I'm a Sandbox Gamer, Starting in the World of Strange Tales

You didn't write an outline. Just write whatever comes to mind. I said in my mind that I can tolerate a lot of nonsense. I am a newbie. But what's the use of the women in the Black Mountain series of stories you wrote earlier.

I just read the first few chapters and they were so disappointing. Such as that snail. At first I thought I was killed by a snail And I don't know if it was because it was too broken. Some of the shots turned very suddenly. For example, Cultivation and the previous chapter. Reading one chapter alone is nothing, but reading them all together feels like a section is missing in the middle.

I'm speechless. I have so many descriptions in my mind 🥱 I just don't get into the topic. Don't waste your patience 😅 Don't be a chatterbox even if you are a ghost 🤫

After reading most of one chapter, it was just trivial, and the key points of the plot were interspersed with it, so I couldn't remember it at all. Author, it's very serious for you to destroy the collection like this.

Vulgar and pornographic? Slander, naked slander.

To be honest, I don't really trust the author anymore. The author has been reading for countless books. Every time I read it, I just like it, and the updates are random.

Generally speaking, I really like the setting of this novel There are some small problems One is the punctuation marks. It may be a problem with the author's typing tools. I feel that the punctuation marks are very awkward The other is the character of the protagonist. I feel that the author is a bit too deliberate. I think the description of the character only needs the author to know this character when writing and write according to this character. Occasionally a little foil is fine, but the author has been focusing on describing the protagonist's personality, which feels a bit awkward. And it feels a bit watery Secondly, the three elements of the novel are environment, characters, and storyline. This mainly depends on the author describing the story that happened in his imagination, and the author gives the impression that I have finished thinking about it and started to express my feelings about the story. , Many of them are the subjective views of the author, resulting in very few descriptions of the three elements of the novel It just gives people a feeling The previous story has not been developed yet, so why is it the next one? Who is this character? It is inexplicable when he comes out, and he disappears inexplicably Where is this, and what did the protagonist do? It feels like something However, the author's world view is quite large and the setting is quite good. However, the setting of the novel is mainly discovered bit by bit during the development. The setting written by the author in the first few chapters is enough for other novels to write more than 100 chapters before they are released, so it gives people a feeling that the whole novel is set

After reading Chapter 15, it was interesting to use Sandbox Goldfinger from the ghost's perspective. I just wish there were less "psychological descriptions", but the progress was slow. I was confused and anxious.

I read it from the author's skill tree book, I hope the author can become popular

There are too many typos and incorrect sentences, which greatly affects the reading experience.