vomit~

Konoha is a village, a village with extraordinary abilities. The Hokage has a bullshit system. He has a gross judicial system. He steals the village's top-secret information at every turn, breaks into the village chief's office from time to time, and occasionally assassinates the village chief on a whim... Throughout The entire Naruto series has a shitty deputy position, even the deputy village chief, they all use the Hokage assistant and the like. You are a text player, you can't even compare to people who draw comics, you don't know how to innovate, you can have a warden assistant, secretary, it feels like a completely insulting work to your IQ.

The most rubbish book written about prisons

Others are caught at the scene, but the good guys lure them into committing crimes.

It is poisonous and suppresses combat power. The copy card is used to copy the Rasengan. Waste. Perfect fairy mode. Or some so-called elite jounin. Do we have to wait until the perfect fairy mode plus kaleidoscope to reach the movie level? Eternal kaleidoscope plus immortal human body super shadow?

There's no one left to carry the prisoners in their cages, so why can't we get a car? It's so poisonous that it loses common sense.

The writing is really bad, especially the last few chapters. When Danzo snatched Shisui's eyes, he was led to discover that Danzo himself admitted that he had the ability to snatch bloodstains from fellow villagers. How could it happen without incident?

I'll give it 5 out of 10. Do you want cool writing or emotional writing? If you don't choose the Uchiha clan you will write better. It is acceptable for you to have a civilian steal Uchiha blood. Uchiha, why don't you write a cool article. Being like a grandson in front of three generations. It happened to be stuck in the system. This wouldn't work without a prison, right? Sharingan, what do you use it for?

Why do you all like crazy people? You just like the handsome ones, right?

The perfect sage mode can at least have a shadow, and the protagonist is so afraid of Yuan Fei, why does he chase after Jiraiya as soon as he leaves?

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the writing is inconsistent. The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good.

It's a brainless novel, a harem story about wisdom. I don't know why Kurenai likes him. He has never spoken to her before, and he has never helped her. He has not met her more than three times, and he has had conflicts with the higher-ups several times. Then Kurenai likes him for no reason, and accepting Teru Mimei is in the interest of the village. I don't say anything. Then he has to collect the spring, and Hinata probably wants to collect it too. It is a group of girls who have not reached the age of 12. The protagonist is six years older than Izumi, and Izumi has never seen it. I hope that the protagonist will not be hypocritical and set double standards in the future. They all follow feudal ideas and the weak can eat the strong. Don't ask Hinata to abolish slavery or anything like that, and keep the weak and the strong at a low level. It is completely regarded as a mindless and cool article. Maybe some people will read it.