Cyberpunk: Against Night City

I came purely because of the single heroine Lucy. There are daily sweet plots. I can grasp it in the early stage, but it gradually decreases in the later stage. There is a lot of career content, which makes me uncomfortable to watch. As for the original character, it can also be a sweet story in the early stage. In the middle and late stage, it seems like a tool man, becoming the protagonist's check and balance, guessing the attitude of other companies. I can't say whether it is good or not. The first part is very suitable for me.

This book is too poisonous. You can do everything easily by conquering Yukihime Arasaka, but you give up your current advantages and have a stupid protagonist. People write about Cyber ​​2077 because the protagonist comes from the bottom of society, and it's okay for you to rebel against the company. Author, what did you want to express by writing this book? The protagonist comes from an upper-middle-class background and then ruins his job?

Emmmm, I personally feel that the audience of 2077 may be some people who prefer someone who breaks the oppression of that era, or witnesses the unique characteristics of 2077 that era and obeys the trend of the times. Maybe maybe everyone doesn't like looking after children? ? PS: The protagonist's name is good in the second grade, really good in the second grade, and also good in the second grade (repeat important things three times)

I took a look at my income today, last month's manuscript fee was 13.66 Yuan 😭This is the first time I've seen money back after writing a book for several months Although it's not much, it's enough for me to buy a piece of fried rice noodles I'm happy 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Is anyone reading what I wrote? Please give me some feedback. This standalone machine is so ridiculous.

Chapter 16: Poisonous Hair. It turns out that there are authors these days who don't like the number of readers. An original character with an unknown function (Yukihime Arasaka), a fun-loving Goldfinger (Alien Dragon), a schizophrenic protagonist (he just said he wanted to change the world to make the grassroots people live a better life, but turned around and beat up a woman who ran to the side to avoid bullets, while others made defensive gestures. Even if they don't behave well, they have to destroy the other party, and then molest the stranger who they just met for five minutes, and what exactly did Lucy, a stranger to the protagonist, do? She just glanced at the protagonist and scanned her, and was beaten by the protagonist, had tens of thousands of euros of prosthetic body destroyed, and was sexually harassed and threatened by the protagonist's hands. It's really strange that the protagonist is "killing decisively")

I read one chapter and gave up. The biggest reason was the punctuation. There was no colon after "said", it was just "", and there was no period at the end of the sentence. It made my brain hurt. After reading more than a hundred chapters, it still looked like this.

I haven't watched it yet, but when I saw Arasaka Yukihime, I couldn't help it, hahahaha 🙂

Every time I see the name of this protagonist, I instantly get into drama. . .

This book is coming to an end soon, and I don't know what to write for the next one. Is it better to write about fairy tales or science fiction? This is a problem, a big problem😂 Although for me, whatever I write is likely to look like a ball TT, it's numb.

The only person whom Night City admires the most is Lai Xuan...

Brothers, I sent it, it's completely cool this time 😂

Alas, why can't I understand? Is this male protagonist a time traveler or a local?

Since ancient times, green plums have been defeated by the sky. Wuwuwuwu, Xue Ji is so miserable.

Although the fan fiction is very good, I don't really like the author's random creation of characters because it's easy to jump around.

"Want the best of both worlds? Then you've come to the wrong place." This may not be a problem at all in games or anime, but it is a big problem only in fan fiction. The author wrote a long explanation of the connotation of cyberpunk in the preface, but it is nonsense to most fan readers. Most of the people who come to read cyberpunk fan fiction come from games and anime. For them (including me), the most basic requirement to read cyberpunk fan fiction is a happy enough ending, an ending that gets the best of both worlds, an ending that both wants and needs. You might say that would not be "cyberpunk" enough, but in fact, how many people read fan fiction because they are interested in the inner world view of cyberpunk? For most people, changing the name of the game to "V Zhentian Only Lives for 30 Days" or changing the name of the anime to "David Was Trampled to Death" will not affect them at all when searching for novels with this name... The world view is very important for originality, but the most important thing in fan fiction is the people. The above is a book review I wrote after reading the author's preface and not reading a word of the text. If there is any discrepancy between what I said and what the author wrote later, it's my question. After all, I haven't read a word. If you have any opinions, please feel free to discuss

After reading ten chapters, I don't know what it is about. There is no main plot, emmmmm. The main character is still a little kid and I don't feel involved at all.

There are so few people who write this. I looked through several novel softwares but couldn't find a few. I finally found one that has a lot of words and is good-looking. It's not easy 😢 Come on, author, it's very good-looking! ! ! !

The protagonist's behavior is very childish, and it would be more consistent with his behavior without the background of time travel.

Is there a V to give a better ending? There is no book club.

I think the technology in No Man's Sky is pretty good, you can try adding it, haha ​​😃

There are too many modal particles. After you said, your writing is a bit rigorous. Relaxing can easily improve the reading experience.

Speaking of poison, the main character's name is very poisonous The main character also likes Lucy when he sees her. The main character wants to change the world and doesn't accept Aramoto. Then when he sees Lucy, he is fascinated again and kisses and hugs her when they meet. It's a bit too poisonous.

Let me tell you, this rotten world can only be unified.

It's gone. It's not to my liking. I can't stand it anymore.

The High Table in Night City secretly rules the dark forces in Night City, Arasaka, Military Technology, and Blue Eyes all have no pimps because of their existence. Beggars in Night City, doctors (Bao Shilaowei), taxi drivers, and even some NCPD, company dogs secretly They are all members of the High Table. The protagonist used the system to single-handedly create this dark force that caused headaches and troubles for all giant companies including Saburo Arasaka. He also created a twin brother for Johnny Silverhand, the god of death, John Wick. How do you feel that if you write well, you can achieve good results?

After reading 3 chapters, the more I read, the more anxious I become.