I'm a Sandbox Gamer, Starting in the World of Strange Tales

You didn't even write an outline, did you? You just wrote whatever came to mind. I can tolerate the rambling inner monologues at the beginning, you're a newbie, after all. But what was the point of the woman in the Black Mountain series you wrote about earlier?

I only read the first few chapters, and they were too fragmented. For example, the snail. At first, I thought he was killed by the snail. Also, perhaps because the scenes are too fragmented, some transitions are quite abrupt. For example, the cultivation scene and the previous chapter. Reading a single chapter isn't so bad, but reading them together feels like a section is missing.

Speechless. So much internal monologue 🥱 Just rambling on and on without getting to the point. Don't wear me down. 😅 Even a ghost shouldn't be a chatterbox! 🤫

I read most of a chapter and it's all trivial stuff; the important plot points are interspersed throughout, and I can't remember any of them. Author, you're going to seriously lose followers if you keep doing this.

Vulgarity and pornography? That's slander, blatant slander!

To be honest, I don't really trust authors anymore. They've abandoned so many books already. Every time I get into a book, it gets abandoned, and updates are sporadic.

Overall, I quite like the setting of this novel. There are just a few minor issues. One issue is the punctuation. Perhaps it's due to the typing tool the author used, but the punctuation looks awkward. Another issue is the protagonist's personality. It feels like the author went overboard with it.

Having reached chapter 15, the use of a sandbox-style cheat system from the ghost's perspective is quite interesting. I just wish there were less "psychological descriptions," as the pacing is so slow, it's frustrating and making me increasingly impatient.

I started with the author's skill tree book; I hope the author becomes very popular.

There are too many typos and grammatical errors, which greatly affects the reading experience.